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KaiKenNatsuki β The Heirs *new plot!* - Page 4
Published: 2012-02-26 03:47:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 21585; Favourites: 245; Downloads: 49
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(PLEASE IGNORE THE FACT THAT THERE WAS A CUB WALKING AROUND IN THE LAST PAGE!)Okay, so, I didn't want to waste the other 3 done pages, so I decided to base myself in that start, and organized a cool plot :3 This comic is now mine and Hemi's <3
PLEASE don't comment saying stuff like "no he didn't have a crush on sarafina that's wrong" or something like that, it is my comic, and I decide how it goes by.
I'll be using this size for the pages for now, so i'll be able to draw more.
Hope you like it <3 Made with love!
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xD Yesh. I was gonna do a whole different story but i found something much better to work with.
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OK, so I love your art style! And the story so far is interesting. I do have a few critiques though! Really just one--- the text!!!!! It's a little hard to follow the order of conversation. Like in the last panel, I didn't realize that Sarabi and Taka were having a back and forth. I'd also suggest trying text-bubbles (here's a tutorial on them: [link] ). It makes things more concise and easy to read. Also, I'd have someone proof-read your writing before you finalize it. Some of the writing has been grammatically incorrect, or confusing.
Haha, sorry, that was alot of criticism! I really do enjoy your comic, and I think with a bit of polish on the text it would really shine
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Oh don't worry, I've already added those to the newest pages ^^ I may add them on the first few pages tho :3 Thanks a lot for the nice comment <3
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I really like how Sarabi reminisces to Nala about Taka ... I wonder what changed him ... your art is incredible!
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Same <3
Thank you very much!
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That pic of them as cubs is so cute - it seems perfect for an avatar!! <3 ~wants to keep it~
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Thank ya 
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Oooh, thanks! I will! ^_^
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Got my lazy but to catch up. Kia its amazing<333 Makes me want a lion character. 
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ouo thank you very much!
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your welcome
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OMG They are sooo cute ^-^
I luffles little cubs so much <33
MOAR >:3
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ouo Taka and Sarabi you mean? I like the last panel XD
<33 thank youuuu!
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I just adore your comic, and now I adore it even more! I love that you make Taka have a crush on Sarafina, they're my favorite couple :3 I really look forward to more of your pages!
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Same here, bud :3
Thank you very much!
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Yay fellow fan ^^
You're very welcome
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ouo coming soon!
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8D YAYYYYYY! Thank you!!!
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very nice! I love this page, I think it's a cool idea to make scar have a kind side to him.
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:3 yus yus!
Thanks
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ouo thank you, Block!!
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This is reallly good! I really like the fourth panel wiith the cubs running. ITs totally adorable!
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heheh, thank you a lot! I like the last panel the most C:
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yea. I agree, but its not my favorite. I really like the backround on that one.
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So you decided to make a time warp between the last few pages?
Either way your style is amazing and original.
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Yes, I didn't want those pages to go to waste, since i put a lot of effort onto them :3
Thank you very much!!
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You're welcome! Although instead of ignoring the cub in the background, I'm just going to assume he/she ran off to play. 
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next in this comic. ^^ I love TLK!
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Beautiful! I've always been a fan of the Lion King, but so far you've done the best job portraying them.
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Thank you very much
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Wow, this must take you ages! How do you fit so much epicness into every panel?
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Actually it did ;A; it took me almost 3 hours, man! I was like "COME ONNNNNNN BE FINISHED!!!"
XD Thank you!
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Well, it's awesome so the effort pays off
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Very true! ^^ i like the last panel the most!
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