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Hey guys! This is my first ever animation that I'm officially uploading onto dA.I'd love it if you could give me some tips on how i can improve.
This is really simple, but I'm still learning. Please be kind! ;u;
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AruCougar [2013-10-13 06:18:52 +0000 UTC]
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I really liked this. I think the over all base of it really is cute! I hope to see more like this in the future. You're a very talented artist, I really want to see more of you! I noticed on one of the teeth you can see a point is missing but other than that, you choose a good starting speed which really gives it a live animal feel to it. It's also a really cute cat, I hope you make it big time in the art world some day. And keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Aru Cougar
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AruCougar [2013-10-13 06:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Could I use this as a lineart if I give you the lineart credit?
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Koijot [2012-06-13 22:07:16 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing, would u ever consider doing a full body one that smiles like this and maybe a tail wag for a commission?
ive been looking for someone with good animation and drawing skills together to make a kind of page greeter for me.
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KatsaKitty In reply to Koijot [2012-06-14 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, thanks!
I was actually thinking about it but I never got around to it. Maybe I could start doing them though, I am done with school afterall. I'd love to make one for you if you'd like me too. ^-^ What are you willing to pay for one? I have no idea how to price them. xD
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Koijot In reply to KatsaKitty [2012-06-14 23:27:45 +0000 UTC]
i think the absolute highest i could go would be 40pts lowest i would go is 25 pts lol
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KatsaKitty In reply to Koijot [2012-06-19 23:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm well since it'll be my first one I guess I'll take 45 points but if I were to sell them more often I'd up the price. I'm not sure how it'll come out at first but if it comes out well, I'd sell them for more. So you're kind of lucky atm. xD I'll take the 45 points. c: What would you like?
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Koijot In reply to KatsaKitty [2012-06-19 23:59:13 +0000 UTC]
sure! wat information would u like, and in a not or a comment?
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KatsaKitty In reply to Koijot [2012-06-20 00:08:36 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to know what character you want, what you'd like it to be doing(nothing too complicated like walking) and I'd love for it to be in a note so I can keep track. c:
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Abwettar [2011-12-21 16:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow this is absaloutely brilliant! There's hardly anything I can see wrong with this, except that it is perhaps a tiny bit jerky in some places in which case I would suggest fiddling with timing and amount of frames But honestly this is brilliant <3333
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KatsaKitty In reply to Abwettar [2011-12-31 00:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'll be sure to take more time on my next animation so it isn't so jerky. <3
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Abwettar In reply to KatsaKitty [2012-01-08 12:11:42 +0000 UTC]
Not at all!
I actually think its amazing for your first one <333
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watervampirelore [2011-12-20 20:42:33 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing!!!!!!! for your first animation this is fantabulous!! the ear is absolutely adorable but the smile kinda creeps me out. it might just be me. overall AMAZING!!!!!!!
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KatsaKitty In reply to watervampirelore [2011-12-20 20:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Lol thanks vani <3
STARE AT IT VANI, STARE AT IT AND LET IT CREEP YOU OUT SO MUCH YOU HAVE NIGHTMARES. DOOO ITTTT.
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watervampirelore In reply to KatsaKitty [2011-12-30 15:08:05 +0000 UTC]
.... you can be really creepy sometimes you know that? and NEVER!!!!!
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KatsaKitty In reply to watervampirelore [2011-12-31 00:15:01 +0000 UTC]
Lol I know.
DO IT. YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO!
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watervampirelore In reply to KatsaKitty [2012-01-08 19:08:35 +0000 UTC]
ummmmm no i kinda dont...... but thanks for the offer
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A-Sweet-Wolf [2011-12-19 21:12:18 +0000 UTC]
awws that's so adorable X3 I wish my first animation was as smooth as that ^.^
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Shadow-Okami [2011-12-19 07:47:21 +0000 UTC]
Also, perhaps a frame would be best inserted in the ear motion when it heads from being side ways to fully side, then back. I guess, it seems kinda like a sudden jump?
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KatsaKitty In reply to Shadow-Okami [2011-12-20 20:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh i see what you mean, i hadn't noticed that. o.o
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Shadow-Okami In reply to KatsaKitty [2011-12-20 22:16:59 +0000 UTC]
I think that would help it, be, smoother? :3 Aside from that, you really did great n.n
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Shadow-Okami [2011-12-19 07:46:39 +0000 UTC]
First off, Nadie, this is amazing. :3 I love it, you did so great! If I had any sort of...critique, I guess it would be, maybe adding a pause between the ear and "smile meow". Or, maybe making the ear flick twice? Just to give it that sensation, y'know?
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KatsaKitty In reply to Shadow-Okami [2011-12-20 20:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you <3
Ah okay, will do in the future!
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Shadow-Okami In reply to KatsaKitty [2011-12-20 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]
X3 You're welcome, and neat-o.
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Snowy-Ninja [2011-12-19 00:12:03 +0000 UTC]
Well i can say its quite good but i would have a longer pause between the ear twitch an the smile Also when cats meow they tend to keep there eyes open but i guess you want a smiling action rather then a meowing action. May i ask what you used to make this animation?
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KatsaKitty In reply to Snowy-Ninja [2011-12-20 20:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, I'll keep those things in mind.
All i used was gimp and saved it as a gif file.
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