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Published: 2007-08-28 03:47:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 138609; Favourites: 1646; Downloads: 918
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Even so, Swiftkill should have a little blood on her lips, or somewhere
seeing as she took Diamondhead's eye out (that dude is gonna get scarred for life),but there is completely nothing there, dry. Unless there was some and she lickedit or something, but whatever.
But good luck with that editing
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Hehe.. I like both pages so much so.. *shrug* xDD
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Awesome! 
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yea i already did I just didnt feel like uploading yet
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my eye!!! ahhhhhhh!!! lol great job
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Lovely work!! Thank you for changing the kill to something less lethal. I agree with Rui-rui. It seems more appropriate for Swiftkill too
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Nice how you changed the kill to a simple eye attack. It seems more appropriate for the position Swift is in. -nod-
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Oooh! I like the change! Do I sense a background story for Marco? Dun dun dun!
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Definately like this version better than the old one. With the text and poses, i mean.
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I like it better that Swiftkill doesn't kill him, it makes her seem more innocent!
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Lol, he got a name this time around! No more Harry Potter.
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how comeyou made page 12 different, cuase i have another page 12 and it looks different????
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Awww, she only got his eye this time. Well, that just goes to show that Swifty IS good after all <3
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The eye cutted out is maybe more painful than dying... Nice changing... *steals swiftkill&hugs her to the ground*
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Maro's teeth look really big in that "DIE!" frame.. o.o
still love it though
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Well, with Maro not dieing in it now, i think it makes more sense, as i read one of the other pages where she said she would fight the pack, but protect them at the same time, i think thats right anyway
Awesome work on the redux, beautiful artwork as always
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i luv it. i can't wait for more pages
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I like this version more, I must say. More punishment; death is an easy way out for Maro. Nice job.
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Ouch. Poor Maro! I'm glad to see that Swift didn't kill him this time around, though.
Page 12 redux is absolutely beautiful!
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nice, but Swiftkill kinda looks a bit cross-eyed in the last panel
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WOW! I always love wolves. I remember seeing the wolves in Yellowstone.
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rapier will give you mating privileges? oh man, YEAH RIGHT haha.
for someone as 'boring ol' me' you sure know how to make fresh ideas. i love each redux page, it really shows how much you've improved, not just in your artistic style.
PPAAIINN
without LOOVEEE
PAAAIINN
CAN'T GET ENNOUGHH
yeah ok
~LK
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ty! and yes rapier is a liar
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Poor one-eye'd Haro...well, she could have done worse...
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Wow! It's really fascinating watching your talents improve more and more as you make the comic. You are really good at making your characters have emotion. You are so....so....SO AWESOME!! I can't wait for the next page!
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I actually kinda liked the old one better; he lectured her on keeping her throat exposed, then turned around and got his torn open as well. But I do like how you've tweaked the story. That means he may come back. *suspenseful music*
But if you've tweaked here, where else? I hope they are good ones!
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I must say I like this version better. She said she tried to protect them, well she didn't have much choice, but at least she didn't kill him
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Trop belle cette page ^^Je préfère comme ça cela fait Swiftkill plus gentil.
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AMAZING.... wow. YOU TWO HAVE OUTDONE YOURSELVES NOW!!!!!!
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Ouch! I'm not sure if having your eye torn out is more merciful than death 0_o'
Dammit, but this comic is awesome
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LOVE The Redux,so much more emotion in this. Awesome work!
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ROFL!!!!!!!!!!! MY EYE!!! lol. i had to laugh......maro is such a whimp...your anatomy rocks, and the backgrounds and lineart is just lovely!
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i have to laugh at my own corny lines, sometimes. But I love them 
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ya, they really rulez! ^^ bloodspills my fav character, she such a bad-ass!
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