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JSdeviant — Waking Down
Published: 2009-10-28 17:43:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I anticipate
through half gone senses
the approaching alarm
although I cannot know the time

Like every second
falls from my lofty bed
to smash in pieces upon the floor
and break in waves upon the door

settled in the corners
night resides
tempting me into sleep, again
I fall into its hands

Then a piercing shriek
just as time has stopped once more
I'm pulled from the maidens of a dream
and join in hand with the waking damned
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Comments: 7

CrImSoNfOx22 [2009-10-29 21:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Dude seriously this is awesome wish i could write like that lol

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JSdeviant In reply to CrImSoNfOx22 [2009-10-30 04:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it

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shurtugalgeek [2009-10-29 00:39:31 +0000 UTC]

some kind of trouble?

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JSdeviant In reply to shurtugalgeek [2009-10-29 06:13:05 +0000 UTC]

No just surrealism

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shurtugalgeek In reply to JSdeviant [2009-10-29 15:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, maybe my studies have
gotten to me or soemthing.
I can't wrap my brain
around the meaning of it.
Which is sad because I love
surrealism in all kinds of art.

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JSdeviant In reply to shurtugalgeek [2009-10-30 04:28:05 +0000 UTC]

It's saying that waking up is being pulled into a 'lower' state of being so to speak

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shurtugalgeek In reply to JSdeviant [2009-10-30 14:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it is...
I got 5 hrs of sleep last night...
I wish I could sleep more and still get everything done.

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