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Published: 2015-09-26 19:09:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 11985; Favourites: 381; Downloads: 0
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Again, another LookDev on Ryuko, and i also experimenting with lighting...Related content
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good stuff going on here, I really like the shader's your using on the skin and "clothing" (i know, its a living creature..") . The only thing I would suggest would be take another look at the mouth. I don't know if your using blend
shapes/morphs for the phonemes or what, but the mouth looks a bit off at the lower lip, it appears to be somewhat distorted. Id like to see multiple angles of this model, and would be better to critique that way. I dig the lighting as well, simple and right. Im digging what you doing, keep it up! Well done!
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I admire the dramatic pose, you drew it very nicely. Also the colours look great and detailed, I can even see cracks on swordΒ΄s blade, thatΒ΄s awesome detail!
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Very cool, I didn't know she wore gloves.Β
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Your welcome. 
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I think that the mouth can look odd because of the hollow part over the top of the lower lip. But that's just a little detail not very noticeable.
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hollow part ? you mean the inner mouth ?
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Hmm yes (sorry maybe I write oddly, english isnt my first language) her lower lip doesn't exactly looks like a crescent.
Am I much clear 
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crescent ? now im confuse... >.<
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Ok a drawing will be better
sta.sh/01842smrz5i8 I've bordered in red the odd part...
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ah i see... okay i get it...
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The face is a little... offputting. Mostly the mouth.
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the shape isn't right ?
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Yeah, with how smooth her skin is it just looks... off.
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good stuff going on here, Β I really like the shaders your using on the skin. Β The only thing I would suggest would be take another look at the mouth. Β I don't know if your using blend shapes/morphs for the phonemes or what, but the mouth looks a bit off at the lower lip. Β I dig the lighting as well, simple and right. Β Β
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U bet, it's a terrific job, keep it up
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Now THAT looks a little bit better. I guess it's the lighting and the fact that most anime characters are very over-the-top in their expressions. Be sure to over-exaggerate a lot.
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i can make her mouth open more, but it wont be as wide as the anime or else it looked weird...
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Β YOUR ARTS SO FABULOUS TRY DO MAKO PPPPLLLLZZZ Β
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but i like Satsuki more...
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BOTH ARE PERFECT AND FABULOUS
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Omfg she looks amazing!
I think the amount of lighting here, it really fits!
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thanks...
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You're the very most welcome!
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she so awesome! i would want to write a critique, but i don't know how much of a struggle it is to create a 3D model....but the only thing i would say is...um....i don't want to sound mean tho, but it's hard to see her eye brows maybe if they were a little darker Β
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there you go, its fixed...
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