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Whitewind really reminds me of Bluestar from Warriors, especially in the last panel!
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in the last panel, whitewind looks soooo great, i just really really adore this picture<33
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Ikr. I love it. I wish I was able to draw backgrounds like that.
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do love her so much, and feel her close, also to my char, i admire your artworks from time ago, and you still surprise me, congrats!!!!!!!
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Man I am trying so hard to find first page XD
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The BBA comic is currently discontinued, however there have been whispers of a reworking of the comics. Though I'm not sure about that, Kay and ESDA both are very busy.
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your selling this! -feels dizzy for Moment- wow must be big money! this is my bible lol! and i agree lady whitewind DOSE seem like Bluestar!
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Very nice art! I wish to be able to draw like you. But that won't happen for a while. o,e
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i like it so far, good job on lady whitewind, reminds me of bluestar
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-... I was gonna say that. e,e
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I like Kita's coloring.It makes him look so teddy bear-ish ;D
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Your backgrounds are so detailed, damn I wish I could do that!
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I will remain a fan too! You're work is MUCH better than mine!
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Your work is awesone, and I'll always remain a fan!
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Here i go to be a critque here:
First off- these characters are so un put-together its not even funny- your bringing in characters every other second without metioning there names- like the two you just showed in the first panel.
second- The second panel is lacking so much detail its not even something to joke about. The brown wolfs head looks to big for his\her body and looks like it might just fall right over. Also in the first panel- the yellow wolfs head- whats up with that? im not sure if the line through his face was a mistake but it looks like he has surfer hair and just came back from the beach. The second panel again- Fightwind or whatevers fur is so messed up. Its all chunky and rounded.
Thrid panel is fine i guess- that or the amazing BG is just hiding the mistakes like i fear the rest of the book does. And the perspective- on the first panel the tree is fairly large but as the panels go on it seems the tree increases in size and becomes more slender
The last panel is horrible. there. i said it. Horrible. FightWind is just sketched and she has no real coloring. I can see the sketched lines and it looks very trashy :\ How much time did you really spend on that box? because i believe photoshop is failing to meet your 'high standerds' (sorry for my spelling)
You really need to work harder if your planning to get anymore 'fans'. The book itself is so unput together- i can easly sum it up- some wolves get invaided and the alpha dies. Other alpha is sad and calls for the BlackBloods. Wolfy number one and wolfy number two go out and meet them and the blackbloods tell them a bedtime story of how they became blackbloods. the end.
You need to find a new hobby- Kay. Because making comics just arent your thing. I've writen a whole series of a comic, Hun so dont think of me as 'just another critque' because im trying to help you when i say this- for the sake of your fans, do NOT continue this series because i have a bad feeling for it if you do. But your little friend, esda06 might has a good chance if she starts her own because the only reason i put myself through with reading this book is because the BGs are amazing.
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That's not true!!!!!!!!!!! I THINK THIS COMIC IS AMAZING!!!!!! and i'm sure that almost everyone else agrees!!!!! I want this comic to be continued! no matter what YOU say!!!!! If u say this is bad, critques are just not your thing! the comic itself has so many fans, including me, and many of my friends!!!! I don't see anything wrong with this comic, and if u keep being rude, she won't continue it! So just stop with your lame critques, because i and many others want her to continue this comic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Learn to respect someones hard work before you start spamming on someone with you're pathetic little critiques like this one that you've wrote her. You are just jealous on her and Esda06. Because they are famous and amazing. And you are nothing but a loser who have no life.
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If your actually going to take your time on shit talking someone's work, YOU need a new hobby. Don't tell them to stop their comic, its called improving. Not everyone can be perfect and make there pages look they deserve a fucking gold medal. And your not being a critique, your pointing out all the bad things without even giving small hints to improve.
A critique is someone who, yes, points out the mistakes, BUT they also give helpful advice on how to fix those mistakes. If you made a full comic series, I would expect you to give advice to someone who's goal is to make a comic. And obviously they have plenty of fans, and are even selling.
Their art looks amazing despite small mistakes, that to you seem huge.
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Hey, you are right, finally some one who is being critique (I failed 6th grade english so,. . ) And Kay, you need to update the Wiki about your Comic, nobody even uploaded a PICTURE of BLOODSPILL!!!Also, you NEED to add MORE PAGES, I read this comic a YEAR ago, and there hasen't benn ONE new page!!!!!!!!! And stop getting your idea's from the GINGA series!!!
"If you can't beat them, Don't JOIN EM, hire some one ELSE to kill them!"
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Umm.... Excuse me? That is rude to just come and tell her to stop making comics even though it is a critque.
She puts a lot of effort in her comics and if you do not like it, then don't comment.
What would do if you some one came up to you and said you artwork is horrible and is pointless for people to see?
If you don't want people to do that to you, then don't do it to people.
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I know this isn't to me but, . . . . . . .
Ever heard of "Sticks And Stones?"
"If you can't kill em, Don't JOIN EM, hire some one ELSE to kill them!"
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Okk...you don't need to be mean. It looks like you put a lot of "good" time and effort into making this critique, and if I was an artist I'd appreciate that (although it stings), but I don't think it's very nice to tell people that "comics just aren't their thing"...If they want to do it that's alright, it's not going to kill anybody or anything like that.
*She has a lot of fans*
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Ah, now I see why this user was banned.
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Exiting, indeed. Lady Whitewind sure looks like a good leader, though
And who could these Blackblood wolves be?
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Though rare, some adult wolfs do have blue eyes..So fail to you,my friend. Fail to you.
(To SparklesfortheWIN)
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Adult wolves don't have blue eyes LMFAO FAIL
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i bet u couldn't draw better yourself!
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You're just jealous of her amazing talent. -.-
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