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I was very excited about this collab idea and still am! We're making a small comic idea with , I hope you'll enjoy it as I am! I know my art is crappy, but I'm hoping things get better as we proceed with this story!
I promise I will keep down with too many panels, and stick to less, than how I did now, but since this is the beginning, I needed to realize, that I need to redraw , since one panel is simply not enough of what I was trying to suggest here. This beginning was redrawn three times. ....yeah. I wanted to make sure I was doing things right, yet I'm still not pleased, but hey, it's for fun, right?
I'm using this AU Raphael, his very new and fresh model: junkeyturtle.deviantart.com/ar…
A little narration, if things aren't clear:
A portal opened somewhere, in a futuristic city, and older Raph fell through it from his dimension to this one. He surely hit his plastron, as he fell down.
older Raphael: UGH!!
He stood up, dusting himself off with a sulking face.
older Raphael: Where am-...?! Huh?
He spotted a little robot thing, which was floating very close to him, and then at his face. He looked into it, unaware it was actually a camera, and he punched it , destroying the small machine, walking further to find out where he got at.
So hopefully I got it right, as the keywords I memorized about the story so far is, that Raph got here, in this futuristic city, and he was stalked by a little camera. I didn't detail the background, 'cause: I still need to practice making neat backgrounds and I'm as clueless about the view as Raph. Who will find out about him through all this? Continuation at Ciumostwo

Main characters:
older Raphael (c) :
M-3 (c) :

Part 1 - : here
Part 2 - : ciumostwo.deviantart.com/art/F…
Part 3 : coming soon

P.S. I like how we forgot giving an actual title to this xD

Description
I was very excited about this collab idea and still am! We're making a small comic idea with , I hope you'll enjoy it as I am! I know my art is crappy, but I'm hoping things get better as we proceed with this story!
I promise I will keep down with too many panels, and stick to less, than how I did now, but since this is the beginning, I needed to realize, that I need to redraw , since one panel is simply not enough of what I was trying to suggest here. This beginning was redrawn three times. ....yeah. I wanted to make sure I was doing things right, yet I'm still not pleased, but hey, it's for fun, right?
I'm using this AU Raphael, his very new and fresh model: junkeyturtle.deviantart.com/ar…
A little narration, if things aren't clear:
A portal opened somewhere, in a futuristic city, and older Raph fell through it from his dimension to this one. He surely hit his plastron, as he fell down.
older Raphael: UGH!!
He stood up, dusting himself off with a sulking face.
older Raphael: Where am-...?! Huh?
He spotted a little robot thing, which was floating very close to him, and then at his face. He looked into it, unaware it was actually a camera, and he punched it , destroying the small machine, walking further to find out where he got at.
So hopefully I got it right, as the keywords I memorized about the story so far is, that Raph got here, in this futuristic city, and he was stalked by a little camera. I didn't detail the background, 'cause: I still need to practice making neat backgrounds and I'm as clueless about the view as Raph. Who will find out about him through all this? Continuation at Ciumostwo

Main characters:
older Raphael (c) :
M-3 (c) :

Part 1 - : here
Part 2 - : ciumostwo.deviantart.com/art/F…
Part 3 : coming soon

P.S. I like how we forgot giving an actual title to this xD