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Published: 2018-07-12 14:09:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 4
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I focus on shading and lighting for this drawing but i realise that the girl is more like a trap though lol. But finishing a drawing is still achievement so I need comments from you all.Related content
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I am not sure what I should say about this. I enjoy character art, especially with pretty environments. This head shot is not really something which interests me, sorry.
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Thanks for sharing your honest opinions, if you dislike it, can you give details for me to improve it?
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I just don't like head shots that much, I prefer drawings of compete characters so I don't have anything to say, really.
The one thing maybe is the shadow. Since I can see only the head, I have no idea where the source of light is. Obviously, it is behind her head but there could also be another one on the right because the shadows on her neck and her head seem to be darker on the left. However, when I see the top of the shirt, the left side is clearly white while the right side is grey. Is it maybe the hair casting the shadow on the shirt? It just confuses me really, I have no idea where the light is coming from.
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The light source in the drawing is set behind her.
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Thanks! I will improve more.
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Woah this is gorgeous! I really love the way you colour your art. I can really see your own style shining through in this.
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Thanks! Although something is amiss, I felt...
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I really like the fact that you fixed the lighting source at a point and then cast your shadows accordingly. But the lighting seems to be a bit jarred. I f you thought of the background as being a light source from all directions but then you should not have any shadows. Sorry, if I'm being too nerdy (my friends always seems to point that out for no reason!!). But, good effort. Keep going.
And one last big problem. Some of us don't favourite photos. They just want to download, keep them in a file, and tell their computer to randomly display a picture as a wallpaper for them to contemplate. So, don't you think putting anything below HD resolution in these days of 4K is a bit of a crime. Please upload hi-res to please our eyes!! (Even though I sometimes upload low res files 
BYE and take care!!
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Sorry, I don't know what are you talking about.I always upload it with 90percent quality in JPEG image. However, thanks for reminding me about the those who just download and don't favourite. It really helps me grow.When you download it, don't forget it was drawn by an artist. That's what I hope. Also, thanks for the compliment!
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I am just saying that 791x405 is just too low. And since we are on that topic, why don't you try vectors??
I assure you, once you get on it, you will never jump off!! REALLY!!
The really are the future.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Remember, I AM WATCHING YOUUUU!!! From Earth!!
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