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julvett β My lap is not a pillow, Potter
Published: 2011-03-17 07:37:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 101643; Favourites: 1656; Downloads: 469
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James is right, of course
One of several attempts to draw them again, they all came out horrible. I asked for crits of this on my livejournal, particularly where head size is concerned, but no one said to resize them... you guys can tell me what you think, as it's late and idk what I'm looking at.
More to come hopefully soon... I have all your notes and comments to read also! Will do
EDIT: Changed James' legs because of your suggestions... I don't know if it helped at all.
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First off, Julvett, I've always loved your work. I enjoy your simplistic animation style, and believe that it's classic and ace.
As for this piece, I think that there's alot to be said for the facial expressions, but there are a few things that I noticed. For one, Mr. Potter's legs are as straight as a two by four. I've never seen legs quite like that, My god they're the right length, they flow well, and they don't have a billion lines making them difficult. Great flow... just a little too straight. I'd put a tiny bit of shadow underneath his legs as well, because after all if they are propped up at the very end of the sofa/lovechair/bench then they would cast a slight shadow. The background is very nice. Very simple, very easy to flow with. Mrs. Potter's feet need the tiniest bit of clean up, because I can see multiple lines.... but besides that? You always do well. I honestly have no complaints.
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OMG! James is so HOT in this picture! Well, in most of them actuallyΒ
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this is my phone background 
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Honestly, one of the BEST Jily FanArts ever! <3
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lol dylan does that to me all the time..... rawr.... and dont say this picture is horribsl because it not... (sorry bad english.... geez) its very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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She should have gotten up and sat on his stomach.
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Sorry, Happy Feet moment: "Get off of me!" "Noo, you like it...."
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i put this picture as my wallpaper <3 i love it
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YOU are my favorite artist ever!! (this picture is my wallpaper and im not even kidding)
I check your wall EVERY SINGLE DAY to see if you posted any more pictures!
I esspesialy LOVE your james and lily drawings!
please keep drawing!
your biggest fan EVER ~LilyEvans394
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Can you draw Fred and George Fred with Harry's scar and George has Harry's glasses?
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George---> 
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I love James. I love how obnoxious, clever, and how he can get any girl but all he wants is Lily. And he never gave up on her.
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i like it... i like how you draw the head of james
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Lol, this is great. Their expressions tell the whole story. XD
I wrote a short for this on Tumblr--I hope you don't mind. I credited you and linked back to this page and your dA page.(There was another one I did the other day as well, and I linked that one back to it's dA page as well, but I forgot to comment on it. >.<)
If it's an issue I can take them down.
Cheers!
~SF
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i tried that ones ... didn't end well .. got slapped in the face . pussed down from the couch , landed face first . and then got kicked in the shoulder xD
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The only thing I would suggest about this one, is that James's face seems a bit small, compared to Lily's. I'm not sure if it's just the angle because I did use my fingers to see if they were about the same (and in doing that, they seemed to be), so maybe it is just the angle. But what do I know? Lol. Well hope this helps some, though.
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Displays their relationship perfectly. x3
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You know if that were me, I would've hit him on the head with the book. I guess it's a good thing that wasn't me. >.< I love it.
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Awwwww, so cute. I wonder if they know what they're doing as they have this conversation... coughFLIRTINGcough
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I never thought about this couple but thanks to you, it's my new obsession. So thank you
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I think his head size is fine, it's just his legs are maybe a little short? I don't know, I just imagine that when he stood up, he would be pretty short...
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HAhaha this is cute. This is totally me and my girlfriend, except I curl up, and she doesn't tell me to get off
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True, so true James. I am absolutely in awe of this, I mean, if I tried to draw anything remotely like this it'd turn out looking like...well, I just found there aren't words bad enough for my drawing skill. Excellent job!
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So true...
Me: Off. Now, weasley.
George: You know you love it.
me: so true.
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I'm so happy to see once in a while a James Lily pic with a bit more resistance Lily. I hate it when she just becomes his doggy (and I really love you for writing those comment in the Severus/ emily we hate lily thing. Thanks so much)
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"GET OFF!"
"You liikkeee iiiitttt!!!!!"
That James Potter......I love your work by the way XD
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Because of my limited membership, I am critiquing here. I enjoy Lily's pissed look, and how you did the bag,but think the book is a tad small. Great job as always!
~Huffleclawmage
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cuz she does. we all know she does. ha! love it~~~!
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