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Kalandrias — a bit of a challenge
Published: 2009-01-21 04:34:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 822; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 31
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okay, first off I KNOW THE ARM IS JACKED TO HIGH HELL o.o like, seriously f-ed. but now that that's out of the way, I'll focus on the other problems XD I don't like the shading I did here much, one of my poorer jobs, but overall, I like the tummy and outfit. I think I did well.. I just need to redo the shading, and arm, to give it some justice >>I put it on here because I really want critique (on things other than the shading and arm, because I know they're jacked) on how to improve. I'm horrible at clothes, esp. clothes with lots of folds, so this was a challenge for me...
so please, help a sistah out
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The folds look great! The weird thing I noticed, though, was her mouth. It seems to be at the wrong angle for her peaceful expression.
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Thank you! ^^ yeah >< I'm not so great at profiles.. thank you for your input! 
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you did a nice job on the clothes
and, i don't see whats really wrong with the arms
my only critique is that the face looks rather flat, and the eyes seem...off...
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thanks 
muchos gracias for your input
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You're not bad at clothing. I think it looks pretty good. ^^
And I wouldn't call the arm that 'jacked'. It's nothing a little more attention to the forearm couldn't fix. My only other critique would be that her mouth should be angled downward toward the back, since she's looking up.
Otherwise, great stuff. ^^
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thank you
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Good. You should appreciate your work. I'm just telling the truth. ~^
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you actually did a really good job with the cloth, it does look really good and I know thats hard to do. Aside from the arm, the only other critique I have is that the face could use some work.
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sweet, thank you
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well at least you're trying, and you did the clothing well which is a pretty decent accomplishment.
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