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Jrynkows β€” Collab: Two Avatars

Published: 2015-04-17 00:33:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 8374; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Collab with one of my rl friends (who does NOT have a DA) She drew it and I colored and fixed anatomy mistakes! ^^

Our FE Avatars, Sea Lily (Also known as Lily) and Elmyra! ^^

Enjoy!
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Comments: 7

aina90 [2015-04-18 23:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Awwww Jryn! Looks amazing!

You both did an amazing job with this!

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Jrynkows In reply to aina90 [2015-04-18 23:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank You! ^^

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aina90 In reply to Jrynkows [2015-04-19 00:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes! <3

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xBooxBooxBear [2015-04-17 08:12:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm just gonna say something quick about the anatomy:Β Her hand facing out is backwards. Her thumb should be on the other side. Also, what happened to Elmyra's right arm and whyΒ isΒ her left arm so long?

Please don't take this as bashing! I just wanted to point them out to you so it helps you improve yourself :}

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Jrynkows In reply to xBooxBooxBear [2015-04-17 11:41:28 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't the one who drew it mind you My friend's still a beginning artist. She does thank you for the critique and will keep it in mind to get better. And she also wanted to say that reason her right arm isn't visible is because it's behind Sea Lily.

Thanks!

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xBooxBooxBear In reply to Jrynkows [2015-04-17 23:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know, but you mentioned that you fixed the anatomy. That's all I was pointing out. I really don't want to seem rude for pointing it out but I did the same thing before and I had a comment like this and thanks to that comment I'm always looking out for my hands now. So not trying to be rude xD just trying to help :}

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Jrynkows In reply to xBooxBooxBear [2015-04-17 23:50:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna admit that I didn't notice the hand was wrong until you pointed it out X'D I usually know better, I just kinda messed up because it wasn't my own lines and I was trying not to wreak the picture too much :'D

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