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Welp Ches, time to explain yoself...

It is done, holy heck. I have nothing smart to say about this other than IT IS DONE! WHOO! Man that was fun, my hand is lowkey dying but overall it was so much fun working on this! There should be two additional pages where the two of them banter around plus what Elisa' deal was cause he kinda appeared and disappeared p quickly, so imma work on that since it's more or less important.

Time to bellyflop my bed!

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I do have to add some smart things to the comic now that I've edited the rubble and the remains of Elias' Psyshock in Avis' skin so I'd like to explain some things that might have showed up throughout the comic:

- The reason why Chester didn't blow up the sewers entirely was explained in Page 3 by Lucy. The sewers are divided in (lockable) sections, so even if the explosion spread a bit further through the tunnels, it would only reach certain parts and eventually just die down. I had to limit the 'blowing up part' since there are numerous other teams in the sewers and not everyone has witnessed an explosion during their exploration. So that was my take on it. It might have rumbled a bit though

- Avis was hit by Elias's Psyshock midflight, the left side of her body was turned towards him which is where the attack mostly struck her. It was important to me that you could still see the aftermath of the attack, even if it's just in form of small splinters. The written sounds like 'slice' and 'shluk' on Page 9 implied that there was some piercing damage

- Ten minutes elapsed between Part 1 and Part 2 of the Mission in the PMDS-verse. Avis spend 5 mins trying to catch up on some sleep before Chester pulled a meme . She's still very tired.

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Start Mission 3 Part 2

Welp Ches, time to explain yoself...

It is done, holy heck. I have nothing smart to say about this other than IT IS DONE! WHOO! Man that was fun, my hand is lowkey dying but overall it was so much fun working on this! There should be two additional pages where the two of them banter around plus what Elisa' deal was cause he kinda appeared and disappeared p quickly, so imma work on that since it's more or less important.

Time to bellyflop my bed!

Edit:

I do have to add some smart things to the comic now that I've edited the rubble and the remains of Elias' Psyshock in Avis' skin so I'd like to explain some things that might have showed up throughout the comic:

- The reason why Chester didn't blow up the sewers entirely was explained in Page 3 by Lucy. The sewers are divided in (lockable) sections, so even if the explosion spread a bit further through the tunnels, it would only reach certain parts and eventually just die down. I had to limit the 'blowing up part' since there are numerous other teams in the sewers and not everyone has witnessed an explosion during their exploration. So that was my take on it. It might have rumbled a bit though

- Avis was hit by Elias's Psyshock midflight, the left side of her body was turned towards him which is where the attack mostly struck her. It was important to me that you could still see the aftermath of the attack, even if it's just in form of small splinters. The written sounds like 'slice' and 'shluk' on Page 9 implied that there was some piercing damage

- Ten minutes elapsed between Part 1 and Part 2 of the Mission in the PMDS-verse. Avis spend 5 mins trying to catch up on some sleep before Chester pulled a meme . She's still very tired.