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next: [link]PG 3, saved for web so as usual, colors are different than will be in the printed book. But i hope it looks good anyway
Well, Enjoy! hopefully pg 4 wont be that far off.
Thanks for your patience!
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Comments: 428
Koeyohte [2008-03-20 00:35:56 +0000 UTC]
You three are doing great! Can't wait to se ethe next page!!! I love the cave - its not too dark, but there is just enough light. ANd I love how the little water stream flows right around the rock where the elders are. I like Swift's grandfather's design ;D EVerything's so neat in that cave!! ^^
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Al-ua-re [2008-03-20 00:21:17 +0000 UTC]
i'm completely obsesed with your comic! i just love the art work and everything about it! Keep up the good work you three!
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SweGizmo In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 23:42:43 +0000 UTC]
lovely^^ good work the old one looks cool^^ hehe
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Sierra627 In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 21:47:06 +0000 UTC]
I love the grey wolf on the bottom left of the last panel-very awesome color pattern!
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PureRubyDragon In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 20:42:37 +0000 UTC]
HAZA!!! I was wating for Swifty's Grandpa to make an entrancin the comic ....Wait? the Orange wolf is her grandpa right?
Oh and I LOVE the elders, they give that alomost mysitious feeling. The gray Wolf with the Green eyes laying on the flour is beautiful..I saw a wolf JUST like that i real life (live in Montana you see them in your back yard alot )
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zutarafan15 In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 20:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! I've been waiting so long for this, thanx so much for updating!
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Mokisaur [2008-03-19 20:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Excellent as always, Kay And I love seeing new characters!
The speech bubble pattern threw me off as well just a bit, but it's still nice.
So if the orange one is Swift's grandsire, what about her parents and grandmother? Dead, I guess?
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EmeraldsJuran [2008-03-19 19:10:49 +0000 UTC]
so cool!
and a quick question, if you can't answer it thats fine.
Is Reicher born yet? xD
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onelilmonkey654 In reply to FablePaint [2008-03-24 01:30:19 +0000 UTC]
Have Blood and blade even met yet? Or is that a secret?
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EmeraldsJuran In reply to FablePaint [2008-03-20 04:36:38 +0000 UTC]
oh! thats exciting! xD
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Zaiakai In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 17:51:49 +0000 UTC]
That orange elder is a stud!
I can see where Bloodspill gets her looks.
What is his name? (has it been released?)
I'm soooo excited for more! It gets better and better!!!
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L-Young In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 17:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Wonderfull! Can't wait for more ^^
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Ruby-Ghoul In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 17:06:31 +0000 UTC]
oh I like that white wolf there
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Teliko-Pardus In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 16:54:17 +0000 UTC]
wow.....this one Is so great again The Rocks in the background looks just much more than amazing...especially the inside of the Cave
Really intersting talkings in this one
And i like the "new characters" very much too...itΒ΄s getting more interesting with every page you draw
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Wolfy-94 [2008-03-19 16:12:42 +0000 UTC]
outstandingg!! when i start my commic , i will always think of how sucsessful you are and i think, will i ever be able to do it too? but anyway, i love the disign of your wolves the detail is awsome!
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alone-and-ignored [2008-03-19 15:17:17 +0000 UTC]
i luv these comics ^-^ there like crack for the soul
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kyuubi2012 In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 14:06:57 +0000 UTC]
btw who is the orange and white wolf i think the grey one is gravesong but i'm stuped about the other two besides shaman and gravesong i think unless i'm wrong lol
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kyuubi2012 [2008-03-19 14:03:28 +0000 UTC]
YAY it looks great kay i like it cant wait for pg 4
zejunkies [2008-03-19 13:05:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah a new page ! Thank you !
I really love your comic !
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sexything18 [2008-03-19 12:00:13 +0000 UTC]
great wonderfull excellent lol i love every page you do
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PhantomSeeker In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 05:28:32 +0000 UTC]
The quality has been growing, though I must admit that the speech bubble patterns threw me for a loop and were very confusing how they were placed. It took me a few times to actually figure out the whole thing. All in all, a nice page.
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KayFedewa In reply to PhantomSeeker [2008-03-19 06:26:03 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! Thanks for the comment. Do you think you could tell us what bubbles exactly you were tripping up on and why so that we could work on improving it?
Thanks!
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PhantomSeeker In reply to KayFedewa [2008-03-19 13:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Of course. Mainly, I had trouble following the long speech bubble connecting the third panel (of Swiftkill approaching) throughout the discussion of the elders. The other was the 7th panel, or the last, left column. It was my instinct to read the speech bubble above then below, rather than the other way around. So I saw it backwards like, "Indeed we have." "Here's yours, grandsire.. etc."
An interesting page, however. I'm surprised that the elders weren't especially hesitant to the ones who exiled them.
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SpiritOfTheWild In reply to KayFedewa [2008-03-19 08:03:51 +0000 UTC]
i'm not sure about ~PhantomSeeker , but i got confused in the long, middle pannel...
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okamiyoukai259 [2008-03-19 05:13:21 +0000 UTC]
doesn't really get more professional than this huh?
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Plot-Chick In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 04:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Cool! I love the angles alot, and the lighting. Awesome.
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Smocksinabox [2008-03-19 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]
The lighting in some of the panels creates a very exquisite effect. Snowfall's face/body is particularly convincing.
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Smocksinabox [2008-03-19 03:51:35 +0000 UTC]
The lighting in some of the panels creates a very exquisite effect. Snowfall's face/body is particularly convincing.
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OPALwhitedragon In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 03:33:40 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!!!!! I love it, cant wait for the one...
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Demi-Wolf-Stef In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 03:22:23 +0000 UTC]
And love all the neat markings on each character, especially on the elders.
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Lyecoan In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 02:55:14 +0000 UTC]
nice. i love the colors in this comic. the only problem with this page though is that the word placing in second to last panel is kind of distracting. i tend to look at "Indeed we have" instead of Swiftkill talking first.
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KayFedewa In reply to Lyecoan [2008-03-19 06:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I have made a note about it for possible future revisions.
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ALLENeye In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 02:17:24 +0000 UTC]
wow great job kay i love swift grandpa
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Gweakles In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]
YEAY! More!!
I love the elder's markings/design. Keep it up Kay!
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myscruffy [2008-03-19 02:06:57 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Snowfall finally makes an appearance n_n
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swiftkilltephra31 In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 01:59:08 +0000 UTC]
where can you buy your comics?
i NEED IT.
-drools-
:awestruck:
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Xio101 In reply to swiftkilltephra31 [2008-03-19 03:22:24 +0000 UTC]
you can buy it here [link]
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MisBlondey In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 01:52:49 +0000 UTC]
wow that was pretty quick! thank you. I cant even think to descripe the comic in words these days. This is just all the way. 110% A+++ i LOVE it
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Leonhart-Strife In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 01:36:31 +0000 UTC]
hey I saw Shaman!
Or at least... It looked like Shaman in the last panel o_O
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LyricaBelachium In reply to ??? [2008-03-19 01:25:12 +0000 UTC]
wow, another brilliant page! congratz! you must be feeling quite fufilled!
Its a pitty this isnt a series or a movie! I bet it would sell big! we need these kinds of good stories with really good char designs.
Maybe someday you'll manage that, who knows? I'll be dreaming of it XD
ps. the elders...dont look too elderly, except the grayish one, maybe their recent elders?XD
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GiantSnake33 [2008-03-19 01:16:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow! We got some good stuff rolling on here!
Nice job!
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