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julvett — My lap is not a pillow, Potter
Published: 2011-03-17 07:37:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 101643; Favourites: 1656; Downloads: 469
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James is right, of course
One of several attempts to draw them again, they all came out horrible. I asked for crits of this on my livejournal, particularly where head size is concerned, but no one said to resize them... you guys can tell me what you think, as it's late and idk what I'm looking at.
More to come hopefully soon... I have all your notes and comments to read also! Will do
EDIT: Changed James' legs because of your suggestions... I don't know if it helped at all.
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Hello!
One thing I've always loved about your art is the facial expressions. But there needs to be some shadows.
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Love their expressions!
And of course James is right 
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The heads look okay to me honestly. James is a bit stiff, particularly his legs but that's all I have to say. Very cute! Great job on this.
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I love this, you are making me addicted to HP FA again! James&Lily is <3.
Oh, and heads seem fine to me! 
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i hope i wasn't too mean. Plz forgive me if i offended. >.<
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compared to the way you normally draw Lily, her body seems a little larger than usual. Particularly, her hips and mid torso. And I don't about the head size. Potter's head may be a tad small but I think he is the best out of the the entire picture.
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xDD I was like, "OOC HARRY- wait... is that James..? Yes, yes it is..."
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Haha I can't imagine Harry ever doing this
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Nooo. That would be horror. xDD
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This is great! I could totally see this happening.
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Love the little dialogue. Potter's little comeback just made me giggle. Very cool
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I love everything you draw of them <3 Just lovely XD
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I can't critique, since I'm not premium, but I have never seen any legs like James's. So STRAIT!
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Lol at James! This looks great cept I think James' legs are a little bit too straight.
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LOVE the facial expressions. James looks so cocky and it makes me laugh because Lily is sooo going to kill him for this XD perfect.
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The only awkward part I can discern is James' legs, which are a tad unnaturally straight. Other than that, lovely/cute as always
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Oh how this amuses me.
Great job Jules, and their heads look fine.
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aww i love them!!! iv been following your art for about a year now and iv always been jealous of your talent!! i finally decided to join and submit my own work but now the stupid laptop wont let me submit!! can anyone help me??
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I think, firstly, their awsome, but james legs are kinda too straight.
apart from that, THEY ROCK!
and I can't even draw so, there you go
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It looks... adorable!
It's wooonderful!!!
Great job!
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Aw!!!
Too cute, too funny, classic James.
I faved this faster than the speed of light
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this is adorable c:
the one thing that stands out is his legs. I'm not convinced his feet are actually resting on the arm of the bench, they look kind of floaty. or maybe it's just that the bench seems super-long.
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James' legs look kinda sticky, but that's no big problem.
I really love it, you draw them so cute in your style!
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HA, "you like it". xD
You have their proportions down really well; I like the way it is and there's really no need to change it in my opinion. :3
*continues snickering at James' cocky self*
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I think the head preportions are fine. If anything, I think James' legs could have more shape. They're just two strips of long (if that even makes sense). The length is fine, but if you defined them a bit more perhaps it would look less strange. Because of his legs the bench looks UUUUber long. I think Lily is perfect though and I like the details of the bench legwork and the bag
I love James' expression too. Who wouldn't like it?
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I really think you did a fantastic job here. The heads are by no strech too large for their bodies. In my anatomy class, the head and feet are evenly matched in size and I am always reminded that a foot is a head, so if something seems off, just look at the feet. Or head. ha, anyway (fail at being witty...), I do strongly think that Lily and James look amazing in this. 
And the title made me giggle.
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Head size looks fine to me.
Then again, my heads are always wrong, so...
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I think their heads are sized fine. Her forehead seems a little large, but some people have large foreheads XD
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I agree with efa and neotigger that James looks a little stiff. I think more his lower half than his upper half. The folded arms look good, I just think his legs look like he has his knees locked or something. I get why you wanted him stretched out, but I think having his legs crossed or something might have worked better.
I actually think James works well proportion-wise, but Lily looks a bit bobble-headed. I think it works though.
And mainly... this is just SOOOO cute! And I love that you're doing J&L art again!
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I agree. His legs were what looked stiff.
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finally you've submitted something
I don't think it came out terribly,for me it's as good as another drawings of yours
haha,and you're right of course,she totally enjoys it
I wish you could draw more of them.
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