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Published: 2017-04-10 16:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3459; Favourites: 183; Downloads: 0
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Commission for , thank you!!You gets enough freedom to draw within a commission, this was so refreshing!
Characters Zarah & Paley © Joyfool
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Comments: 15
I-AMM [2017-04-10 16:20:51 +0000 UTC]
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I enjoy this piece for a number of reasons.
First, the anatomy, they are so relaxed, I don't see any stiff parts. As if they are truly comfortable. It really sets the mood. Reminds me of how much i can enjoy a good nap.
Second, i wanna point of the lighting. It seems natural with a great understanding of the suns position. Wonderful. It's indicated time of day adds to the relaxing mood set.
The sun also helps point your attention to the subject. Nothing is jumbled.
Third, The relationship between the two(knowing nothing of the story) seems to tell me they are very close and very kind. Not sure if this was the intention , but you captured it!
Now for some flaws, I know they are directing you to the center, but i feel like the leaves at the top are not as detailed as i feel something so close to the camera should be.
The flower patterns above her head (mostly on her right), i think would fold more with the fabric.
Both of these "flaws" are not really flaws, just small details i noticed.
Overall i love this piece, Your anatomy, your lighting, and your color work, they all tie in together and truly begin to some emotions we can all relate.
Fantastic piece! Thank you for sharing!
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bunnyb133 [2017-04-13 06:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Everything about this is just so gentle and lovely <3
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relictemper [2017-04-10 17:06:41 +0000 UTC]
As promised earlier, even more gushing I love it, really Joy you did an amazing job!!!! The lighting and texture of the hammock is so smoothly done that it pulls the characters out to the front more but keeps them in line with the lighting for the background (if that makes any sense at all?) wahhhh its perfect c:
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Joyfool In reply to relictemper [2017-04-10 17:51:36 +0000 UTC]
So happy you like it! Truthfully I was a little scared with all the freedom you gave with the characters part, so I took my own OCs to head to the direction you wanted with the overall atmosphere of the piece. Thanks for ordering!! ^^
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relictemper In reply to Joyfool [2017-04-10 20:28:25 +0000 UTC]
Anytime Hopefully I'll be able to do it again
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