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She isn't the omega, that was an oopsie on the desc part of the site (I've been poking Kay to change it ever since she put the site back up). The tan wolf is "Tannywolf", our comic's Kenny. He's so generic we reuse his design for dead wolves, so you'll see a dead or injured "Tannywolf" every issue. His purpose is basically to make us laugh, it's good not to take these things too seriously..
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Oh, XD. Just saying that makes me wanna buy every issue. How many issues are there?
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So far only 1, we'll make as many as necessary.
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Who is the blond wolf with Kita in the first panel?
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Are you going to give Kita a character sheet any time soon?
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you're very good on scene composition, I believe you're also protend more to make this as an animated movie, more than a comic = )
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This looks great. I love your comic so much!
However I see two problems that I don't think have already been pointed out.
The first is in the last panle.
All the text fits nicely in the other speach bubbles untill the last. It seems like the text is a little to big.
and second is also in the last panle.
"Two scouts we can spare directions to travel five days beyond our southernmost border"
Am I just dumb or does this sentance not make any since?
Thats all, keep up the great work! I can't wait to get my hands on a copy of this
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hehe the sentance is "Give two scouts we can spare directions to travel five days beyond our southernmost border."
It makes sense
Hope you buy it anyway! it will be onsale soon!!
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Oh... hehe 
I am so gonna buy it!
Just have to get my money together.
(I might not be able to get the day it comes out but I'll do my best to get it as soon as I can... Cuz I wants it 
btw: where do I go to see how much it is?
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hate to reply to my own comment but I just re-read it for the hundreth time and it finely clicked!
Now I know I was being dumb. Anyway...yeah.
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P.S. Who's the blond wolf with Kita?
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Hey do you read warriors by any chance?
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I didn't see the one put up before, but I didn't have dA before either. I've seen a random few, and I always love the details.
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so genius.....i canΒ΄t wait for the comic too
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I like it very much!
I'm no expert, but the tree on the third pannel (it might just be me) draws my eyes to it to fast- it kinda distracts me while I'm trying to read the text and look at the subjects...
You could try softening the tree a bit, or something. Just thought I might offer some help...
-waits to be slapped-
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we should prolly blur it ya
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Whitewind's so pretty, Kay. <3
And, to ESDA, the backrounds are very lovely, indeed.
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what's the difference? shading? i cant really tell.
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This page is one of my favorites. I love the second panel to bits.
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The Lighting looks loads better. And I see the wording has changed quite a bit. But in the second panel, Whitewind's fur is blowing one way and Kita's is blowing the other... was that an intentional thing?
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it's blowing straight towards you, that's why it looks that way
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The wolves looks very beauty and Majestic!
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The anatomy is incredible and the Backgrounds are always so well done. XD <3
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this comic is absolutely blowing my mind. All the re-do's and new versions and it all comes together as a truly breathtaking piece of work.
Wonderful job to the both of you! Best collabs I have seen in quite some time!
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I love how Whitewind looks in the second panel. Cutting off her eyes was a good effect too!
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Good page, I didn't even notice the spelling mistakes.
What I am though having problems with is the first panel, which is mirrored from the old version. It clashes with the final panel the most, as in the first, we see the dead tree lean to right, but in the last, it leans to left.
I'm actually curious of what prompted the mirroring. Geographical locations? Or was it just to be pretty or were the character locations off in the old comic?
Anyway, good comic, can't wait for the print.
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if you recall, the speech bubbles criss-crossed and it wasnt clear which to read in what order.
I'll talk to erin about fixing the tree in that panelso it goes the right way
we noticed the discrepensy but were really hoping no one would notice
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Great work as always ^_^ Love the expressions.
And the background is awesome
Heh, can't wait for it to go on sale ^_^
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And i LOVE Kita's expression when he says he's sorry!! Hes so adorable!
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Great work, this is better too. The lighting is calmer and its more detailed. Great job!
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cant wait for the comic XD
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Ohmyfreakinggoossshhh
Kita's expression when he's saying sorry is to DIE for.
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So schweet! Once I get enough money, I'm so buying. Your gonna tell us when they are ready for sale, right?
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*whacks you for not finding typos!!*
*whacks self for making them*
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Er, this page, "obselete" was the other page.
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I'll make a point of reading it more closely next time. You could also try posting it in a text editing document and doing spell check. The "father" thing on the other page might not show up, but "obselete" will.
BUT THIS IS WHY OUR FANS ARE GREAT! They spot the teeny mistakes WE miss.
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jay is the doof who wrote that in. i trusted thats how it was spelled so i left it
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schweet! Can't wait for it then.
Take care you two,
Rocky *grin*
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think it says "we were pushed father back" not "farther back"
or maybe it's just me :S
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Wrong emoticon hehe woops
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Sigh, there's always 1 typo that escapes my notice
I dont know what id do without you
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