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kaleidoscopial β€” Best Friends, Practically

Published: 2013-08-26 02:33:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1862; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 3
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Description Remember Johnny B.?
Remember him? We're best friends practically!
Let's do this soon again
Ten years about what it's been?
Can't believe how time flies by
Leaving you makes me wanna cry

These bruises make for better conversation
Loses the vibe that separates
It's good to let you in again
You're not alone in how you've been
Everybody loses
We all got bruises
We all got bruises~~~

WOWOWOW, it's about time I did this picture!! I've been meaning to do something like this forever, but couldn't get the poses right. BUT, I'm so glad I finally got to it!

If ANY of you guys remember my pic, "Stay Stay Stay", then I guess you could call this a sequel pic, maybe? I used the same technique for the background, but changed the shading style and stuffies. Basically, IMPROOOVEMEEEEENTTTT wow.

I guess, if you follow the sequence of the pic, Topaz fell all the way down the hill cause she's a derp, and maybe Puzzle rolled down with her cause he's a cutie and they kind of ended up like this? IDK, I'm really sucky at backstories. Whatever, they're dorky together

Anyways, I sketched this out in my notebook the other day during my Healthy Decisions class (it's literally a joke; I've done more artwork in the class than classwork and still have 100% in there ), and I just had to do this cause yeah.

I've done a lot of art today yay :3

Hope you like it! It was really really so so so much fun

Here's the old version/prequel thing? IDK. Stay Stay Stay:

~~~

Topaz (c) me
Puzzle (c) ~pricemc
Art (c) me
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Comments: 33

SwiftSomes [2013-09-01 15:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I want to start this off by saying that I admire the amount of detail you have put in the characters' eyes, as well as the wonderful mixture of orange and gold used in this piece. Too often, I see autumn themed pictures and they only have the same shades of yellow or brown or red in the entire picture (using the same colors for foreground and background). Most people don't think to combine or change the hue, saturation, or shade of the colors without making it look like a rainbow of the same old reds and oranges. You however, have done a marvelous job using a medley of similar (but different by shade!) colors.

You also did a stunning job with Topaz's colors. You made a smart choice in making her off-white the in this picture, it makes her and Puzzle inside the frame versus being awkwardly placed on top of it. What also helped blend them in was the blurred foreground and background. Not only did it provide a nice depth of field, but it also helped draw the viewer's eyes to the main subjects. I also feel as if the colors you chose for shading assisted in this as well. When you really want your character to fit in a background, you need to shade using colors from the background for the best result.

However, I do see some minor flaws that I think I should point out. The only thing that I notice to be "unnatural" is the way the grass looks right next to Topaz. In my personal opinion, it looks a little too stiff. Perhaps giving it a nice little curve in it would help fix that. You could also consider using the detail brushes, there are some already in Photoshop, but if you wish for something a little different, I am sure you can search deviantArt and find various different grass brushes for Photoshop. I do have to say that your drawing looks completely brush free, which is something a lot of people like (meaning, it does not have that tacky look of using he same preloaded Photoshop brushes). A common mistake is using the same old leave brush in the trees, but your background trees look fantastic, so that's nothing to worry about in your case.

Although I do like you shading since it is soft and suits the mood well, I do want to suggest that you try cell shading. In my personal opinion, I feel as if soft shading should be used either sparingly, or mixed with cell shading. The more detailed the shading, the more detailed the picture. I can see on the path that you are on, that you will have more pieces in the future that will be more advanced in theme, lighting, background, and posing and they will all require a different combination of shading techniques. For some tutorials and how-to's you can search "cell shading" on deviantArt or the web. I usually read the different techniques, then try to combine them. Sometimes it taken more than just a layer or two to get some nice shading, but it's totally worth it.

Please, keep up your beautiful work. I really do think that this piece has demonstrated how much you have improved in just a year. You clearly have show your capabilities of using digital programs, and I do hope you will continue to do so.

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Moonhowll [2013-11-04 05:24:15 +0000 UTC]

I know right

I CANT BELIEVE ITS MONDAY TOMMOROWΒ 

;W;

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Moonhowll [2013-11-04 13:40:08 +0000 UTC]

I'M NOT SURE

if this message was sent to the right person

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Moonhowll In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-11-04 22:19:17 +0000 UTC]

what? xDD

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Moonhowll [2013-11-05 00:07:34 +0000 UTC]

I didn't understand the first comment I'm sorry ;-;

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Moonhowll In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-11-05 00:15:55 +0000 UTC]

The title was

Time flies by so quick

and it was saturday

so

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Moonhowll [2013-11-05 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god.

I've failed you.


I am sorry ;-;

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Moonhowll In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-11-05 04:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Lmao

xD

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TheDaylightWolf [2013-09-08 19:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! I love Train!

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it goes with this picture so beautifully. The orangey background gives such a warm feeling to the whole drawing. I love this

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I'd love to commission you someday when you're available again <3

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You're artwork is amazing

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kaleidoscopial In reply to TheDaylightWolf [2013-09-09 21:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness, thank you so much!! Both for the watch, and for the comment, and for taking an interest in my commissions, too!


I don't know why dA said I wasn't watching you; I could've sworn that I was! I've fixed that


Again, thank you so so so much!

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TheDaylightWolf In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-09-10 12:18:48 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome!

I should have found you sooner, I really like your art <3

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kaleidoscopial In reply to TheDaylightWolf [2013-09-10 23:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you! :3

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Fictasy [2013-09-07 04:00:13 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much!!!

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Fictasy [2013-09-07 04:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouuu!Β 

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SunSketch [2013-08-29 04:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Aw, this is so cute and beautiful! Wonderful job. C:

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kaleidoscopial In reply to SunSketch [2013-08-29 12:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! :3

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AVOiCADO [2013-08-29 00:53:21 +0000 UTC]

dawwwwwwwwww so cute!

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kaleidoscopial In reply to AVOiCADO [2013-08-29 01:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Β teehee, thank you!!! :3

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AVOiCADO In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-08-31 16:23:56 +0000 UTC]

No prob! It truly DOES look amazing

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Krissi2197 [2013-08-27 01:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is just.


The improvement is just astounding.


Gosh you two are so cute omfg.

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Krissi2197 [2013-08-27 01:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Fttt oh geez thanks


He's the cute one, I just do stupid stuff idk


But yeah thank youuuu! :3

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Krissi2197 In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-08-27 01:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes I do stupid stuff and Jake just stands there being cute so I know where you're coming from ok.


We should totally do a trade in the future once I'm free since school will now be taking over my already doomed life.

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Krissi2197 [2013-08-27 01:44:17 +0000 UTC]

We should, why haven't we done one before? Good grief.


But hey, yes, by the time your school releases it's grip, mine should be calming down too, so just lemme know? :3


why are boys so cute gosh

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rahas3 [2013-08-26 21:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Very cute!

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kaleidoscopial In reply to rahas3 [2013-08-26 21:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! :3

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rahas3 In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-08-26 21:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome! ^w^

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Pokodoki93 [2013-08-26 08:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Well done ^^
I see a lot of improvement :3
The background is very nice *w*

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kaleidoscopial In reply to Pokodoki93 [2013-08-26 12:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you very muchness

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DuskyTheWusky [2013-08-26 06:45:36 +0000 UTC]

cute ,, well drawed ^^

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kaleidoscopial In reply to DuskyTheWusky [2013-08-26 12:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :3

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darkshadowmist [2013-08-26 05:17:34 +0000 UTC]

VERY GOOD!!Β 

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kaleidoscopial In reply to darkshadowmist [2013-08-26 05:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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darkshadowmist In reply to kaleidoscopial [2013-08-26 12:31:00 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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