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Julian-M — way out to the sea
Published: 2005-09-17 02:23:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 424; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 22
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sailing...35 mm. camera, Kodak Gold Iso200.
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Interesting piece!
I like the wideness and how much the colours contrast overall. It feels as if you've overlaid a vintage tone and yet... not, at the same time.
I'm not sure about the focusing and framing of things. It feels a bit unbalanced in terms of the framing, and the focusing is lacking in terms of the sharpness.
Perhaps you could crop out the left to make it more steady?
It wouldn't hurt to darken it a bit as well, perhaps...
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yay, great comment, very constructive! well, it's an old picture made with a cheap film camera, as u can see i've posted it in 2005. But it's pretty decent until today, so I guess I'll leave it there as it is, at the beginning of my gallery
thanks a lot !!
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*meant to do this earlier, but got sidetracked*
I absolutely love the colors in this, subtle interactions that make it really stand out. like the oranges of the wood against the blue sky and water, or the subtle green tint in the water that accentuates the shadows and even helps the red
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yay, thank you so very much, that's a very encouraging comment !!
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sailing on a rocket, i like the colours
congrats!
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