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Published: 2006-04-05 00:45:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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The gum clinging to my shoesSuddenly splinters and shatters
In a blink of an eye this ice
Shielded my souls from contamination and unwanted bondage
The hidden properties contained within this virus
Yield certain possibilities
Scattering as a chauvinistic trespasser
However my invader is most welcome.
Drool like folding grass stains into the fog and mist.
Seek the cheek
Sense me drain.
I have fallen into thick puddles of transparency
Glossy and rounded.
Disappear darkness
Strain against firm newcomers.
Let them fit in.
Freeze the uneducated.
Spread,
Slay hypnotic hypothermia.
It belongs to the traitors
We are eternity
Frozen in time
Free at the mercy of heat
Gum be lateral
Rasping opposite the grain
Subzero answers
Gift from the chill
Clammy foster fearless still flying
Gradient benile and sacred
Scorning xylophone drops and mutates
Hug the haunted.
Spool.
Be loose and flaunting.
Gracious.
Comments: 5
wesbond [2006-04-19 00:52:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow, excellent poem, great imagery. I love this line, "Scorning xylophone drops and mutates." What do the words benile and atacky mean?
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JosephExplosive In reply to wesbond [2006-04-27 10:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Hey sorry about late reply... internet has been down.
Thanks a lot for reading! ...and your comments
Atacky is a cheesy inflection (like 90% of my poem names) of attack and tacky... yeah.
Benile... I dunno. sounds came out and I wrote them down However I think my subconscious was thinking 'benign'. Didn't actually bother checking to see whether it was actually a word lol.
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wesbond In reply to JosephExplosive [2006-04-27 18:39:58 +0000 UTC]
Lol that's very interesting and creative. I like your style.
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blackdav666 [2006-04-05 14:04:08 +0000 UTC]
really good piece of writing, enjoyed it.
please read some of my wor and see what you think??
Phil
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JosephExplosive In reply to blackdav666 [2006-04-07 00:29:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Phil!
I checked out your poetry...
Surreal... Original and obtuse imagery. Cool as. I like!
Joseph
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