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JulietRose ā Sparkly, please
Published: 2009-12-31 02:45:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 659; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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I think there's a lot of things about this shot that could be improved.
The first thing that I noticed, while viewing the thumbnail, was the composition. You cropped off the bottom of the glass, so that throws the composition off a bit.
The second thing that I noticed was the grain, but that can easily be fixed with some blurring in PS.
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I think the blurriness works, given your tones and lighting. Plus, the blurriness sets it apart from the other glass shots, since it makes it look a little different.
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Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your advices.
Yes, the cropping could have been much much better, but it was kind of a quick shot, taken to see how well the bokeh would come out with the 50mm. This is why I made it blurry. (:
I know that the graininess is a bit annoying, but it was not the picture that was grainy; I was the one who added it on Photoshop. I was just experimenting new things. I sometimes think that the graininess works good in some photos.
I'm glad you like the blurriness, since I tend to do that to a lot of shots!
Thank you again!
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Cool photo. The composition is a tad unorthodox but creative nonetheless.
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It looks nice indeed - the light is kind of trying to evade out of the glass as if it was alive
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personally, i would find this picture typical and stale if the bottom of the glass wasn't cropped.
looks fantastic, i love the low dof. :>
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