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Jose-Ramiro β Mahr, Bleet and Minerva
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Published: 2011-05-02 05:18:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 14404; Favourites: 130; Downloads: 109
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A little beach comic starring Mahr and Bleet, guest starring Minerva Mink, with Alvin Seville and Brittany Miller in cameos.Related content
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- Hy guys!Valerie are on the bedroom,puting her outfit!Well,how are you both today?
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Alvin- Cool, thanks. Heh, you should have seen Simon's face when he saw Valerie's photo.
Theodore- Yes, he almost fainted.
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- Yeah!I can imagine the scene!
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Alvin- Too bad we couldn't take a picture of his face.
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- Well,I can unterstand his reaction.At last,a babe like Valerie isnΒ΄t find in any corner!
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Alvin- Tell me about it. *grins and then shakes his head* I almost day-dreamed again.
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- I can understand this,dude!
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(Well,now you do the next step,swith Valerie in a sexy outfit,and the reaction of the AlvinΒ΄s brother seeing her. 
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Valerie enters the room wearing nothing but a very sexy red bikini. Theodore blushes and gets a very shy smile while Alvin closes his eyes and counts up to ten to control himself.
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- Hy,Val!This is Teodore! - say I doing a gesture to the reddish chipmunk.
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Val- Hi, Theodore. *smiles* You're very cute.
Theo- T-thanks, Miss Valerie... glad to meet you. *shy smile*
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- Well my dear,begin the AlvinΒ΄s lesson!
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Val *nods* Okay, Alvin, for this lesson, I'll do a seductive dance in front of you. You can smile or praise me, but no touching or overdoing the flirting.
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- Well Theodore,as you are here only like a visitor,enjoy the show!
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Theodore nods.
Val does her sexy dancing; Alvin is doing a major effort to hold himself. Theodore enjoys it too, but since he's too shy, he stays frozen on the spot.
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- Hey dude,are you okay?
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Theo- J-just getting used to her, that's all.
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- No problem dude!Keep going!
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Val continues dancing. Theodore is now a bit more used while Alvin, while still in control, is visibly sweating and blushing.
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- You both are going very well!Congratulations!
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Theo- Heh, thanks.
Bleet arrives at that moment.
Bleet- Oh... I'm interrupting?
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- No problem,dude!Stay,and enjoy the show you too!
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Bleet *sits down* Thanks... but, and I mean no offense to Val, I... don't find this 'show' too entertaining. *chuckles* I love Mahr so much that other girls, even as sexy as Valerie here, don't 'impress' me that much.
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- I know,Bleet.However,the main purpose all this,is make Alvin improve his self-control.
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Bleet- I think it's working.
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- Thanks!At last Alvin put himself in a big trouble after he drool by Minerva Mink on the wrong moment. 
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Bleet *nodding* I just came from Mahr's place; she's doing some strength training today.
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Mahr is using special weights that Bleet invented for her; basically, they add more weight as she gets stronger.
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- And Britanny,how she are going?
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Theodore- Last time I saw her, she was practicing in a gym.
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At a local gym, Brittany knocks out a very large, muscular guy. She gets general cheering from everyone.
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- Well,at you oppinion,she are only training hard,or look like obssessed?
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Theodore- Not obsessed; actually, it seems to be enjoying it.
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Brittany *posing on top of her fallen opponent* Heh, I really enjoy this.
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- Is good know this! 
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Theodore *nods* I wonder how he'll react in front of her.
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- Yeah!Guys like him many times feel embarrassing,when are in front a very pretty girl!
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(Do you know some slang similar to nerd,but in no so offensive? 
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Bleet- Yes, we nerds, geeks and brainiacs sometimes don't know how to react in front of a girl because we usually have little social skills.
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(Brainiac is one of Superman's main enemies, but, over time, his name has become another word for a very smart person, and not so offensive; 'geek' is similar to nerd)
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- Well,I think that Valerie can help him with this problem.
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(Thanks by information,dude! 
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Bleet- I guess you're right.
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(YW)
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- So,how are you,dude?
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Alvin- I think I'm ready for my lesson.
Simon- I'm a bit nervous; not used to meeting super models... or girls as pretty as super models.
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- Yeah!Your training are in a advenced level,Alvin! Next,I say to Simon:
- Relax dude!Valerie isnΒ΄t only gorgeous:she also is very kind and sweet!You havenΒ΄t nothing to fear!
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Simon- It's not fear; it's shyness.
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- CΒ΄mom,dude!Val will be good with you! 
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Val then enters the room, dressed as a sexy teacher. Alvin blushes hard, yet resists, while Simon is stunned and gets frozen on the spot.
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- Hey dude,are you okay?
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Simon *reacting* I've had dreams like this. *blushing*
Alvin chuckles a bit; being a brainy student, it's obvious Simon fantasizes about sexy teachers and smart-looking women.
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Valerie *at you* So... you wanna learn a lesson? *seductive eyes*
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- With all sure,Val!
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Alvin *blushing* I'm... I'm holding back...
Simon *blushing* Uh... eh... I... well... my, what a sexy voice she has... *gasps* Sorry, sorry, sorry, I didn't mean to say it out loud!
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- No problem,Valerie arenΒ΄t upset with this!IsnΒ΄t it,darling?
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Val *smiles+ No, not at all.
Simon is even redder than Alvin now; Valerie's voice is driving him crazy.
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