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Last page of Swiftkill being emo, I swearz. Lol
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Wolf-Outcast-13 [2008-07-01 16:55:40 +0000 UTC]
I love your novel! And I think you could actually make a movie or something over the novels' story. I'd give it 5/5 stars!
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DranineStone [2008-07-01 16:51:07 +0000 UTC]
poor swift kill.... i haven't been on furc in forever *pins ears back*
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FromtheSoul4 [2008-06-30 23:16:05 +0000 UTC]
your comic is going great! keep up the good work!
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bloodpaw94 [2008-06-30 22:14:19 +0000 UTC]
weey how many pg is there going to be in issu 2??
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vaporeongirl55cc [2008-06-29 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]
wow ur art is awsome wich reminds me may i please have a request
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Hannibalistic-Xx In reply to vaporeongirl55cc [2008-07-09 18:28:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...She's really gonna reply to that..
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Kittenbites In reply to ??? [2008-06-27 23:24:48 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful comic.
You have improved alot in your artwork and your characters are so original. Hope you do well in your future works, I'm looking forward to it. ^^
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MyFakeNameAgain [2008-06-27 22:49:26 +0000 UTC]
ooooooooo! Nice storyline! When does the next one come out?
is there going to be a fight?
I hope so
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cottoncritter [2008-06-27 00:48:17 +0000 UTC]
I love these comics. <3 Awesome job, as usual!
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TheCynicalHound In reply to ??? [2008-06-26 02:32:59 +0000 UTC]
no offense, but this page kinda jump cuts. Ok, we last see Blood looking out at Swift as she runs off, ( I don't know weather blood was just looking out or was she was walking out, but it seem she was just standing and watching Swiftkill run off ) but this page just jumps to when she is right next to her and looks as though she is following her older sister. I can't really explain it but here is a suggestion (and it is JUST that, you don't have to take it) but after page 4 you could always add in a extra page where Blood follows and maybe asks where she is going, and Swift goes on about how she THINK the elders are foolish to help Whitewind and how she swears to herself that she would never help Inarnia showing off her bitterness while Bloodspill just stands and listens, then agrees with her sister and they are about to walk off into the desert, maybe having Swift say something like:
"Blood....Why do they want to help them? After what Inarnia did to us-making us live out in this wasteland. How could our own elders be so FOOLISH as to help them? - but worse makin' me lead the way. I swear on my very soul I will NEVER go back."
Maybe not that, but something similar
and THEN you can go onto this page. meanwhile we can see some interaction with only Blood and Swift, and shows what kind of sibling relationship they have.
But again, I am ONLY stating my opinion and giving off a suggestion. nothing else.
Other than that, the art is nice.
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KayFedewa In reply to TheCynicalHound [2008-06-27 06:46:59 +0000 UTC]
yea i see your point. Sometimes me and Erin do go back in an add filler pages after we do a final review of all the pages we've done. So we'll def take it into consideration. Thanks!
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TheCynicalHound In reply to KayFedewa [2008-06-27 17:19:58 +0000 UTC]
No problem. glad you are considering it. ^^
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Rarakie In reply to TheCynicalHound [2008-06-26 22:20:15 +0000 UTC]
I kinda got confused at that part too I must say.
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ILOVEEXPERIMENT626 [2008-06-25 17:17:23 +0000 UTC]
^^ omhz this is great!!!! lols her being emo ^^
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Amriah [2008-06-24 23:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Bloodspil always makes the cynical, pessimistic comments as usual. It's awesome.
Love it, as usual. Nightrun is my favorite character for some reason though.
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21stcenturybard [2008-06-24 23:02:16 +0000 UTC]
That's not emo. That's just...um...I dunno. But emo would be more like, "oh, woe is me", without so much anger.
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ASWwolves In reply to ??? [2008-06-23 16:18:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh goodness, Kay! You've made me have to explain Emo to my little sis xD Now she's going around saying," Emo Swifty, oh no!" She's 10 but I swear she's got the mind of like...a 3 year old xD Awesome as always and thanks Kay xD
~Espeo~
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KayFedewa In reply to ASWwolves [2008-06-24 21:34:45 +0000 UTC]
lmfao thats hilarious though lololo record it sometime
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ASWwolves In reply to KayFedewa [2008-06-25 06:29:16 +0000 UTC]
Totally will xD When she gets back from Costa Rica I will for sure
I'll note it to ya' when I do it, I may put it up on facebook too though because she'll want to see what people think xD
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corruptangel315 In reply to ??? [2008-06-23 05:11:27 +0000 UTC]
Awesome new page, as always... I love the colors, and the detail!
lol Bloodspill hates children, and yet... she gets pregnant. Weird.
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Chazychazgirl12 [2008-06-23 03:23:57 +0000 UTC]
this is gettting good can;r wait for the next page
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NastyaTheCat [2008-06-21 15:52:10 +0000 UTC]
That yealow one is very pretty!<3
Amazing comic!
can't wait for another page! 8D
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Kozuku [2008-06-20 19:46:52 +0000 UTC]
I love Bloodspill's pessimism. "... I hate children.." Excellent graphic novel! Keep it coming. I'm so used to reading manga that I almost read from left to right, eh heh.
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weezerbeez [2008-06-20 12:48:05 +0000 UTC]
xD Bloodspill said "I hate children." Blood has the best lines ever!
Can't wait for the next page. Keep up the good work! :]
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Nyx-Aeterna [2008-06-20 03:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Soooogla the next page is out!! Lol, emo Swiftkill...Nice job!!!!
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Wandering-wolves [2008-06-17 16:11:47 +0000 UTC]
Fairstep looks really nice close up. I wonder how they get their eye markings...
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aamalthea [2008-06-17 11:21:52 +0000 UTC]
Finally! Yayz!
And noow... I want more, again! :'']
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aamalthea In reply to aamalthea [2008-06-17 11:27:51 +0000 UTC]
And I maybe should come with a good comment. x)
I love Bloodspill. "I hate children" lawl.
Fairstep is one of my favs. Fairstep are so alike her child Riptide. They are both beautiful.
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Eevee9 [2008-06-17 03:28:02 +0000 UTC]
XD Oh my god. "I hate children." That had me in coniptions, I swear! Thanks for making my day, Kay.
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Klaud [2008-06-16 07:51:24 +0000 UTC]
hahaha serious the entire bloodspill syaing I hate children like outta nowhere made me smile.
Idk i felt it to be sorta random i guess.
But oo i love fairsteps eye close up!
they look so pretty and nice :]
I think all of you are really doing great on the comic!
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Wandering-wolves [2008-06-16 06:20:25 +0000 UTC]
I'd say,everytime I talk to kids,it starts out fine and somehow,they end up hitting me but I'm too kind to pounce on them rip them apart.
So I'll put it in words and say I agree with blood...I hate kids.
lol...lol...lol...o.k,that was lame and unlike me,so...I HATE THOSE @#%*$~&, *censored**ceensoooored**CENSORED*BRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH....*cough**cough*
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MurasameLiger100 [2008-06-16 01:50:22 +0000 UTC]
Lol, Bloodspill, "I hate children." I'm amused.
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ginga-fan-101 In reply to ??? [2008-06-15 23:32:04 +0000 UTC]
wow xD so many comments in just 1 day ^_^ good job i cant wait till Reicher comes in! i hope its soon
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Zila-Zipper In reply to ??? [2008-06-15 22:27:41 +0000 UTC]
Bloodspill is my fave! Awsome comic!
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Treekami In reply to ??? [2008-06-15 20:18:12 +0000 UTC]
YES! another fantastic work of art!
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moonbeam-goddess [2008-06-15 18:56:36 +0000 UTC]
i feel sorry for swiftkill! its all a bit unfair! Can not wait for me ^^
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Jukara [2008-06-15 15:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I love this page! Great job!
Can't wait for the next one!
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ShadowShadow20 [2008-06-14 21:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Kay, I LOVE YOU`RE COMIC !! BBA is my favourite comic. I have 4 FanArt for BBA ^^. Look on my profil. I add you to friends ;D.
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