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KauseNeffect — Summer Time
Published: 2011-01-10 01:33:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description A gentle wisp of summer air
blows away all earthly cares.

A shower of pure crystal rain
falls upon a dusty lane.

A Meadowlark trills through the day
warming with the sun lights ray.

The oceans shore reflects the light
twilight stars shine clear and bright.

The heat of day and cool of dark
Leaves behind its gentle mark.

The hum of insects in the brush
helps to slow the hurried rush.
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Comments: 11

classicalmom5 [2011-01-11 04:41:31 +0000 UTC]

This is a very nice poem. You should try writing another.

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KauseNeffect In reply to classicalmom5 [2011-01-11 04:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Is that a challenge? LOL!

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classicalmom5 In reply to KauseNeffect [2011-01-11 05:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Not everything is a challenge.
It is an offer of encouragement.

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KauseNeffect In reply to classicalmom5 [2011-01-11 05:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh...my bad.

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classicalmom5 In reply to KauseNeffect [2011-01-11 05:40:10 +0000 UTC]

You're so funny

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Tobiaskahn [2011-01-10 02:41:23 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. I like it a lot.

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KauseNeffect In reply to Tobiaskahn [2011-01-10 03:33:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!!

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Tobiaskahn In reply to KauseNeffect [2011-01-10 05:56:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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furba4eva [2011-01-10 01:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Which aunt?

Anyway, it's very nice! I like it!!!

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KauseNeffect In reply to furba4eva [2011-01-10 02:29:21 +0000 UTC]

The one in Orlando
Thanks!

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furba4eva In reply to KauseNeffect [2011-01-10 02:29:50 +0000 UTC]

OH! Cool! I'm sure she loved it!

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