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KarmaDash β Outing with Twilight
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Published: 2013-09-25 20:19:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2245; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Time with aunt Twilight is full of lessons, though sometimes I don't know whet she means, I latter realize just what she meant. Today she was telling me about beauty, and how everything was beautiful, even thins that to me don't seem it. Soon I realized she was also talking about me, and my markings though she never did truly say. It make me feel better about being different, being me, and how though I may not think I'm the prettiest pony, to others I am.I still wonder why, I know my parents have a need to think I'm pretty, as well as Apple Jack, but the others don't need to lie ... was she really just talking about them?
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Yep, Zapple is a very bright girl though she may sometimes have a moments like her mother ^^ Most pony's think she is pretty in her own way, especially on the inside, but still ... she could buck your flank from ponyville to Canterlot hehe
Last up will be her with AJ ... I'm still not sure on what concept I should be going for.
Final note, my next (short) chapter of the story will be up as soon as ma Beta does her magic
Zapple (c) Me
Twilight Sparkle (c) Hasbro and
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hmm...this is just a thought, but her cutie mark should have been an zap apple.
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Nope, she wasn't bucking any zap apples when she got her cutiemark
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I don't even!
I cant!!Β
I just have lost the ability to can!!
Genetics kid!
There is no logic in this pony!
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The red part are birthmarks
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You know is not necessary to a child to have the same traits of the parents, right?
DonΒ΄t you remember the family cake?
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I do know that, but I wanted her to be this was
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You could mix colors of the coat of RD and Big mac, because the colors of the coat and the birth marks clash.
And of course i doesn't look good.
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1. Her coat would have been blue
2. Of the people I've met with birthmarks, they're pink/red in colour
3. This is my OC, you don't have to like it, just ignore it of you don't like it.
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Very helpful advice there. -.-
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And what did you expect?
A pat in the back and a bunch of stars?Β Β
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I actually didn't think you'd give a rude and retarded reply. How silly of me.
Really, is it necessary to be this assy towards people? I simply stated what you said wasn't really helpful at all, and your childish comment in return wasn't helpful nor needed either. A simple reply of "this is what i think and feel" would be more reasonable than "What did you expect, pat on the back and stars". I would have respected you a lot more for that reply than this one.
And to answer to what you ask: I hoped to not expect a stupid reply in return, but you didn't leave me hanging. Well done. I hope you grow up someday.
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Before you start acting ¨mature¨, i am not being an asshole, i am being honest and i am not acting like her friends and saying ¨Omg! is so adorable!!1¨ or ¨Is the best OC i have seen in my life!!1!¨ because that kind of stuff will not help the author to improve.
I know everybody do mistakes and they have their right to fix them.
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I'm "acting" mature because i am BEING mature. The comment you left of "I don't! I can't even! ect" at the start is NOT helpful advice at all. If you were trying to correct something in gentics (which she was sort of going on the correct line about in a way anyway) then that comment you left wasn't doing it in the right way. It made you look like a twat trying to be an ass, and nothing more.
And who said you had to be all kawai-eyed and be all "OMG best OC ever!" towards the piece of art? I simply stated your comment wasn't helpful, which it wasn't. We're all allowed our own opinions, but if your trying to leave helpful criticism then LEAVE helpful criticism. you'll get a lot more respect that way, and if the person you're trying to help gets assy at you, then you have every right to be see them as an immature person who can't take any advice. But... kinda hard to take good advice when you didn't leave any in the first place, see what I'm getting at?
But hey, take what i'm saying however you want. If you wanted to look like an ass to start with, then hey, you enjoy yaself there. But like how you said you're just being honest, then so am I - you really did just look like an ass. -shrug-
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I can tell you I AM brutally honest, so yeah somethings i look like an ass.
That is my biggest flaw.
Btw, i have already give her some constructive criticism, so don't thing i am some kind of stupid twat.Β
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Heh, I guess that does happen sometimes - "I think it looks like shit." "Hey, don't be an ass!" "...I'm just being honest. It really does look like shit." xD
Ah okay, but as i was saying - it was just the comment you left. If you already did off-screen then I don't have anything to say otherwise xD
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Well related to my original comment, yes, i write that following what i was feeling, it was like Β¨The heck is this?Β¨ so yeah, sorry.
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Makes sense, lol
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That's not how genetics work. It looks like you replaced random patches of filly rainbow dash with chunks of Big Macs skin.
Also, Aunts don't work like that either. Twilight isn't related to either Big Mac or Rainbow Dash.
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1. They are birthmarks
2. not by blood, but since the mane 6 are like sisters to eachother, they are like surrogate aunts
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I looked at the comments of another picture this person made, and it appears Zapple and RD almost died, the red markings are 'birthmarks' marking her survival.
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I don't get it either, but genetics CAN cause this sort of thing.
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Also, she calls Twilight her aunt because Twilight and Rainbow Dash are close friends.
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nice outing with twilight, but i read it as 'outing twilight' and was like NO WAY!?!?!?! and then read it again. its really sweet.
also bad horse!
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XD
Whose the bad horse?
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neither of them. Bad horse, bad horse, bad horse, he rides across the nation the thorough bred of sin. he got the application that you just gave in. it needs some consideration but let the games begin....that bad horse.
if you're confused watch dr horrible sing along blog.
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ugh.... thanks......
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EEP is something wrong i didnt mean to annoy you, sorry! D:
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no you didn't. i just didn't know how to reply. people never get what i mean on this sight. clearly just too sinister for here.
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Ahh ok XD
P.S - Her with the last aunt AJ will be uploaded soon ^^
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Wow, one aunt a day .. I think I did well
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you did very well. zapple looks so sweet.
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