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Published: 2010-06-06 03:22:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2266; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 336
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Well, here's Number 21's profile! Most of her info is in the pic itself, but I couldn't fit her personality in, so here it is:

She is a beautiful young lady (or at least designed that way) who feels a great sense of responsibility towards carrying out her father's duties as a bioengineer. Having inherited his wealth of knowledge and trust, she finds it no challenge. She cares for her "siblings", Nos. 1-20, and makes sure they are functioning properly. She also finds great pleasure in changing her own shape, whether by exploiting her elasticity to change, say, the length and style of her hair; or by using her core (the blue "tattoo") as a pump which can feed fluids inside her body, thus expanding it. This activity she pursues out of her own enjoyment when she is not developing the next generation of Marui numbers. She hopes to one day create a Marui number that can grow and change like a true human. Among her likes are ochazuke (her kind are of the "food=energy" mold), the Science Channel, and golf; among her dislikes, pseudoscience (which puts her at odds with Gloria as she cannot comprehend magic), having her core damaged (Dr. Marui's research is complicated and sometimes controversial, even though the Marui numbers prove such theories; thus, only a few people in the world besides her collectively know how to repair her), and anything offensive to her Eastern sensibilities.

Note: For those people who cannot read kanji/kana, her unofficial name is Nijuuichiko Marui, and she was created by one Dr. Marui.

Author's Note: I would also like some critique on how well written this character is. As in, is she something that could fit into a good story or is she a Mary-Sue-type, only good for quick shots and nothing else? Please leave some feedback on her design and construction. Thanks!
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Comments: 8

DandyAndy1989 [2010-07-16 21:04:27 +0000 UTC]

She was born three months and 10 days before me.

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Superjustinbros [2010-06-10 19:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess it's safe to say I like her design.

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josephstaleknight In reply to Superjustinbros [2010-06-10 23:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Sweet!

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Barkis1 [2010-06-06 04:06:58 +0000 UTC]

It could be done.

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josephstaleknight In reply to Barkis1 [2010-06-06 04:49:16 +0000 UTC]

I guess so. I just hope she doesn't come off as too perfect.

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Barkis1 In reply to josephstaleknight [2010-06-07 03:47:42 +0000 UTC]

So If your happy.

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josephstaleknight In reply to Barkis1 [2010-06-07 04:11:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy with it. I think she'll be a very interesting character.

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Barkis1 In reply to josephstaleknight [2010-06-08 01:02:01 +0000 UTC]

Agreed!

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