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Published: 2008-03-18 05:08:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 155734; Favourites: 2038; Downloads: 2015
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next: [link]PG 3, saved for web so as usual, colors are different than will be in the printed book. But i hope it looks good anyway
Well, Enjoy! hopefully pg 4 wont be that far off.
Thanks for your patience!
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You three are doing great! Can't wait to se ethe next page!!! I love the cave - its not too dark, but there is just enough light. ANd I love how the little water stream flows right around the rock where the elders are. I like Swift's grandfather's design ;D EVerything's so neat in that cave!! ^^
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i'm completely obsesed with your comic! i just love the art work and everything about it! Keep up the good work you three!
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lovely^^ good work
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I love the grey wolf on the bottom left of the last panel-very awesome color pattern!
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HAZA!!! I was wating for Swifty's Grandpa to make an entrancin the comic
Oh and I LOVE the elders, they give that alomost mysitious feeling. The gray Wolf with the Green eyes laying on the flour is beautiful..I saw a wolf JUST like that i real life (live in Montana you see them in your back yard alot
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Yeah! I've been waiting so long for this, thanx so much for updating!
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Excellent as always, Kay
The speech bubble pattern threw me off as well just a bit, but it's still nice.
So if the orange one is Swift's grandsire, what about her parents and grandmother? Dead, I guess?
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so cool!
and a quick question, if you can't answer it thats fine.
Is Reicher born yet? xD
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Have Blood and blade even met yet? Or is that a secret?
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oh! thats exciting! xD
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That orange elder is a stud!
I can see where Bloodspill gets her looks.
What is his name? (has it been released?)
I'm soooo excited for more! It gets better and better!!!
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Wonderfull! Can't wait for more ^^
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oh I like that white wolf there
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wow.....this one Is so great again
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outstandingg!! when i start my commic , i will always think of how sucsessful you are and i think, will i ever be able to do it too? but anyway, i love the disign of your wolves the detail is awsome!
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i luv these comics ^-^ there like crack for the soul
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btw who is the orange and white wolf i think the grey one is gravesong but i'm stuped about the other two besides shaman and gravesong i think unless i'm wrong lol
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YAY it looks great kay i like it cant wait for pg 4
Yeah a new page ! Thank you !
I really love your comic !
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great wonderfull excellent lol i love every page you do
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The quality has been growing, though I must admit that the speech bubble patterns threw me for a loop and were very confusing how they were placed. It took me a few times to actually figure out the whole thing. All in all, a nice page.
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Hi there! Thanks for the comment. Do you think you could tell us what bubbles exactly you were tripping up on and why so that we could work on improving it?
Thanks!
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Of course. Mainly, I had trouble following the long speech bubble connecting the third panel (of Swiftkill approaching) throughout the discussion of the elders. The other was the 7th panel, or the last, left column. It was my instinct to read the speech bubble above then below, rather than the other way around. So I saw it backwards like, "Indeed we have." "Here's yours, grandsire.. etc."
An interesting page, however. I'm surprised that the elders weren't especially hesitant to the ones who exiled them.
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i'm not sure about ~PhantomSeeker , but i got confused in the long, middle pannel...
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doesn't really get more professional than this huh?
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Cool! I love the angles alot, and the lighting. Awesome.
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The lighting in some of the panels creates a very exquisite effect. Snowfall's face/body is particularly convincing.
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The lighting in some of the panels creates a very exquisite effect. Snowfall's face/body is particularly convincing.
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Beautiful!!!!! I love it, cant wait for the one...
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And love all the neat markings on each character, especially on the elders.
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nice. i love the colors in this comic. the only problem with this page though is that the word placing in second to last panel is kind of distracting. i tend to look at "Indeed we have" instead of Swiftkill talking first.
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Thanks! I have made a note about it for possible future revisions.
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wow great job kay i love swift grandpa
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YEAY! More!!
I love the elder's markings/design. Keep it up Kay!
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Yay! Snowfall finally makes an appearance n_n
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where can you buy your comics?
i NEED IT.
-drools-
:awestruck:
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you can buy it here [link]
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wow that was pretty quick! thank you. I cant even think to descripe the comic in words these days. This is just all the way. 110% A+++ i LOVE it
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hey I saw Shaman!
Or at least... It looked like Shaman in the last panel o_O
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wow, another brilliant page! congratz! you must be feeling quite fufilled!
Its a pitty this isnt a series or a movie! I bet it would sell big! we need these kinds of good stories with really good char designs.
Maybe someday you'll manage that, who knows? 
ps. the elders...dont look too elderly, except the grayish one, maybe their recent elders?XD
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Wow! We got some good stuff rolling on here!
Nice job!
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