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Published: 2006-05-28 04:39:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Cold fingers snap a tune
And rapid into a fall to the grass
Veins above torn aid over the wake of frost
Whisper to laugh and stare way towards smirks
Still gather flurrying withering the lesion creators
The melody defeated into the light

Gather mound the lamp higher
And sorcerer squirted onto the hostage
Scar and feather to tumble molester solemn that.
Sausage plant now there.
Vanishing groin to sleeves.
Rest on the spot
Will you heard swift none moans?
I swerved.
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Comments: 7

emeraldrhino [2006-06-04 01:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Are you trying to confuse me? *aaaackk!* I need punctuation or to be walked through this maybe. My tongue doesn't want to do it
I can't do this:
And rapid into a fall to the grass
*says it again and her tongue falls right out*
You go record yourself reading this- huh, uuuhhhh- just reading it Then I can HEAR the way it's supposed to be read... *looks commanding even with no tongue* yeah, GO!

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JosephExplosive In reply to emeraldrhino [2006-06-05 11:44:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe mean. aah some of the reason for that may be because I based a lot of these on cliches and changed the word slightly by rhyming or other... so your brain expects to read a cliche that you've read many times before (often subconsciously) but it is stopped by the displacement of invasive alien lighterature.
Goal succeeded!!!!! You have to read word for word rather than scan lines (which is how we read). Then you will find it easy to read. Literal dissonance.

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emeraldrhino In reply to JosephExplosive [2006-06-05 12:02:10 +0000 UTC]

YOU IMPLANTED ALIENS IN MY BRAIN VIA POETRY???!!! *pouts* One of my friends wrote me a letter with the first and last letters of the words correct but all of the middle letters were jumbled. Your brain still registers it because it EXPECTS for the word to be correct. FKN aliens...

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JosephExplosive In reply to emeraldrhino [2006-06-07 10:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Lol.
You ever tried reading upside down or texting upside down? Or even perpendicular/diagonally? It's wierd. I can do it quite fluently now... comes in handy occasionally.

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emeraldrhino In reply to JosephExplosive [2006-06-08 03:34:00 +0000 UTC]

I can draw better upside down than I can right side up! It stimulates your *pauses to think* right brain!
I'm ginog to try to raed semonihtg usdpie dwon!

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zioseberrun [2006-05-29 19:15:44 +0000 UTC]

this is very disjointed and enjoyable.

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JosephExplosive In reply to zioseberrun [2006-05-29 21:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man. appreciated

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