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Published: 2015-09-24 16:16:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2396; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 5
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my two back to the future drawings put togethermarty mcfly and doctor emmett brown
updated the image (followed the advice and feedback to improve the drawing)
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Comments: 7
kanyiko [2015-09-24 20:07:45 +0000 UTC]
I think that using black lines for the facial lines wasn't such a good idea - maybe a darker skin tone would have been better, now they look a bit as if they are overly wrinkled. Β I'm also sure their lips would have looked better if they hadn't been outlined in black.
There's also something wrong with the eyes and mouths. Β Marty kinda looks as if he's looking in two directions at the same time. :/
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Juggernaut-Art In reply to kanyiko [2015-09-24 20:10:50 +0000 UTC]
ok thanks for the feedback
I'll try to work on it
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kanyiko In reply to Juggernaut-Art [2015-09-24 20:25:09 +0000 UTC]
I hope I didn't sound too hard. D:
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Juggernaut-Art In reply to kanyiko [2015-09-24 20:34:37 +0000 UTC]
no not at all I asked for feedback
I updated the image and used your advice
going to upload the new image now and see if it's better
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kanyiko In reply to Juggernaut-Art [2015-09-24 20:44:39 +0000 UTC]
Looking a lot better - still some issues with the mouth and eyes, but the less heavy lines on the faces are a major improvement indeed!
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Juggernaut-Art In reply to kanyiko [2015-09-24 20:46:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks and I'll try to work on the eyes and mouths in my next drawings
now I know these are the things I need to improve on, so thanks for the advice
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Juggernaut-Art [2015-09-24 17:09:37 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, a friend of mine just told me they look terrifying, did I make them too terrifying? just like to get some feedback, I'm still trying to improve a lot on realistic drawing because I still have much to learn. so any advice or feedback is welcome
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