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Drawing the same characters for a series can get pretty boring at times so why not spice it up with a few more extra characters.You might've saw some of these new characters' names on the Kempo Map. Well, they're now a part of the list of kids in this series, yay!
I guess I should give a little bit of info about the plot of this series since it's no longer about the bite issue anymore.
2001, Chenkami, City AB, Tonoko. A town where people are split into two categories: The rich and the poor. There are 17 different neighborhoods at Tonoko and more than 50 possible attractions to visit. The richest neighborhood of them all is the Vintesta neighborhood while the poorest is the Kempo neighborhood. No place in the world is perfect, young boy of Kempo, Zylan learns this when him and his best friend, Mary were ganged up and attacked by some rich kids from Vintesta at the young age of 6. Many poor kids are always bullied and get their property stolen by the richer kids and teenagers at Tonoko. The Tonoko police have no care for the poor kids at all making it so that rich kids can always attack or even murder poor kids without ever being accused as guilty. The poor kids have lost hope against the rich kids and are too scared to leave their own neighborhoods. That was until some of these poor kids started to form groups. Groups that protected the poor from the rich and would always fight no matter how outnumbered or powerless they are against their opponents. These groups were called "FIGHT Groups". There are roughly about fifteen FIGHT Groups on all of Tonoko with each leader being very powerful. There are three FIGHT Groups in Kempo: The Cupcake Crew, the Plush Pals and the Twin Team. Young boy, Zylan's dream is to be a part of these amazing FIGHT Groups. Wanting to help other kids at the same position as him and stop the richer from attacking the poor, Zylan and Mary fight real hard together to become the greatest FIGHT group Tonoko has ever witnessed. A FIGHT Group so fearful that the rich kids shiver when hearing the name of this group and the poor kids cry out tears of joy when hearing the name. This is the beginning of Zylan and Mary's journey, their journey to FIGHT Together!
It took me a while to think of a new plot and after days of thinking, I've decided to come up with this plot. I hope you like it!
Anyways, let me discuss about these characters to you!
Anne Z. | Age: 12
Also on her way to become a part of one of Kempo's FIGHT Groups, Anne Z. is a very tough and confident girl. She'll make sure that nothing ever gets in her way no matter how tough or challenging these obstacles of life will be. She promised the other kids of Kempo that she will make the richer kids cry and bow down onto their knees. She wears these "gloves" made out of steel as if they were brass knuckles. She uses these gloves to go up against the rich kids and protect those in need. A very formidable girl.
Randy M. | Age: 14
A young boy who works on his running skills and exercises regularly, Randy M. is a fast and tough boy. He doesn't aim to be a part of a FIGHT Group, but he is indeed a tough young lad. He tries to protect his little sister, Olivia from being hurt in any way. He only helps those he knows. He doesn't really care about the people who he has no connection with. Whenever he goes to the park, most girls just walk up to him and say "Hi Randy~ <3". Randy usually just ignores them.
Olivia M. | Age: 9
A little girl who admires her older brother and wants to be just like him when she grows up, Olivia M. is a confident and forceful little girl. Olivia only admires her older bro and no one else. She's always protected and cared for by her bro and she wants to be just like him so she can have a turn protecting him instead. Randy always tells her not to push herself to be like him but Olivia just ignores him. Many rich kids laugh and spit on her but that's not enough to stop her. Olivia does whatever she can just to be as strong and amazing as her older bro.
Holly B. | Age: 16
One of the oldest yet a really weak kid, Holly B. is a polite and intelligent girl. She doesn't have any interest in being a part of any FIGHT Groups but she does take notes on the members to see how tough and skilled they are. Holly is one of the smartest kids in Kempo. The leaders of the three FIGHT Groups on Kempo would ask her to use her intelligence to help them or something like that. Yet Holly is very smart, she is a very weak child and can be really vulnerable to the rich kids. That's when the FIGHT Groups come over to help her.
Antonio V. | Age: 15
One of the richest kids from the Vintesta neighborhood and probably the most dangerous, Antonio V. is a very aggresive rich kid and feared by many poor kids. He shows no mercy to anyone, even to his closest friends or family members. If he doesn't get what he wants, he would go as far as stabbing young kids and even punching his parents with full force. He is a very strong kid and is even considered very tough and dangerous to FIGHT Groups. He always carries around a knife as a weapon to threaten and attack poor kids. It is said that one time, his best friend disagreed with his opinion once and that friend got his eye stabbed and gouged out by Antonio. He is considered the most dangerous kid on all of Tonoko.
Welp, that's it for now. I'll probably make more characters soon so stay tuned for that! Thanks for reading!
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Comments: 8
Freddyfazzbear101 In reply to Josh-S26 [2016-06-16 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for first comic.
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MrsLittletall [2016-06-15 17:41:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this reads like a plot to a shonen manga! Would me wonder if suggested to a manga magazine, if they would take it? I think, I already like Anne ^^ I always like the fist fighters.
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Josh-S26 In reply to MrsLittletall [2016-06-16 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]
Shonen manga!?! Naw, if I were making a plot for a Shonen manga, I would've went for something a lot more intense and dramatic XD This is merely just rich kids vs. poor kids. But hey, that's just me.
X3 I think a lot of the kids in this series are fist fighters actually but then again, I do try to make every kid unique in their own way so maybe not. But thanks! Anne was definitely somebody I had in mind at first when I decided to change this comic. I wanted to make a girl who had a lot of self-esteem and bravery and she popped out of nowhere XD
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MrsLittletall In reply to Josh-S26 [2016-06-16 06:04:01 +0000 UTC]
A lot of shonen manga have very easy concepts and get flashed out with the magazine. Uh, I don't know the english word... the person who is responsible for the mangaka and has to read their work and give them ideas and looks if it can be published. I think the story could be fleshed out in actual manga form with some work ^^
The characters who just flow naturally to you are normally the ones who are the best!
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Rapfl0w3r [2016-06-15 01:36:03 +0000 UTC]
For some weird reason I feel like the style changed somehow. Like really somehow. I can't put my finger on it.
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Josh-S26 In reply to Rapfl0w3r [2016-06-15 01:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the style changed up a bit but not drastically.
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