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Published: 2014-05-27 16:27:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 625; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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tired of drawing something detailed, decided to draw something passionate this time.material: drawing paper, 2B mechanical pencil, drawing pen, copic & finecolour, colored pencils, and final retouch for brightness/ contrast/ sharpen & effect with Adobe Photoshop
it's OK to not put Mature Filter in this one, right?
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CMBaggs [2014-06-05 20:56:33 +0000 UTC]
Yay! More couples art!
The detail and the colouring are beautiful. I noticed the scars on Seb and the love bites on Harper. oh la la!
For anatomy issues, Harper's thigh should extend beyond Sebastian's torso, especially considering the height of her torso in this piece.
PS. Love, love, LOVE the way you gave his dark hair some shine!
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justwant2behappy In reply to CMBaggs [2014-06-06 05:54:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, Chris! It's so good to hear a word from you again.
Where have you been? Busy making Lokane's fanfic, I assumed? I sneaked peek into your tumblr and successfully found this super hot artworkΒ cmbaggs.tumblr.com/image/87911β¦ why don't you submit it into dA??? it's good! and naughty and I like it very muchΒ
too bad I personally don't have tumblr and don't really know how it's work (beside dA I only have facebook & twitter: and my twitter account is too pathetic to be true
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You really think Sebastian's hair is good? not too shiny or curly? because one of my outside dA friend mentioned about that...
Yeah I want to make sexy picture about them... it's always good way to punch up your mood. and thank you, I noticed there's something wrong on Harper's body but I can't quite find it. so you think Harper's thigh should be place lower or higher? (sorry but English is not my native language so I need a confirmation) Β and initially I want to show more muscle on Sebastian but I think my male anatomy skill is not good as yours
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CMBaggs In reply to justwant2behappy [2014-06-06 12:10:03 +0000 UTC]
Well, her torso should be a little shorter (because she is supposed to be petite, right?) and her thigh should be a little longer, so that it extends beyond Sebastian's back. If you look carefully at how far the girl's knee extends beyond the guy's back in your stock photo you'll notice what I mean.
Of course you want more muscle. Benedict Cumberbatch is your face claim and he has some definition. I assure you, it will come with practice.
Yes, I have been sucked into a black hole of writing. I did not expect the response that I've gotten, so it's been a pleasant surprise. And yeah... that. Thank you! I'm quite pleased with how it turned out too. I didn't post it here because I wasn't certain about the rating it would need, and I didn't want to spam my dA with all Lokane all the time (even though that is where my head at is right now... too many feelings...). Tumblr is a more receptive place to fangirling.
Anyways, yes, smut is always a great way to improve one's mood. That piece really perked me up yesterday.
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Yetinia [2014-05-30 01:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Is that a bit of stubble I see? And the attention to detail for those burns and scars... either Harper and Sebastian's passionate moments are a little violent or these two have been going through some rough times prior to this moment.Β
As always I admire how you handle inking in lines with varying thickness and how you handle lightning and folds. Although I do feel that you could benefit immensely from using different colors as a means to deepening a shadow to give your figures more of a sense of depth and because not all shadows are created equally and color does reflect . Altogether though, well done.
I think your safe as far as the mature content since you managed to cleverly hide everything, unless someone is especially squeamish about kisses, I think you'll be fine.
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justwant2behappy In reply to Yetinia [2014-05-30 06:43:28 +0000 UTC]
yeah, it's stubble! finally I have some courage to draw it (not to mention I want to make my Sebastian more "manly" and I think in that particular morning he doesn't have time to shave, especially because he have "sweet distraction" in his arms
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all the burn and scar on Sebastian's body are from rough times he got from his job, because his job is (very) dangerous (I think I should add more scars on his body...) meanwhile all marks on Harper's body are hickeys -Sebastian really like to "mark" his possession, it's a lot more on Harper's neck & shoulderΒ Β - the truth is I should give a scar (big one) on Harper's body because initially in my story she experienced heavy car accident in the past, but I'm still not sure where to located it (any suggestion?) so I guess your theory about those burns and scars are right
last but not least, thank you so much for your suggestion about shadow, lightning, and reflection ^^ I shall remember and practice it more in the future
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Yetinia In reply to justwant2behappy [2014-05-31 18:23:27 +0000 UTC]
The stubble works.
Car accidents are tricky as it entirely depends on the nature of the accident. ie. Was she hit by an oncoming vehicle while in a car or was she walking or biking on the side of the road? Where was her vehicle hit if she were hit while in another car? Although working backwards from the accident... how visible do you want this scar to be? Is it something that's relatively easy to cover up, or a constant reminder of that incident? There's a lot of factors that go into it, but I suppose what it ultimate comes down to for you as the creator and how pervasive you want this mark to be.
And no problem.
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justwant2behappy In reply to Yetinia [2014-06-05 03:37:14 +0000 UTC]
well, I hope you don't mind to read little bit of Don't Let Me Go story (it's the title for Sebastian and Harper story)
Harper is the only child, she live in really happy family and she particularly really close to her dad.
one day, in their journey back from capital (Harper's family live in little town called Snowfall 3-4 hours from capital) a driver of big truck in front of them was sleepy and created massive pileup. Harper's parents died immediately in the scene (I even want to make Harper's dad lost his head because the truck contained big pipes and one of them emerge into their car window and like crushing his head *I know I am psycho, damn you CSI!) meanwhile Harper was almost died too.
so I want to make the scar on Harper's body as some kind of constant reminder about that accident. initially I made it in her face, but I think it's not "big enough" and not to mention I do not have the heart to draw it (*shame on me!) so I decided move it to her body, so it's easy to cover up but still be constant reminder to that accident (I want to make it big because that wound almost makes her dead) any suggestion where it should be located?
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Yetinia In reply to justwant2behappy [2014-06-06 17:52:08 +0000 UTC]
So much sadness and drama! But in that case... forearm (left or right) like around her wrist, could actually be a good candidate because it can be covered up but then it can also be easily exposed and accessed for a more tender reminder of that incident without necessarily disfiguring her entire body.
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justwant2behappy In reply to Yetinia [2014-06-12 14:53:57 +0000 UTC]
hmm... forearm? it's actually a good idea, my friend. I will seriously consider your suggestion and thank you so much for your help!
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Null-Entity [2014-05-29 21:15:53 +0000 UTC]
Aww so very colourful.
Thankyou for the use.
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justwant2behappy In reply to Null-Entity [2014-05-30 06:15:52 +0000 UTC]
yeah, my first intention is I want to create some kind of pastel spectrum colors as the background... but I guess it's failed
your welcome! thank you so much for your wonderful stock too!!!
(*as I already told you before, I already want to draw my original characters in this pose for a long time... and thanks because of your pose reference it's finally came true!!!Β Β )
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Rufina-Tomoyo [2014-05-28 18:46:57 +0000 UTC]
I liked how did you play with the differences in height.
In another order of ideas, it is best to avoid nuisance and put mature filter.
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justwant2behappy In reply to Rufina-Tomoyo [2014-05-29 16:02:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the comment and suggestion
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tatty1907 [2014-05-27 17:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow, dear this is amazing... It appeared in my DevWatch messages and the backgroud caught my attention in no time. It's so soft, and yet the colors are so bright and they have such a nice contrast with both the scene and the color you used for the two of them <3
And allow me to say,you did a great job to express the passion in this picture, it's just all over the place by looking at it! I think that the expressions are also great. The coloring on this one just blows me away, though, it's great and simply stunning, works so well with everything that you put in the drawing.
And no, I don't think this one needs a warning..it doesn't really show too much in my opinion, so it should be okay...
Still, great picture, I really, REALLY love this one :')
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justwant2behappy In reply to tatty1907 [2014-05-29 16:18:08 +0000 UTC]
I am genuinely really happy that you like this, Tatty... especially because everyone else seems not really attracted with this drawing of mine it's makes me wondering: is this particular drawing... not as good as I think it is? (yeah, I know I'm childish because I still anxious about what other people think about my drawings)
but anyway, thank you so much! you are really a nice person and a good friend :')
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tatty1907 In reply to justwant2behappy [2014-05-31 22:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, dear, it's not childish at all, it happens to me all the time
But still, the picture is indeed amazing, and it makes me glad to see you happy that I'd like it.
Aw dear, too sweet! You are a wonderful person and friend as well!
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