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kantieb0 — i really dunnoe
Published: 2008-02-24 07:33:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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I liked the idea,"GIANT SCREWS! awexome!"
somewhere in the composition, I fell ot of love with the idea, so here it is in scraps, just takin up space...
thats orange-0 from
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wow.. you are getting really really good at this!! really good at backgrounds and stuff this is getting amazing
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is a cool idea but i see what yu mean bout the composition....
maybe you could revisit the idea...
but more dynamic, like with the view directly behind him?
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yup... this one got me started on a whole new aspect of drawing. dynamics... i need em... bad.
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Oh, man...that's a shame. This would've been awesome. It feels like a still out of a cartoon.
Critique: You really need to work on line quality. I think making your lines thinner and/or varying lengths will add depth to the character and make it more believeable. Also, little things like overlapping outlines (like around the knees) takes me right out of the picture.
More exagerrated use of the body would help, too. The pose doesn't feel natural. If he's sliding down, his body would be leaning forward and his arms would be leaning back, to counterbalance that. I don't know if that's how someone actually WOULD...but, it would look more believable. And that's what matters.
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