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Description ATTENTION! THIS IS ONLY PART 1!
this is just part of the sheet, since there are four different sheets from the same commissioner. I was trying to ink/color in PS to test a new adoptable sheet style. I might continue the others this way. That's why there's only PART of the full commission here. The others will come later.


This is an adoption sheet commissioned by ~Princess-Jakilna . That means that they recieve first pick of any, or all of the adoptables! However, if you follow the rules below, you may be able to have any of the ones they don't pick.



1: All applicants MUST fill out an application. The application is more detailed than the previous one. You must comment describing the pony you want, and with this application. A star means that the information is optional.

NAME:
AGE:
GENDER:
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:
SHORT HISTORY:
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
*FAMILY:
*HOBBIES:
*FRIENDS:
*WHERE THEY LIVE:

2: These ponies are not a "first come first serve" Like my previous ones. These ponies will be handed out to the people who gave the clearest, most detailed, most well thought out applications. So it doesn't matter who gets there first. So fill out your application carefully for a better chance of winning the pony.

3: This sheet of adoptables will have applications open for one week. (7 days) then I will close the adoption, and review the applications. I'll pick the best app, and message the user that they were picked.

4: Once a user has been picked, they have three (3) days to write a short story, or draw a picture of the pony to "claim" it. If they fail to do so, I will pick the next best application, and repeat the process.

5: I will IGNORE any comments that just say "I want # 4 please." Fill. Out. The. Form. If you want a pony, you MUST fill out an application. Otherwise, you miss out.

6: NO BASES. I'm serious, guys. Bases/generators are fun and all, but I want to see you put some effort into these characters. I put effort into drawing them for you, and I expect you to return the favor.

7: 1 person, per pony, per sheet. No multible adopts for one page UNLESS they are the commissioner of the sheet.

1: ~Sylphid14
2: ~little-bash
3: ~Princess-Jakilna
4: ~XXeDA
5: ~secret-art-thingy


(As a side note, I added sexual orientation to the list of information because I, as a christian, do not believe in or support a sexual relationship between anything other that one man and one woman. This is my belief, and I would ask that if you do not think this rule fair, please pass this adoptable sheet by. I am not trying to offend, but I would not feel comfortable giving someone a character I made if the character themselves are going to represent something I strongly oppose. Again, I mean no offence to anyone. I'm just trying to save people time if they mark their character as anything other than heterosexual, because the applcation will not be considered for adoption.
Thank you for reading, and I appreciate those who will follow the rules. Again, if you do not like this rule, I ask you to please pass this sheet by. Thank you. )
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Comments: 134

Kayla-san In reply to ??? [2013-09-01 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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candylama101 [2012-06-29 18:36:34 +0000 UTC]

When r u going 2 release more adoptables

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candylama101 [2012-06-29 18:33:50 +0000 UTC]

When r u going 2 release your next adoptables

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Kayla-san In reply to candylama101 [2012-06-29 18:40:11 +0000 UTC]

As soon as they're commissioned from me. XD Rght now, no one has commissioned me for anoher sheet.

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candylama101 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-29 18:40:55 +0000 UTC]

i would but i haven't got the money

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Kayla-san In reply to candylama101 [2012-06-29 18:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, sorry to hear that. But really, I need cash too, and I can't afford a trade at this time.

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candylama101 [2012-06-28 23:43:44 +0000 UTC]

When r u going 2 release part 2

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Kayla-san In reply to candylama101 [2012-06-28 23:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, they haven't paid me for this sheet yet, and haven't contacted me about the rest of the batch for about a month or so. :< I'm not sure the others will ever get posted, to be honest. It looks like I was bailed out on this one. |D

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candylama101 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-28 23:45:48 +0000 UTC]


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Kayla-san In reply to candylama101 [2012-06-28 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]

I know, it's sad for me too. :<

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candylama101 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-28 23:58:36 +0000 UTC]

how much dose 1 cost

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Kayla-san In reply to candylama101 [2012-06-29 00:02:00 +0000 UTC]

One sheet costs 15 dollars. It's all traditional art, and takes a LOT of time to draw. Plus, you don't have ANY rules to follow, like other adoptables. If you commission a sheet, you can take as many ponies from the sheet as you like, you don't have any forms to fill out, and you get first dibs, no matter what.

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candylama101 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-29 00:03:36 +0000 UTC]

kool

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CottonConfection [2012-06-07 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]

LOVE the squishy nose and grin on the green pony, but punk pony wins my vote this round! So awesome!

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Kayla-san In reply to CottonConfection [2012-06-07 01:31:33 +0000 UTC]

So many accenting features, there's no way to say no! XD

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CottonConfection In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-29 08:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol thats for sure! XD

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TyrannosaurusLincoln [2012-06-01 03:48:03 +0000 UTC]

Will you be making more?

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Kayla-san In reply to TyrannosaurusLincoln [2012-06-01 11:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, actually. You see, this was a half-baked drawing for a test. I plan on making a few that actually lok good/

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TyrannosaurusLincoln In reply to Kayla-san [2012-06-01 22:40:48 +0000 UTC]

These are awesome! DD


When you make more..Would you mind if you could send the link to me?

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firestar3641 [2012-05-19 01:56:14 +0000 UTC]

NAME: Raine Everbloom
AGE:13
GENDER:F
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Heterosexual
SHORT HISTORY: Raine comes from a highclass family in the Uk. she went to boarding shool for most of her life and just moved to a public school. She has made some great friends though, they are troublemakers. Her family threatens her friends family by ruining their daughters perfect record. Now she can only meet them in secret for of what might happen if they are caught.
LIKES: Music, Drawing, Dancing, Hanging out at the movies, plays piano, sings
DISLIKES: Dubstep, Brightly lit colors, and how rich her family is
*FAMILY: Rose Everbloom, Henry Everbloom
*HOBBIESrawing,singing,dancing
*FRIENDS: Ellea Locket, Julius Temperance
*WHERE THEY LIVE: London Uk

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Kayla-san In reply to firestar3641 [2012-05-21 14:02:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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XXeDA [2012-05-16 14:55:17 +0000 UTC]

NAME: Sprout Sprite (Sprite, as in, a fairy. Not the beverage.)
AGE: 21 (human years) Birthday is April 14.
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
SHORT HISTORY: Sprout Sprite was born into a family business of saving the earth and being 'green'. She was very firm in her beliefs, and as such, was made fun of a lot for her passion. Then, to make it all worse, her mother dies of a plague running through Equestria. Not many friends to speak of, she was alone for a long time and didn't really know what it was like to have peers to speak to. However, one day, she'd wandered into a forest on a walk. She'd always loved nature. This time, though, she'd run into a group of dying plants. They were different, though, then the rest of the trees and shrubs in the forest. She looked around a moment, and saw a sign. It said, 'Tea Leaf's garden.' They were her mother's plants. Immediately, Sprout Sprite did everything she could to save the trees and shrubs. Nothing she did worked, however. She failed to save her mother's precious garden. Mourning for the soon to be lost memories of her mother's work, Sprout Sprite hugged the closest tree to her. In her confused state, she let out a burst of magic while going hysterical, causing all the trees of Tea Leaf to spring back to life.
"I... I... I saved my mother's work. Are you... proud of me, mama?"
And bam. With her joy, she'd earned her cutie mark. Sprout Sprite would then promise on her mother's soul to protect the earth her mother had loved so much. She's known for her green thumb... or, hoof, should I say?
LIKES: Going green, trees, flowers, recycling, lakes, rivers, animals, vegetables, hot springs, hot days, working, farming.
DISLIKES: Cities, lazy ponies, telephones, conceited ponies, litter, soda pop.
FAMILY: Tea Leaf (mother), Season Snap (father), Green Burst (younger brother), Bubbling Brook (aunt), Sea Shanty (uncle), Shellshock (cousin), Creak Critter (cousin), Wolfsong (grandfather), Leaf Lite (Grandmother), Hop Heart (grandmother), Naturisque (Grandfather)
...Oh my, I'm acting like she's mine already... OTL
HOBBIES: Planting trees and taking care of the earth. Loves working.
FRIENDS: Animals, Green Burst, Dark Skystreak (OC), Light Flashback (OC), Golden Harvest/Carrot Top (childhood friends)
WHERE THEY LIVE: Caneighdia (pun on the mispronunciation of Canada, Canadia)

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Kayla-san In reply to XXeDA [2012-05-21 13:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, that was quite a well written, tear jerker of an application. C': You quite deserve her, so she's all yours. Congrats!

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XXeDA In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-21 23:25:09 +0000 UTC]

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Heeeere's my drawing! I did it as soon as I got the message, I just couldn't wait! Sorry about the bad-noob-ish-ness though, I haven't used Photoshop in years, and this is my first time working with the particular version.

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XXeDA In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-21 19:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, dear! Thank-you! I'll draw the picture and send it in ASAP for her!

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XXeDA In reply to XXeDA [2012-05-16 22:55:53 +0000 UTC]

I understand 1 per user, but if I do not get the green unicorn, I will try for the red Pegasus.

NAME: Vesta
AGE: 23 (human years)
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
SHORT HISTORY: Vesta was a hot-headed, passionate child, if not a bit spoiled. She had always stuck up for her beliefs, and normally voted for the unpopular things in life. One day, she'd witnessed the bullying of a small earth pony, named Tinker. He was being kicked, called names, and he was crying. She couldn't let that be.
"Hey, you! Dumb bullies! Leave Tinker alone!"
They turned, giving a dark glare to her. She didn't care. She ranted on about her beliefs, and how stupid the act of bullying was, and how Tinker is so much better than they'll ever be. She didn't even notice the passionate fire now burning on her flank...
LIKES: Debate, art, walking, flying, obstacle courses, jewels, fashion, jumprope, children, machinery.
DISLIKES: Messy areas, marshes, dirt, alligators,
FAMILY: Tinker (fiance), Amber Ember (mother), Ditty Song (father), Zeus Zap (younger brother), Flitter Skipper (younger sister), Fluttering Flame (older sister), Hailbomb (Brother-in-law), Jitterbug (neice), Gemshine (aunt), Cloud Chase (uncle), Jingle Jam (uncle).
HOBBIES:
FRIENDS:
WHERE THEY LIVE: Las Pegasus

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XXeDA In reply to XXeDA [2012-05-16 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]

...Oops.
HOBBIES: Debate, flying, painting, racing.
FRIENDS: Tinker, Rain-or-Shine, Jester, Giggles.

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MarimakuxXNakiusi [2012-05-16 08:37:26 +0000 UTC]

This is so great! How do you draw so good? And so clean and everything? ENVIOUS.

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Kayla-san In reply to MarimakuxXNakiusi [2012-05-19 16:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It took a long time to do. |D

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MarimakuxXNakiusi In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-19 19:31:59 +0000 UTC]

I can see all the wonderful effort~ And you're welcome!

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XXeDA [2012-05-15 20:37:23 +0000 UTC]

I plan on filling out a sheet for the green unicorn, but I haven't the time to do it now. I'll have it in by tomorrow, unless it's an inconvenience.

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Kamaloko [2012-05-15 19:54:10 +0000 UTC]

Is 4 till open? If not then I'll gladly pay 30
Name : GrassKnot
Age : Adult
Gender : Female
Sexual Orientation : Straight
Short History : She was abandoen as a filly in an forest that was endangerd.
So as she grew up she started to take care of the envirment.
Likes : Plants,Crops,Farming,Hay,Cakes.
Dislikes : Clutter, winter, darkness.
*Family : Her mom was an earthpony but she left her at an endangerd forst as a Filly. Her dad died after her mom gave birth to her.
*Hobbies: Works at an enviroment saftey group. On sundays, every morning she goes to the bakery and buys a Carrot Cake.
*Friends : CherryClover, Ice Tots, MerryGo, MoonLight, Merlin, RustyHooves.
*Where they live : Canterlot, out in the forest.

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Kayla-san In reply to Kamaloko [2012-05-21 14:02:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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Kamaloko In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-23 16:01:32 +0000 UTC]

It's okay

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Matrix-III [2012-05-13 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]

NAME:Angel
AGE:Adult
GENDER:Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Straight and sometimes can be BI
SHORT HISTORY: She loves to help other pegasuses help she has been in way to many storms like tornados.
LIKES: Anything but her dislikes XD
DISLIKES: Pests
*FAMILY: She was raised by two pegasuses who found her as a filly strayed. Then her parents found her and took her home as a filly
*HOBBIES: Helping little fillys and others.
*FRIENDS: Jay

Number 2 please if not then number 4
*WHERE THEY LIVE:

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Kayla-san In reply to Matrix-III [2012-05-21 14:02:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time. (And I see you've already heard about reading the discription, so I won't tell you the rules again. )

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Matrix-III In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-22 02:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Okie dokie lokie!

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SherbertTCat In reply to Matrix-III [2012-05-14 15:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Her rules are pretty iron-clad on the sexuality.

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Matrix-III In reply to SherbertTCat [2012-05-14 20:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh??? IDC and I did not know XD

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SherbertTCat In reply to Matrix-III [2012-05-14 21:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you want one of her adoptables, you have to follow her rules.

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Matrix-III In reply to SherbertTCat [2012-05-14 21:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Again I didn't know :C

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SherbertTCat In reply to Matrix-III [2012-05-14 21:27:00 +0000 UTC]

But all of the rules were right there in the description.

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Matrix-III In reply to SherbertTCat [2012-05-14 21:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh I didn't read about it XD.

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XXeDA In reply to Matrix-III [2012-05-16 14:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Clearly, if you did not read the rules, you should not obtain the pony.

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Matrix-III In reply to XXeDA [2012-05-16 19:43:41 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW!!! IDK that she explain about the ORINTATION >:C Now stop... srry for yelling but seriously I know already....

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Tayliah [2012-05-12 07:41:40 +0000 UTC]

#4
NAME: Sally Sapling (might come up with a better name later ^_^")
AGE: 18
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: She was raised by her two lovely parents (One unicorn, one earth) on a little farm in the country. She was a blank flank until she turned eighteen which is when she decided to visit the city to see what it was like. She was horrified to see that there was not a tree or shrub in sight! Now she runs the " Plant a tree everyday" organisation where she tells city folk to plant one tree everyday to improve the environment
LIKES: Trees, plants, animals, apple pie and all things GREEN C:
DISLIKES: Rude people, pollution and skyscrapers
*HOBBIES: Planting trees, Playing with animals, Eating apple pie
*FRIENDS: She has many animal friends and also her 14 year old cousin: Hay Bale who helps her with planting trees
*WHERE THEY LIVE: On a farm but visits the city (Canterlot) often to promote her organisation

Thank-you for taking the time to read C:

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Kayla-san In reply to Tayliah [2012-05-21 14:01:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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Tayliah In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-22 07:17:17 +0000 UTC]

That's okay :3

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MyCatEyes [2012-05-11 00:55:31 +0000 UTC]

May I try for the first one if it's not too late?

NAME: Grape Vine
AGE: 14
GENDER: female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: straight (i'm a christian too ^^)
SHORT HISTORY: Grape Vine's family has always worked with grapes. For generations they made the best grapes in Equestria. They made grape juice, grape wine, grape anything! Grape Vine found her cutie mark by creating a grape medicine for sick ponies that didn't like grapes. She made it sooo sweet that the sick ponies loved it. She then realized that she loved to create ways of helping ponies and the only way she was able was to make something with grapes. She then made a big boom in Equestria because she made so many different forms of medicines that had the main ingredient of grapes.
LIKES: grapes, helping ponies
DISLIKES: stubborn sick colts and fillies that won't take their medicine XD
*FAMILY: Mom - Vintage, Dad - Grape Fruit, Sister - Raisin
*HOBBIES: hanging out with friends, working on the plantation, helping ponies
*FRIENDS: Filly (Salom)
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Ponyville

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Kayla-san In reply to MyCatEyes [2012-05-21 13:54:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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