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JoshuaDunlop — Welcome to the League....

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Description My father never usually got me anything special for my birthday. We didn’t have much in common him and I, only thing we did have was pokemon battles. When i was a boy we would sit in front of the tv together, snuggled up on the sofa. the scent of beer on my father’s breath and cheese and onion crisps on mine. My mother would set up a small buffet on the coffee table and we would snack as we eagerly awaited the opening ceremony of the Pokemon League World Cup. We would watch all the games, my dad always cheering on the Scottish while both mum and me were rooting for the English Trainers. It was on my 17th Birthday that he really came through. Opening his card i could feel it was heavier than just paper, when i looked inside there were family tickets to the Pokemon League World Cup games. He had booked 3 weeks for us to go the Indigo Plateau and stay in a hotel to watch all the games. The World Cup had come to Kanto this year and i had never been so excited.

We finally got to the stadium after dropping our bags off at the hotel. It was huge, bigger than i remembered seeing it on TV. As we entered the building we scanned our passes on the turn styles and walked on through. Security was tight; Magneton and Electrode roamed the perimeter while guards with large Houndoom stood watching carefully. The roar of the crowd overpowered me as we entered the stadium bowl. Thousands of people filled the auditorium. We were in the water stadium and in the middle was a huge pool filled with floating platforms. On each side were two challenger podiums, it gave me shivers seeing them in real life. We found our seats which were surprisingly close. I could just about hear the thrum of the energy shield that protected the crowd from any rouge attacks.

Powerful spotlights spun around the arena and heavy music pulsed through the web of speakers covering the ceiling. Holograms of sponsors and adverts flicked across the water and around the central rig of giant TV screens. Behind us were enormous windows and more TV screens that stretched to the ceiling. It was dark outside and you could see the neon glow of the buildings nearby.

Suddenly it went dark and the crowds roar died as a echoing man’s voice came onto the speakers.
"It’s Time!" The echo drifted into silence.
"It’s Time" he spoke out once again.
"Are you ready!!" he cried.
The crowd cheered but the hush still remained.
"Let’s get ready... TO BATTLE!!!" .

Bass music rippled through me as if coming from all directions. The crowd erupted as two trainers came out of the starting doors and walked up onto the podiums. I didn’t know much about these trainers. the girl was petite with long blonde hair and blue eyes, and the guy looked like a rugby player with dark hair and eyes. The holograms flickered on with the words trainers get ready. They both pulled pokeball’s from their belts and put them in start up mode by pressing the buttons.

Two voices came onto the speakers, they were the announcers, i recognised them from the television.

"Welcome ladies and gentlemen to another exciting battle this evening. My name is Tom Woods" said Tom
"And I'm Phil Caring, are you excited about this one Tom?".
"Oh yes Phil, you know how i love the water field!".
"Well were looking to have a spectacular battle today Tom, the challengers are on their podiums awaiting the signal to start. We have 19 year old Lucy Chou, all the way from Sinnoh, known for her feminine touch in her battles" He said is a playful tone.
"That’s right Phil, she was one of the champions in the Beauty Contests am I right?".
"Your correct there Tom, and what a beauty she is" said Phil

"Well what about the guy here, Joshua Dunlop, what a trainer, took down the leader in Cerulean very quickly, the battle was only 10 minutes long!" said Tom
"Well he'll defiantly be at home in this field Tom".
"He will indeed Phil, let’s see how they both fair"

The signal started.

Red light.

Amber .

Green.

The competitors through their balls high over the pool. The balls opened and streams of red light poured from them, materialising into two Pokemon. One was a Raichu, a small electric Pokemon. The guy grinned as his Raichu looked back at him. The girl’s pokemon disappeared under the water, it was only when we saw the shape of a huge bluish grey snake like body emerge that we knew it was a Gyarados.

The first move was made by the girl, her voiced echoed on the speakers calling to her giant sea serpent.
“Tackle then Bite!" she called.
Everyone waited for the guy’s response but he just stood there.

The giant serpent turned in the water and headed right for the small rodent like pokemon. The white fins ripped through the water like a shark as it got closer and closer to its target.

Just before it struck a command was heard.
"Dodge, then Thunder!" he called the head of the enormous fish tore through the platform as the Raichu leapt high into the air quickly avoiding the jaws that slapped together with a loud clap. The Raichu then turned in the air, all its hairs on its back spiking up, then with out warning let a lightning bolt rip from its body straight towards the Gyarados. At the last second the Gyarados dived avoiding the full brunt of the attack, but you could still see it was shaken.

"What an opening, both pokemon quick to avoid each others attacks!" said Phil
"You said it Phil, this is proving to be a very interesting battle indeed!".

The girl looked worried as her face appeared on the big screen. The boys voice was heard once again.
"Quick attack, combined with Thunder shock Raichu!" The Raichu, crouched and then ran extremely fast from one podium to another, then to my amazement against the wall of the pools edge and shot right around the pool. The Gyarados resurfaced to see the Raichu launch itself, sparks jumping from its wet fur and collided with the side of its head.
"Gyarados! Come on girl, you can do this, Hyper Beam!" the girl screamed.
The crowd cheered as the Pokemon dived, then resurfaced triumphantly, letting out a giant beam of light. Amazingly the Raichu once again leaped, pushing the platform it was standing on way behind it, just dodging the attack as it demolished another platform just beneath it.... My heart was beating so hard i could feel it in the back of my throat. I looked at my dad. He turned to me and smiled, putting his arm around me he shouted over the roar of the arena. "Welcome to the League son, Welcome to the League!"
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Hope you like it, my rendition of a pokemon battle in evo style I put some sponsors in the back, but its just for show (I know i put myself in the story but what the heck )
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Comments: 472

JoshuaDunlop In reply to ??? [2009-08-21 08:13:08 +0000 UTC]

well in my world riachu have differnt amounts of zig zags on their tail due to maturity or dominance the more there are the more dominant the creature is. Thankyou tho glad you like it

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RonanDarksky In reply to ??? [2009-08-20 00:15:08 +0000 UTC]

I love the effect on the hyper beam. ^^

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to RonanDarksky [2009-08-20 09:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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GiganMaster In reply to ??? [2009-08-16 00:03:07 +0000 UTC]

lol, Nintendo adds in the background.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to GiganMaster [2009-08-16 11:16:16 +0000 UTC]

lol yep inside joke

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GiganMaster In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-16 16:28:47 +0000 UTC]

lol

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orionjd In reply to ??? [2009-08-12 20:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Dude. You are really good. I'm not an artist, but I like to go on here to see the amazing redesigns of some things like godzilla and pokemon, and I constantly look on your gallery for a new amazing piece of art. Your drawings and stories really give me chills, after growing up with pokemon and seeing you turn it into something older people can appreciate. Im only 16, but I am interested in the movie making business. If I ever do get to that point, I would be interested in getting some of your help creating the first pokemon live action film. I dont really know if you ever want to get anywhere with these, if theyre just a hobby, but they could very well take you to great heights, if they havent already.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to orionjd [2009-08-12 21:19:09 +0000 UTC]

yer i know what you mean, and thankyou very much im trying to get the rights to publish a book with my work in it, but its a cross the fingers jobby i would love to work on a live action film

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theamishpiscodemon In reply to ??? [2009-08-12 03:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Hot mate, absolutely hot. The colouring is marvelous and you've even gotten textures across through your technique. I'm really feeling the excitement from both the story and the sketch. You've captured this moment brilliantly and I applaud you. Marvelous work all round lad.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to theamishpiscodemon [2009-08-12 08:16:25 +0000 UTC]

iv very glad you like it thankyou very much

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NinjaJake In reply to ??? [2009-08-10 18:14:17 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT! That is so awesome!

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to NinjaJake [2009-08-11 12:47:16 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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NinjaJake In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-12 16:30:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Beetlebot In reply to ??? [2009-08-10 08:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Love those annoying ads you sneaked in there, they're everywhere these days.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Beetlebot [2009-08-10 08:09:19 +0000 UTC]

yep lol Companies like that have power over everything!

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Juptile In reply to ??? [2009-08-10 05:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow. McDonalds really gets everywhere, don't they? Even into the Pokemon world.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Juptile [2009-08-10 08:09:31 +0000 UTC]

lol yep

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TricksterBlueJay In reply to ??? [2009-08-09 17:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Impresive!
You got me very excited with the story, like if I was really watching the battle. I love the way you always put a background story to your pokemon pics, it feels like you've actually seen the cratures. Bravo!

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to TricksterBlueJay [2009-08-09 23:45:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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mizumomochi In reply to ??? [2009-08-08 00:35:24 +0000 UTC]

so cool and awesme ~_~

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to mizumomochi [2009-08-08 10:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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mizumomochi In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-08 16:17:38 +0000 UTC]

np

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BrunetteMenolly In reply to ??? [2009-08-07 20:23:51 +0000 UTC]

The stadium and the ads are great Is the boy in the story not a pokemon trainer?

and Raichu's modified tail is cool, too And Gyrados . . .

Would you like a spell check on this?

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to BrunetteMenolly [2009-08-08 10:38:13 +0000 UTC]

Yer sure, im bad with spellchecks, yer he is a trainer, what makes you say that/

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BrunetteMenolly In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-08 22:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Um, I just thought why is he at home instead of traveling.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to BrunetteMenolly [2009-08-08 22:24:19 +0000 UTC]

cos he isn't 18, he ain't got his full license yet

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BrunetteMenolly In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-08 22:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Wait . . . I thought you became a pokemon trainer when you turned 10 . . .? Or did you change that in pokemon Evo?

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to BrunetteMenolly [2009-08-08 22:59:50 +0000 UTC]

in evo you get your provisional license and your first pokemon at 10, you have to study for 8 years at an academy before your allowed to get your full license. then at 18 you can start training

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BrunetteMenolly In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-09 02:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. Cool!

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Skull-Island-Master In reply to ??? [2009-08-06 20:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Man this amazing !!! I would love an Pokemon Movie.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Skull-Island-Master [2009-08-07 10:26:06 +0000 UTC]

same but if they made it it wouldnt be epic, it would end up like some sort of spy kids movie if the vamped it up like transformers maybe but i doubt they would

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FakaPokeBio In reply to ??? [2009-08-05 17:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Nintendo and soul silver, that's just hilarious.

I really like that Gyarados.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to FakaPokeBio [2009-08-06 11:50:08 +0000 UTC]

thankyou glad you liked the inside joke

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FakaPokeBio In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-06 15:34:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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sehgus15 In reply to ??? [2009-08-04 22:23:08 +0000 UTC]

awesome !!! Great jod

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Inkfang In reply to ??? [2009-08-04 17:29:13 +0000 UTC]

ooh,i really love this

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Inkfang [2009-08-04 20:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Floeur In reply to ??? [2009-08-04 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]

HAHA! XD Mc Donald's!
Very very nice. You're so good at drawing realistic pokemons! <3

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Floeur [2009-08-04 20:09:42 +0000 UTC]

I try thanks

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Floeur In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-04 23:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! <3

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alcoraiden In reply to ??? [2009-08-04 05:04:28 +0000 UTC]

With regards to the writing -- the narration itself is very good, but you really need to run it through a spelling and grammar check. I liked the story, but it would seem more well-written if the proofreading errors had been fixed, and it would be easier to read.

As for the art, very awesome concept! I like the idea of Pokemon battles being some kind of world sport like football or baseball, with the stadium packed and all kinds of lights and gaudy advertising and so forth. The Gyarados is especially well-done.

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to alcoraiden [2009-08-04 08:26:04 +0000 UTC]

thankyou very much. Your right about the spell check, see i write them when i upload the picture so there usually quite rushed, plus being dyslexic doesnt help. ill slap it on word soon and fix as many errors as i can

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Eclipsed-Soul91 In reply to ??? [2009-08-03 20:33:28 +0000 UTC]

I love how realistic the Pokemon look ^^ nice story too!

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Eclipsed-Soul91 [2009-08-03 21:40:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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EvilCopepod In reply to ??? [2009-08-03 19:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Both the description and the picture are astounding.
I love your works. <3

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to EvilCopepod [2009-08-03 21:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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Orbzap In reply to ??? [2009-08-03 18:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.....You have done a great job! In fact I can see those in real life. Great Job once again! I'm sorry because I'm speechless XD

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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Orbzap [2009-08-03 21:42:42 +0000 UTC]

lol thankyou very much

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Orbzap In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-08-04 03:00:21 +0000 UTC]

No. THANK you because you made a artwork that cheer me up

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Axel-232 [2009-08-03 18:14:09 +0000 UTC]

lol like the McDonald logo up there x3


All around, very well done. I just love that Hyper Beam xD

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