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Published: 2005-10-10 10:51:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2248; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 58
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I love your gentle hand on mine,The softness of your skin.
I love the way you make me laugh,
The way you smell like spring.
I love the way you do your hair,
So I might love you more,
Although your hair could be a mess,
And I’d love you just as sure.
I love the way you look at me,
When you think I won’t notice.
If we are actors in a play,
I thank the one who wrote us.
I love the way you speak to me,
As though I understand.
I love the way you’re such a boy,
And yet, you’re such a man.
I love the way you’re just yourself,
The way your head’s on straight.
I love the way you smile at me,
The way you’re never late.
Of all the things I love you for,
There’s one that’s beat by none.
I love the way you seem to think,
That you’re the lucky one.
Comments: 59
midgetness [2005-10-10 10:55:14 +0000 UTC]
omg *loves*
the rhythm is good and consistent and its like the happy version of the poem from 10 things i hate about you
totally giving the link to my bf
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kavindra In reply to midgetness [2005-10-11 03:32:51 +0000 UTC]
lol. i gave it to mine and he loved it. i'm glad you like it so much.
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midgetness In reply to kavindra [2005-10-11 09:36:37 +0000 UTC]
hehe, yea whoever said boys dont like mushy stuff should be covered in sugar, dunked in apple juice and served with chocolate sauce. ...dont ask me why its just the way it should be
and coolies! hehe, yea, mine loved it also, tho he wanted to contradict me on the last few lines
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kavindra In reply to midgetness [2005-10-11 10:09:28 +0000 UTC]
lol. glad it worked. i think sugar and apple juice and chocolate sauce would go nicely together.
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kavindra In reply to crimson-whitefang [2005-10-11 03:31:40 +0000 UTC]
omg! thankyou so much! yay!
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