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Rivers Converge at the Seaby jsenn
I read that
all rivers
flow into
the sea and
it occurs
to me that
this water
is the same
water that
swells then
ebbs in
moon driven
tides to
lap at the
shorelines
of Sweden
and Alaska
Australia,
and Japan;
flows
in rivers,
lakes and
ponds; forms
of melted
winter snows,
still lakes
reflecting
sky like
mirrors on
great
mountaintops;
drips from
limestone
cathedral
ceilings
to form
pools within
underground
caves;
filters
through the
earth's
crust, boils,
then spews
upward in
great
fountains
through
fissures at
Yellowstone.
It's the same water.
I dipped my hand into it and wondered if a molecule of this water might have stood still at Moses' command when the Israelites crossed the Red Sea, or been in one drop he drank after striking the rock.
I marveled that it might have bathed Cleopatra or been the first gulp a baby brontosaurus drank from a still pond.
Was a drop of it in the water that baptized my first son or in the first bath I gave the last of my four children?
Might it have watered the desert in Israel or flowed in darkness across the floor fathoms below the surface of the sea?
Could it have been under the foam tip of a giant wave which rolled across Galveston Island in the Hurricane of 1900, or frozen upon the beard of a survivor from the Titanic?
Did it run down the back of a Native American, stalking game in the rain, sink into the earth and rise, two hundred years later, to be tasted by myself from a paper cup in Hotsprings, Arkansas?
Solomon said,
"there is
nothing new
under the sun."
I have
learned
that all
things,
impossible,
improbable
or
unbelievable
have all,
happened
before.
The water
dripping
slowly
from my
fingertips
confirms
that
proclamation
for within
them I am
witness to
creation,
to history
and
tomorrow
morning,
high tide
will occur
at 5:38 A.M.
Joy Senn
7/24/2002
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Comments: 72
82deg [2002-07-28 11:12:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this piece amazes me...it's really compelling...it's funny how ponderous thoughts on the simplest/'mundane' matters in Life can make you think so much, so deeply...and it kinda makes you feel that you shouldn't take the things around you for granted
I have to agree with kindred...a very heartfelt and inspiring piece
p.s. Keep pondering
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meic2 [2002-07-27 18:50:55 +0000 UTC]
May I always be privy to your ponderings!
I spent the first six years of my life in a lttle village called Abercynon - Aber in Welsh means 'mouth of' ie Abercynon is at the mouth of the River Cynon. Which seems at first to be a little odd since Abercynon is about 40 miles from the sea.
But Abercynon is where the wild Cynon flows into the sedate River Taff [at 'Watersmeet' marked by a whirlpool would you believe!] - so my ancient forebears recognised that even an insignificant river must have it's high pinnacle of achievement and understood that it must reach the ultimate goal of all rivers eventually. As must we.
Water and I have never been the best of friends, but we have drawn closer since reading this!
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namaste [2002-07-27 01:19:13 +0000 UTC]
... yeah.
beautiful insights, joy. water and air have so much to tell us, don't they?
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daelinya [2002-07-26 23:24:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm really thinking they need to add the "Love Deviation" option, because this is one i definitely love. I've always enjoyed free thought/free form poetry, but you manage to keep stay within the one though rather that drfiting as most often seems to be the case. You have beautifully managed to express what crosses so many peoples minds at times. And you've stumbled upon what i call a Daily Miracle and seen it for what it was, and been able to express that to other people.
All in all your poem is like the rip tide, in that you may think your safe as you read it, but before you know it, your sucked in so deep you may never see surface again.
+fav
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h-hour [2002-07-26 21:35:35 +0000 UTC]
wow. this is completely captivating. such fun, interesting thoughts distilled in such a pleasant way - a moment of calm contemplation free of anxiety. this is great writing and i really enjoyed reading!
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doomit [2002-07-26 17:00:56 +0000 UTC]
Heheh a philosopher within a talented poet I like it, in fact, i love it.
-doomit
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wildmonky [2002-07-26 08:42:20 +0000 UTC]
sumerdies is right, there is a somewhat circular flow -pun intended of course- that I love. You've written thoughts that I have had, but in a very beautiful manner. My thoughts on the matter were that I always wondered if I was drinking the same water that brontosaurus peed in.
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summerdies [2002-07-26 06:53:30 +0000 UTC]
I like the way your thoughts in this poem like the water they ponder travel full circle. Across the world, through time and historic events back to the moment of clarity. The style used really supports this line of thinking, drawing the reader along adrift on a river of your thoughts on water. You can't help but become submerged in the meandering flow. I loved the way you stopped in the middle to create a depth that helped personify the vast distance in space and time I believe you wished to convey. This was beautifully crafted and truly thought provoking.
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ernst [2002-07-26 05:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Waow Joy!
Hihihi this is great
I loved every part of the drops travell through history,
absolutly amazing reading hihihi cool Joy
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volantis [2002-07-26 05:29:41 +0000 UTC]
i've felt this way many times while sitting alone on the beach, but you express it so beautifully...and the style you've used here brings to mind the soft pull and flow of moving water.
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czarita [2002-07-26 05:24:08 +0000 UTC]
ah...... again you leave me smiling, dear Joy
it is not your fantastic way with words and framing that defines this poem, but rather it is the imagery, the depth and variety, and above and beyond that, it is the overwhelming sense of something true being expressed, something that resonates all the way down to the base of who we are as human beings- this relation to water, and to nature, and to life, is so essential, so fragile, yet so enduring...
thank you- refreshing and lovely as always-
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dreamz13 [2002-07-26 05:00:49 +0000 UTC]
I nearly suffocated to death trying to read all of this in one breath, as I believe that it should be read in one breath, so one can indulge in the exquisite flow and mindstream of Joy. Mesmerizing, amazing, intoxicating, and whatever-ing. Sometimes words just ain't enuff.
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ooempteeoo [2002-07-26 04:28:20 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing. definitely the
best piece i've read in a long
time. keep writing.
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musicinmyhead [2002-07-26 04:23:32 +0000 UTC]
i always love reading your poetry it can take me away into another world no matter what i'm doing
lovely poem
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nemish [2002-07-26 04:23:15 +0000 UTC]
This poem is provocative in the thoughts its incites alone. The form gives to the feel as the words seem to roll out of your hands on to the keyboard. The long sentences in the middle seem almost like an intermission that provides us with a wonderous image of the ponderous history of a single drop of water. Truly excellent writing, one of the best I have ever read by you.
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-muse- [2002-07-26 04:19:53 +0000 UTC]
The words here are absolutely mesmerizing. The thoughts are beautiful, the words you chose for the thoughts are perfect - it's like this whole thing just sings to me.
I love it.
Very nice piece, indeed!
-muse-
be well
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-tank [2002-07-26 04:07:52 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing...i really love the short lines that just jump from image to beautful image...so beutiufully written...great work joy
-tank
-=don't fear to imagine=-
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mariamaria [2002-07-26 03:58:08 +0000 UTC]
You said Galveston.
Beautiful as always. I love your "ponderous thoughts."
maria
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kindred [2002-07-26 03:56:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god Joy...
This...this is unbelievable!!! I have never read a poem that made me think so much, nor drew me in so deeply. Your words are beautiful and heartfelt, and the emotion and wonder in this piece is...awe inspiring.
You are such an amazing poet...I can't even begin to describe the emotions that you are constantly able to stir in me.
I love this.
If you couldn't tell.
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