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julvett — My lap is not a pillow, Potter
Published: 2011-03-17 07:37:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 101643; Favourites: 1656; Downloads: 469
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James is right, of course
One of several attempts to draw them again, they all came out horrible. I asked for crits of this on my livejournal, particularly where head size is concerned, but no one said to resize them... you guys can tell me what you think, as it's late and idk what I'm looking at.
More to come hopefully soon... I have all your notes and comments to read also! Will do
EDIT: Changed James' legs because of your suggestions... I don't know if it helped at all.
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Hahahahah ohmygosh, best line ever, "you like it." Oh, so like james.
As for critique... He looks really stiff? That is a really hard pose though... curious, do you use models for poses like this, or just your imagination?
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Sort of both... for this pic I used a reference for James' body, but Lily's was from my imagination. That's why I think it's weird that James came out worse, but his pose *was* harder...
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Oh, okay. Yea, that is weird... I dunno
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This is very cute. The anatomy and proportions look fine to me, but James' body language doesn't seem relaxed enough for his pose/position. He looks a little stiff to me.
Other than that, this is great. Your work is always very expressive and entertaining and this is no exception. ^^ 
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Fabulous! Lily's face is sooo great! I think she can hit him with her book if I doesn't stop and leave her alone!
And James... Oh James! You have a good time!
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James' head is slightly bigger than Lily's, but guys' heads usually are (: And this is like, minutely bigger, so no worries. This is so cute, haha !
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Really? Ugh, just before I posted this I made James' head bigger and Lily's smaller D: I'll have to see in the morning if I feel like changing it back...
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Oh no no, it's fine! I know my dad's head is slightly bigger than my mom's, and so is my brother's... it's not even that noticeable, since Lily's got so much hair
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Lol, so perfect 
Actually, I think everything is pretty good except the feet, they seem a tad short. Other than that, proportions look good
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....aaaand James suddenly flies to the floor and lily continues to read smirking behind her book. he's so gonna get slapped.
I love this!! everything about it. fantastic!!
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So Potter, this is wonderful the emotion is fabulous.
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awww I think this is really good
I love your drawings of these two, they're soo cute the way you draw ^^
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