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This entry is UGLY and chessy. Some parts maybe be incorrectly written/translated since the concept was made up/written at the last minute.
IT'S ALL OLD AND FAKE!!
I will make many changes to it.
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· ·: LET IT BEGIN :·
“Of course I want!” Her right whip was shot like a bullet from her palm towards the black monkey, but he just caught it, moving nothing but his hand. Kancle showed a smirk and immediately a current ran though his body. He tried drop the electric whip, but his hand closed by itself. “What the..?!”. In seconds, the electric monkey took her feet off the ground and rushed towards Razor, "Que comienze la fiesta!!"*, smashing a wonderful punch into his face.
“Ugh!”. In that moment, she let fall over him, a rain of punches, kicks and open handed blows, all and each one blocked or dodged. She kept flying inches from the ground, thinking in that way she could protect her injured knee.
“Not bad, she's actually fast” said Ebony to Razor.
“Not for me”. Finally, he managed to scratch her rib as she pull a face of pain. But just before he could get his claws back, she hit her open hand into his arm, and gave him one more little shock.
“Argh!”. Both monkeys took some distance to take a little pause of their own pain.
“Ha!”, she yelled to him. “In the moment you try to harm me, that short moment is enough for me to manage to shock you. You can't touch me!”, the mango monkey was showing off, no caring the red injure below her shoulder.
“I see”, Sarah thought, while she was still watching the fight from behing the bushes, “she's actually fast, but she happens to be some-slow reflex, that's weird”.
“Then let's see if you can attack in distance!”. Razor yelled from midair and his fists soon began to fill with those little red boomerangs, all thrown fast towards Kancle. She began to run to the attacker, dodging at least most the projectiles, while she got out her whip with one hand and holding the end with other. Then at some distance from him, she jumped and seemed to give several lashes to her opponent. She ended landing and turned her head backwards. “Ah, I missed?!”
She could feel a kick pushed her from back, and tried to soften with her hands the hit she was getting on one of the lamps of the beautiful park, and quickly tried to smash her open hand back into Razor, but it was stopped by a claw. Noticing this, she thrust her other hand, which was also stopped. Razor was holding both Kancle's wrists, both fighters pushing. “Too predictable. It's all you can do?”, he said as she saw the lamp behind her.
“It's all I've to do”. And, helped by the force Razor was applying already, the mango monkey punched the apparently weak support of the lamp, breaking through the cables and making both monkeys were quickly shocked. “How... awesome!”, the spectator said from the distance. The post fell down and a little explosion made Razor fell on his back.
“Arr...”. He slowly stood up, as he could feel little pain in his chest, forehear, back and wherever he had little scares of previous battles. “That girl's crazy... She shocked herself to shock me”.
“And it seems that's not everything” Ebony said, at the same time both saw the mango monkey was holding the lamp post, as if it was a sword, and prepared to use it against him.
“The whole lamp?”, the blue spectator though with a astonished face.
“Hey, you should know.. being shocked when you're injured, it's QUITE bad”. She said, clearly seeing that hand on his chest covering the scar. “So... are you having fun already?!”, sparks began to come out from the broken floodlight, as a menace.
“I'll show you fun!” He yelled as he fastly threw a dark energy ball. She dodged, by getting a little impulse with the post, and rushed to the black monkey, precisely, trying to hit him with the lamp. Razor dodged some attacks, jumping and running along the scenary. “Do you think you can stop me with that?” He kept throwing a few energy spheres to Kancle, until finally, it got her. The electric monkey whined as she dropped the post.
“Khehe, that's too slow. What's wrong?”.
The mango monkey stood up, hiding the little, slowly growing pain on her knee. “I knew I'm not as fast as you. But at least, I'm hard to defeat”. She said with a firm tone, and brought from her hands, two little sparking spheres. “This is my best technique...just see”. Razor saw how she raised her hand and then hurled strongly the little ball yelling to her spectator. “Take this!!”. Razor tried to dodge but he couldn't... because Kancle didn't threw anything but a yell. The little spark was still stuck in her hand.
“Aw, but what the hell..?!”, and she began to shake her arm, trying to get rid of the stubborn sphery, while Razor was waiting, well...
“Stupid girl, what the hell was that?".
“Oh, it happened the last time she tried it against Kary. She has to touch her opponent”, the thinking blue monkey explained to herself.
“Fine, it doesn't matter”, she said giving in, “cuz I've advantage. I just have to get closer to you, so...”, she giggled.
“Razor, you better...” he could hear Ebony.
“Here it goes!!” Kancle yelled as she was flying at full speed and threatening with both sparking hands, to shock the astonished black monkey. “Better run!” Immediately Razor also flew at the same speed, followed by his opponent. The chase carried 'em out of the park, jumping through the highway and finnaly coming onto the streets of the lighting wonderful city; with Razor blowing a few boosts throughout behind. Of course the spectator Sarah wouldn't miss such cool battle; she ran carefuly behind 'em. Razor was getting distance, which was quickly stolen by Kancle, until a slight thought came to her mind as she ran. It could be dangerous fighting in such place since it happened to be some people in the streets. However, she ran fast again.
“Where are you going you coward?!”, she yelled, as Razor went jumping through the row of cars breaking upon him. Kancle took a metal piece from the mess of crashed cars, she transmited the electricity of her spheres to it and hurled the sparkly bar to the evil monkey, who was waiting for the attack from over a car and dodged easily. “Good idea, but I think it's already my turn to attack!
MONKEY MIND SCREAM!” Razor's attack soon blew several cars and everything that was in its way, and it sent several metalic pieces and Kancle to smash through the window of a cd's store. When it was quietly, Razor flew down slowly to wait for a reply. “Come out of there now! Or you wanna play hide-and-seek?”
“Uunf..” The female monkey lied on a bunch of cd packs, and saw one in front of her face. “Yuc, regaeton here? But that's crap!”.
“Kancle! What are you doing?”, Sarah said to the mango monkey from the entrance of the store, talking quietly but protesting.
“Huh?”
“You're letting this dude destroy the street with all this people in it!”
“...Damn, you're right, I... I just didn't notice!”.
Their discussion was interrupted by an energy blast next to her, making a hole in the floor and showing there was a ground floor. “Very well, if you wanna play, hide well!” Razor nailed his claws on the floor next to the window and soon it began to shake and colapsed, and the debris, with the whole monkey, fell on the subway station that was just under there.
· ·:LIVING IN THE RIDE:·
The evil monkey flew down again, landing in the center of the room. “Hehe, you can't hide from me, so come out! I can smell you...”.
“I wasn't trying to hide!”, he turned his head to see the female monkey standing up between the debris covering the floor. She noticed her injured leg was giving some trouble again, nothing she couldn't hide.
“So, what are you gonna do now?”
“Ah, its just, I'm trying to think...” she said with a tiny smile. Her attention was focused on the long whip she left out till the other side of the room, hidden between the debris, behind Razor. Then, she quickly retracted her weapon towards him, but it couldn't hit him, because he blocked the attack with a piece of wood he quickly took from the debris, and the whip rolled up.
“Attack from the back. Good try, but not enough, you can't surprise me”.
“Don't say that, I've seen your face every time I shocked you”. She pointed at him.
“Hehe, she's right”.
“Mm, really?...”, he said with frustration when he heard Ebony.
In that moment, the subway began to cross the scenary, passing by. And it seemed to give Razor an idea. “Hmhm. Ok, I guess it's my turn to see that face on you, with this...”, he smirked as he hurled the log with the whip to the subway, breaking one of its windows. And, precisely, Kancle's face went like...
“OH NOES! What've you done!”. Her face went totally shocked, seeing how her whip desappeared fastly into the tunel, until finnaly the rope tautened and the female monkey was snatched from the ground to go through the tunel with the big machine.
“Khahahaha! I won't miss this”, the evil monkey said and soon climbed on it.
“Dah! I gotta see that fight!”, and Sarah jumped too, just before the train leave her.
The lain left the tunel behind, to cross a simple but pleasant plain. Sarah was in the end of the train. Kancle, who was clung with all 8 fingers and 6 toes to one of the windows, at last could get over such situation, get her whip and climb to the roof, where Razor was waiting already.
“Did you miss me?”. She surprised, just before he used his claws and pushed her, still over the train.
“I'm amazed you didn't roast in the rail when you fell. You fight better than I expected”
“... If you say so”, she replied shrugging and smiling.
“But your luck won't last. Let's see how you fight in a place like this!”. He began to attack again, with little boomerangs and energy boosts. At first she just dodged, jumping with some trouble because of the trip, but then began to block the attacks with some lashes, just one bit to protect whoever was inside of the carriages. Untill one of his attacks rubbed againts her head, cutting her ribbon. She couldn't help whining as well when both ribbons covered her eyes.
“Aaaahh! Nuuuu!”. Then she pointed at Razor. “YOU!”
“What?”, he just asked
“Well, it doesn't matter, Sarah can work it out. But you will pay for this!” Her face was mad, in a funny way.
“I don't care about that, so try got me if you can”
She tried a lash on her opponent, but it failed for sure. The black monkey hurled a pair more of boosts, blocked by the whips. One of the deflected attacks hit a satelite dish that was on a small building ahead. Nobody noticed it fell, so it easily could hit something, Razor's head. Such hit made him stop his attacks and the mango monkey began to laugh at such funny thing.
“Arrr! Stop laughing you foolish!”
“Hahah.. woh, I know. why didn't I think of that? Look at this”. The electric monkey snapped her fingers in both hands, making a little pair of sparks, and the next time she saw the black monkey, his fur was bristled, just like a big plushie's. Kancle laughed once again, guffawing. Even the female monkey within him laughed one bit.
“What d- what the crap did you do!!”, he yelled with a angered, funny face, and trying to ger his fur to normal.
“Haha! I made good use of the wind to charge you with static electricity, thehe”, she said with relief, “aww, I needed laugh”.
“Argh, You will pay for this!”. He threw an energy boost next to her.
“Woops!”
In that moment, the train left the earth to cross a long bridge, above a gentle large river.
“Wait, that gives me another idea”, she said, most to herself. She tore a pipe from the roof of the carriage, and wrapped her whip around it.
“But what is she doing...?”, he saw with attention as she gave a current in it.
“Hey you, you can't dodge this!”, she said and hurled the pipe to Razor. He avoided for sure, but this time by magic, the pipe followed him, clinging on his wrists and then his forehead.
“But what..!”
“That stick's magnetized. She did that”, the inseparable spectator spoke again, sticking her nose out from the back of the last carriage. And the next he saw was the mango monkey hitting him with her open hand, shocking him and pushing him, and then Razor fell to the water, and Kancle flew off the train to watch.
“Ooh! The train is taking me away!” the blue monkey got astonished as she saw she was getting far and far from the two battling monkeys. She jumped, and held on the girders of the bridge. “Hey, you're winning, good job!”.
“Thanks. Well, he's taking long there...”
And suddendly, a great beam came out from the water, towards them. “Watch out Sarah!”, she pushed her to avoid the attack, and it hit the bridge, making a little part of it fall in pieces. But, “Mm?
WAH!”, Kancle cryed when she saw Sarah falling with the girders and debris.
“I can't fly like you! Remember?!”. And she catched her and leave her in the edge of the cliff.
“I'm so sorry..”
“You hadn't to do that. Avalon can take care of herself”. The evil monkey said, who appeared in midair a few yards from 'em.
“What you said? She can't fly”
“She wouldn't have gotten injures”, he said, “Besides, she hinders you”.
The yellow monkey stood in attack position, no saying a word.
Sarah knew there was some of truth on it. “I'm sorry Kancle”
“Khehehehe”, he laughed mockingly.
“Shut up and fight” She shot her whips at the black monkey, who dodged easily.
"Do you also know she works for Skeleton King?
"But she..."
...She did not intend to go back. Kancle did not realize how Sarah's life was in danger. If Razor had seen her, Skeleton King surely will know where she was. All the time she was being so careless..
“......Why would you want to work for Skeleton King anyway”.
"I have my own reason. Skeleton is the one who wants to dispose of this planet. Too bad for you and all those humans, you can't do anything for them."
"I couldn't care less..." She said her eyes down. Sort of worrisome to her friend.
"...Kancle?"
"Aw, a little girl like you does not care for the humans? So what are you, on vacation?"
The yellow monkey flew towards Razor to attack, like she didn't hear that last comment. Razor dodging easily again. "Or you where just told to save this world. But why to do it on your own. Five robot monkeys and a whole arsenal of freaks to save the precious Shuggazoom city, sounds kinda funny". The more he spoke, the more rage grew on Kancle, and the easier it was turning it for her opponent. Sarah felt sorrow with every comment Razor did, as she knew what effect that could have on Kancle. She wished he just shut up, though he wouldn't. He likes doing that, obviously.
Till a claw finaly striked her hard to the ground. He waited for her to stand up.
"They do not care about you, do they"
"NO! They don't! They got rid of me, saying I had to watch for this planet!"
"Kancle, that's not true! They didn't kno-"
"No Sarah! This is not about the brain wash! The master knew I was here! He knew, and he left me here! All I want is to get out of here! Don't you see?!"
"But why would he do that!"
Yes, why.
[To be continued............]
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Comments: 24
ChanceofClouds [2012-01-10 06:58:25 +0000 UTC]
You, you, you, you, WHEN DID YOU CHANGE IT? XD
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kancle In reply to ChanceofClouds [2012-01-11 00:08:50 +0000 UTC]
XDDDDDDDDDDDD The same day I saw the comic page. I wondered when would you find out.
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kancle In reply to Staraquil [2008-08-03 02:55:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I counted 4 in each hand, 3 in each foot... don't tell me those aren't fingers o0;
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Staraquil In reply to kancle [2008-08-03 03:04:07 +0000 UTC]
XD The 'fingers' on the feet are called toes in English.
BTW, why is this part 2?
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kancle In reply to Staraquil [2008-08-03 03:15:40 +0000 UTC]
oO Oh... english noob xD
oO Just part 2, have I to explain?
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Staraquil In reply to kancle [2008-08-03 03:18:00 +0000 UTC]
It's ok, I don't know any Spanish.
Oh, never mind I get it now, Sorry. XD
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sty2000 In reply to kancle [2009-09-11 03:11:02 +0000 UTC]
how the hell can you have less toes (or as you put it fingers in your feet)
than fingers...i thought you were supposed to have some symmetry there
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kancle In reply to sty2000 [2009-09-13 20:36:27 +0000 UTC]
You don't understand. The words "finger" and "toe" are exactly the same in spanish, and I didn't know that, so I translated it wrong :D
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sty2000 In reply to kancle [2009-09-17 19:28:35 +0000 UTC]
i'm just saying how can you have less on your feet than on your hands...i thought it was supposed to be the same amount
i wasn't commenting on what you called them
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kancle In reply to sty2000 [2009-09-26 17:29:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, do you mean why 4 fingers and only 3 toes? I'ts because of the fandom
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sinenV [2008-07-16 19:15:25 +0000 UTC]
0_o too... much... reading......
But really, good story!
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Staraquil [2008-07-16 04:04:32 +0000 UTC]
TTvTT THE WHOLE THING'S SO PRETTIFUL!!!!!!
Crap, I knew I should have asked what you had planned out for 'After Round 4!' D= gonna confuse me...
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kancle In reply to Staraquil [2008-07-26 02:26:25 +0000 UTC]
But nuuu! D= It's not your fault, but mine. I should have said you since first, I kept it always in mind, I'm so sorry!! Really DX
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Staraquil In reply to kancle [2008-07-26 02:32:43 +0000 UTC]
Be proud of this! It's wonderful!
XD I guess it's fine, BC's all over the place anyways.
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