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Description ATTENTION! THIS IS ONLY PART 1!
this is just part of the sheet, since there are four different sheets from the same commissioner. I was trying to ink/color in PS to test a new adoptable sheet style. I might continue the others this way. That's why there's only PART of the full commission here. The others will come later.


This is an adoption sheet commissioned by ~Princess-Jakilna . That means that they recieve first pick of any, or all of the adoptables! However, if you follow the rules below, you may be able to have any of the ones they don't pick.



1: All applicants MUST fill out an application. The application is more detailed than the previous one. You must comment describing the pony you want, and with this application. A star means that the information is optional.

NAME:
AGE:
GENDER:
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:
SHORT HISTORY:
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
*FAMILY:
*HOBBIES:
*FRIENDS:
*WHERE THEY LIVE:

2: These ponies are not a "first come first serve" Like my previous ones. These ponies will be handed out to the people who gave the clearest, most detailed, most well thought out applications. So it doesn't matter who gets there first. So fill out your application carefully for a better chance of winning the pony.

3: This sheet of adoptables will have applications open for one week. (7 days) then I will close the adoption, and review the applications. I'll pick the best app, and message the user that they were picked.

4: Once a user has been picked, they have three (3) days to write a short story, or draw a picture of the pony to "claim" it. If they fail to do so, I will pick the next best application, and repeat the process.

5: I will IGNORE any comments that just say "I want # 4 please." Fill. Out. The. Form. If you want a pony, you MUST fill out an application. Otherwise, you miss out.

6: NO BASES. I'm serious, guys. Bases/generators are fun and all, but I want to see you put some effort into these characters. I put effort into drawing them for you, and I expect you to return the favor.

7: 1 person, per pony, per sheet. No multible adopts for one page UNLESS they are the commissioner of the sheet.

1: ~Sylphid14
2: ~little-bash
3: ~Princess-Jakilna
4: ~XXeDA
5: ~secret-art-thingy


(As a side note, I added sexual orientation to the list of information because I, as a christian, do not believe in or support a sexual relationship between anything other that one man and one woman. This is my belief, and I would ask that if you do not think this rule fair, please pass this adoptable sheet by. I am not trying to offend, but I would not feel comfortable giving someone a character I made if the character themselves are going to represent something I strongly oppose. Again, I mean no offence to anyone. I'm just trying to save people time if they mark their character as anything other than heterosexual, because the applcation will not be considered for adoption.
Thank you for reading, and I appreciate those who will follow the rules. Again, if you do not like this rule, I ask you to please pass this sheet by. Thank you. )
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Comments: 134

MyCatEyes In reply to ??? [2012-05-21 22:09:51 +0000 UTC]

ok

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silvaze11223344 [2012-05-08 16:57:08 +0000 UTC]

i like the second pony (the red one at the top middle) i thought i'd just try cause i think she's cute :3
NAMEurning Love or Love (nickname)
AGE:15
GENDER:Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Straight
SHORT HISTORY:Love was born in Canterlot and always dreamed of something else than fanciness. After thinking and working, she finally got enough money for a train ticket to Ponyville along with permission from her parents. She rode the beautiful train for a couple hours. On the train she ate lovely food like Filet Mignon with ketchup sauce. After about three hours, the train screeched to a halt. Love trotted out with her suitcase in tow. She walked around Ponyville and met a mare named Rarity. Rarity offered to style her beautious mane for free. Ofcourse, Love accepted. After she had met Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, she knew she would have a wonderful time in Ponyville rather than Canterlot. She had met the Princesses but had wanted a change so she moved to Ponyville. She trotted along a path to her new home. She now lives in an apartment and works clearing clouds. She is a little shy, but good at making friends.
LIKES:Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, flying, clearing clouds, playing harmless pranks, making friends, modesty, Cloudsdale.
DISLIKESeople who take things too far, being on the ground too much, show-offs, mean ponies.
*FAMILY: Heart Stopper-Mother, Dr.Hearty-Father, Heart-Strings-Sister, Heart-Flutter-Sister, Heartbeat-Brother, Heart Candy-Sister, and Heart Attack-Sister.
*HOBBIES:Clearing clouds, drawing, flying.
*FRIENDS:Twilight Sparkle,Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash.
*WHERE THEY LIVE: From Cloudsdale and moved to Canterlot, then to Ponyville.
Thank-you for letting me participate

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Kayla-san In reply to silvaze11223344 [2012-05-21 14:01:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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silvaze11223344 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-22 00:22:21 +0000 UTC]

oh ok <

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Sylphid14 In reply to ??? [2012-05-08 06:21:18 +0000 UTC]

For no. 1:
NAME : Purple Vines
AGE: 24
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Her parents lived in Manehattan, but then went to Ponyville for a vacation. They quickly became fond of the place and the residents' warmness. They moved there before she was born. The confident, kind, and ambitious filly has no trouble fitting in, and befriends a lot of ponies. She never really thought about her cutiemark much, and gets it later than the majority of others. She'd visit Sweet Apple Acres once in a while, as she always likes orchards and everything about it, but apples are not really her thing. She read about grapes in her book one day, and bought some seeds for herself to grow. She took care of them for months until the fruits show up. She tried to make wine out of them, and after a series of failed attempts she succeeded to make some. That's when her cutiemark appears. When she told her parents she wants to own a vineyard, her mother was thrilled since wine is her favorite thing, but her father was worried, because she was so young and she's their only child. Her mother tried to convince him that nothing bad will happen, while giving her money and all things she needed to start a business. First try, failed because lack of experience. After the second, third and fourth attempt also failed, she had a mental breakdown, but everypony including her father tried to comfort her and help her back in her feet. After months of careful planning, her next attempt succeeded and now she has a famous vineyard, not far from Ponyville and is planning to open a new branch.
LIKES: Hanging out with friends, talking about wines, grapes, monitoring the wine production
DISLIKES: Pets, losing, crowds and milk
FAMILY: Parents, Aunt, Uncle, and cousin. (names yet to be decided)
HOBBIES: Reading, swimming, and quiet nights when she can drink her wine while watching television
FRIENDS: All workers in her factory and many more
WHERE THEY LIVE: A house near her vineyard

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Kayla-san In reply to Sylphid14 [2012-05-21 13:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Congrats! (and so sorry for the late reply. I had a bunch of forms to go through. ) This pony is all yours! That was a wonderful application, and it deserved to win.

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Sylphid14 In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-22 06:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much!

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Mr-Beeblebrox In reply to ??? [2012-05-07 16:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Number 4 please~

NAME: Green Hoof
AGE:[Pony Years] 21
GENDER: Mare [Female]
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: A gardener that was adopted as her parents left her from an early age.
LIKES: Preserving the Planet, recycling, vegetables
DISLIKES: Meat, litter, not recycling
*FAMILY: Parents left her from an early age, has 1 long lost brother, still searching for him.
*HOBBIES: Planting flowers, trimming hedges, collecting stamps
*FRIENDS: Not many, but is friends with Pinkie Pie and Carrot Top [As they share an interest for planting]
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Manehatten, moved to Ponyville

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Kayla-san In reply to Mr-Beeblebrox [2012-05-21 13:57:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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Mr-Beeblebrox In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-21 14:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Aw, okay

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NinjaKirlia In reply to ??? [2012-05-07 00:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Number 4
NAME: Sprout
AGE: Pony years 19
GENDER: female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Sprout was born in Las Pegusus, being a unicorn it was hard for her to make friends. She was teased because she didn't have her cutie mark. One day an oak tree in her neighborhood, that tree was her only friend. Sprout went to the tree to try to talk the ponies out of it, but they wouldn't listen. She decideed to stick by the tree, for 3 days she sat at the trees side yelling at anyone who got close. Finally on the fourth day they gave up. Celestia came to tell her what she had done to protect her beliefs. Sprout has never and never will forget that moment because she see's it on her flank.
LIKES: Nature, Meditation, Chocolate, Prince Solstice
DISLIKES: Pollution, Haters, some pegasi ,
*FAMILY: Nobody
*HOBBIES:Yoga
*FRIENDSrince Solstice (<3)
*WHERE THEY LIVE:

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Kayla-san In reply to NinjaKirlia [2012-05-21 13:57:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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lnconvenient In reply to ??? [2012-05-06 20:36:29 +0000 UTC]

They all look great, but I love the purple one. owo I'll try for her.

5 -
NAME: Secret Aria (goes most often by Secretariat. Her family and some close friends call her Aria, but it's less a privilege and more a thing she only tolerates from people she likes)
Yes, Secretariat is the name of a racehorse. It's also a word for a group of secretaries. An aria is an elaborate piece of music for one voice.
AGE: 22
GENDER: Female
CUTIE MARK: A ballpoint pen leaving an ink trail; if you look at it right it looks like an upside-down music note.
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight. A lot of people assume she's "married to her work" or some such, though.
OCCUPATION: One of a plethora of secretaries for a rather successful company. Serves mainly as one of the CEO's personal assistants, but performs a variety of other duties when necessary.
SHORT HISTORY: Born to a carefree, musical mother and a creative but anal-retentive father, Secretariat was never quite what she was expected to be. She had her mother's talent, but took her father's attention to detail. Despite her oft praised singing voice, she never saw music as much more than a hobby, focusing instead on more 'practical' studies. Her cutie mark showed up some time after she started keeping track of her class schedules.
I'm not good at short. :I There was another, much more extensive paragraph, and then I realized...I'm not good at short.
LIKES: Organization, classical music, singing (both actively singing and listening to others sing)
DISLIKES: Messes, off-key music, petty arguments, wasting time
FAMILY: Her mother (pegasus) is a composer. Her father (unicorn) is a painter. Two siblings...details to be worked out.
HOBBIES: Singing, calligraphy. She dabbles in cooking, but she's not much good at it and rarely admits to it.
FRIENDS: Dunno. I don't have any other pony characters at the moment. |D She does have friends, though; I'll expand upon that.
WHERE THEY LIVE: A town well to the southeast of Canterlot. It started small, but has grown considerably since its creation thanks in no small part to its role as home to the offices of a now-rather-large organization.

Best of luck finding suitable owners for them. I sincerely hope you like my application; I've not been sleeping well and had some trouble making it sound decent. >_< May I make amendments if I realize I forgot something/realize something was stupid? |D

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Kayla-san In reply to lnconvenient [2012-05-21 13:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I LOVE this story for her! What a lovely job! She's all yours, my friend. (And sorry for the late reply. I was quite busy, plus there are a bunch of applications to weed through. )

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lnconvenient In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-29 03:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Found tablet pen; started ref. [link]
I don't think it's been three days yet since I got the message, though it's been more since you sent it. >_<

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Kayla-san In reply to lnconvenient [2012-05-29 14:03:49 +0000 UTC]

It's fine, take your time.

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lnconvenient In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-30 01:44:57 +0000 UTC]

[link] ← Finished it! That has to be one of my favorite refs. |:3

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Kayla-san In reply to lnconvenient [2012-05-30 13:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Perfect! :3

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lnconvenient In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-31 13:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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lnconvenient In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-26 15:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!
Thanks a lot! ^^ I don't mind waiting; I was on a school trip when you decided, anyway. XD
I just got back; I'll draw her as soon as possible. ^^

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SaintPestilence In reply to ??? [2012-05-06 14:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Awww 4 is so cute I think i'll have to try out for her

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G-Blue16 [2012-05-06 06:27:53 +0000 UTC]

the punk pony is still not taken ? cause i would love to adopt her xD

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Kayla-san In reply to G-Blue16 [2012-05-06 13:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I haven't been able to update. She is, indeed, claimed by the commissioner.

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Pigletor In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 18:00:04 +0000 UTC]

....OMG number 2 is just....there are no words! I know that if I don't try for her, I'll regret it!

NAME: Love Story (Nickname is Lovey or Story)
AGE: Young Adult (around 19 human years)
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Love Story was born and raised in Cloudsdale, going through Flight Academy with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. Like Fluttershy, Love Story always craved to be on the ground, though braver and a stronger flier than Fluttershy. When in Flight Academy, Lovey always found that she had the colt's wrapped around her hoof. She was well known as being the most beautiful filly at Flight Academy, though Love Story pretended she didn't care about those silly boys, she secretly loved the attention. However, due to all the attention, her and Rainbow Dash were usually at war with each other. Words were exchanged after the race where Rainbow Dash confirmed the myths about the Sonic Rainboom, and Love Story still regrets what she said to her this very day. When Fluttershy went missing, Love Story was brave enough to fly down to the ground to try find her. She did indeed find her, and seeing how sweet and innocent she was, it made Story think about how harsh she had been to Rainbow Dash and was determined to make it up to her. Love Story changed her selfish ways after she left Flight Academy and moved to Ponyville, she lives in the cottage next to Fluttershy and they have been extremely good friends since they graduated. Love Story also works at Apple Acres part-time and also at the school part-time! She regularly helps Fluttershy out with her animals too, though she doesn't share the same gift. When Lovey realized that Rainbow Dash had too relocated to Ponyville, she was determined to make things right! Rainbow Dash was horror-struck to see that the filly who had bullied her was also in Ponyville and was determined to make Story pay, but on Rainbow's birthday, Love Story threw her a massive birthday full of action and fun! When Dash realized Lovey had done it all by herself, she was touched and realized that she really did want to make up for her wrong doings in Cloudsdale. The two have been very good friends ever since! Story was also a 'late bloomer' for her cutie-mark. She only discovered it when she took the fillies and colts out on a school camping trip where she read stories to them and sang campfire songs for them, when her cutie-mark appeared in front off her students. They were all extremely happy for her! Love Story had always loved making up stories and songs, and she had a beautiful voice too! But she never thought about it being her special talent. When she discovered her cutie mark, she realized that being around nature and a campfire made her stories more exciting and her songs more beautiful!
LIKES: Love Story likes camping, nighttime, singing, stories, helping ponies out, nature, walking and meditating.
DISLIKES: Love Story dislikes selfish, rude, and pushy ponies, bullying, stress,
*FAMILY: Love Story's family is a pegasus couple in Cloudsdale. She has a younger sister who is in Flight Academy currently. She goes to visit them as often as she can. Flicker Flare is her mother, Twister is her father and her sister is Moonlight Song.
*HOBBIES: Love Story's hobbies are camping, singing, and writing stories. She finds that nature inspires her.
*FRIENDS: Love Story's current friends are Fluttershy, Applejack, Cherilee, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Flutter Blues, Galinda, Garden Breeze, Jubilee, and Miss Valentine
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Love Story was born and raised in Cloudsdale, but now lives in Ponyville, in the cottage next to Fluttershy's by the Evergreen Forest.

....Longest application ever? haha! I think it's obvious I really want her! Teehee <3

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Kayla-san In reply to Pigletor [2012-05-21 13:56:39 +0000 UTC]

YES, longest, YES best! You totally win that pony!

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Pigletor In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-21 15:14:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!! :explodelaplz: Don't I have to draw I picture first though? <3

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Kayla-san In reply to Pigletor [2012-05-21 17:32:17 +0000 UTC]

If you like, but you're such a good customer, and a faithful rule follower, I don't mind giving her to you now.

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Pigletor In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-21 17:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, I couldn't! I'd feel like I'd be cheating you, you work so hard on these, they shouldn't be given away! I'll get something drawn up straight away!

By the way, I am so tempted to commission you again XD So addictive!!!

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Kayla-san In reply to Pigletor [2012-05-29 21:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Awww, well thank you! And another commission would have to wait a bit, since my MLP commission slots seem to fill up really fast these days.

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Pigletor In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-30 16:49:59 +0000 UTC]

I know :3 it's because they're amazing :noeswooplz:

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SherbertTCat [2012-05-05 13:47:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm amazed at just how many people can't read a simple set of rules.

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Kayla-san In reply to SherbertTCat [2012-05-19 16:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I know, right? |D

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chevreprince In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 02:46:05 +0000 UTC]


I would have loved to try and commission one......

but I guess I can't if you have the one rule..
Great designs though!

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Kayla-san In reply to chevreprince [2012-05-05 03:13:48 +0000 UTC]

There's more than one rule. Which do you mean? (though I think I might be able to guess which one.)

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SherbertTCat In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-05 15:22:53 +0000 UTC]

I gotta wonder why so many people have a problem with that rule.

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Kayla-san In reply to SherbertTCat [2012-05-19 16:07:48 +0000 UTC]

No clue, to be honest, since so many people want me to tolerate their beliefs. :/

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SherbertTCat In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-19 21:13:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm all for tolerance, but not when it's forced.

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chevreprince In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-05 03:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Heterosexual only.
I'm gender-fluid so technically I cannot ever really be heterosexual and be..heterosexual.
I've gone through too much heartbreak with guys and girls to ever fully trust anyone.
In essence I'm asexual, pan-romantic, because I care not for the body, but for the soul.
Sex matters not to me unless it's for romantic love or reproduction, both are things I don't care for at this point.

I'm hanging onto a last glimmer of hope and identifying as pan-sexual just in-case the one for me decides to find me, but i'm really just pulling the last straw and may as well just deny love it's rights to me.

Either way, I'm not straight. Nor can I ever be.

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Princess-Jakilna In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 02:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! I feel so honoured that people like my ideas! And, of course, your art is phenomenal (sp) as always. SLJFLSDKFJSLDFJSLDFJSL; THE SECOND ONE LDFJSLFJSDLFJASDL BEAUTIFUL. But, I feel like someone else should have her~ So, I'm going to take the third one~ She's so epic. And, of course, I'll most definitely be writing a story for her~ I'm so excited to see the next one~!

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Kayla-san In reply to Princess-Jakilna [2012-05-05 03:07:33 +0000 UTC]

So you only want the third? You do know you're allowed as many as you please, right?

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Princess-Jakilna In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-06 04:44:59 +0000 UTC]

You still haven't put number 3 down as taken. Herpaderpderp~

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Princess-Jakilna In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-05 03:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes, please~! The rebel~

I know, but, it's been bothering me how many commissioners have taken all of the adoptables, even though it's their right. I felt like being generous, because I'm a generous person.

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Oliviatc In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 01:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome designs. I love 4 the best

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Kayla-san In reply to Oliviatc [2012-05-05 03:13:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Oliviatc In reply to Kayla-san [2012-05-05 07:14:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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SpottyBadger [2012-05-05 01:07:32 +0000 UTC]

The green Unicorn Pony.

NAMErambleGreen
AGE:15
GENDER:Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: How she got her cutie mark.
One day when Bramble was taking care of her work, she noticed a giant rainbow , a legendary sonic rainboom. It blew down half of her family's tree farm. Bramble felt bad for the trees,so she came to their rescue. For tall trees she would pull a big rock to help keep them up. For the littler trees,she put up a measure stick and held them up by a connected string. Princess Celestia was very pleased that her trees were being properly taken care of. She granted this little filly something very special, to write to her princess about how the tree's grew .Bramble used her magic to send a report to the princess every year about the tree growth .After a few years , Princess Celestia got too busy for sending her letters back. Every year, Bramble kept sending her letters,hoping for her to reply.
Soon, she figuired ,that Celestia will and can send scrolls when she chooses. So early in the morning Bramble takes a notebook, and visits her ,now oldest living trees in Equestria.
LIKES:Earth day, Taking long walks,Recycling
DISLIKES: Girly Girls, Sleeping to much, going to ponyvillehigh (Highschool for teen ponies)
*FAMILY: Cousins ; Eclipse Maiyne,Foggy Eve
*HOBBIES: Gardening
*FRIENDS: Eclipse Maiyne,Foggy Eve, Paradise Apples
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Maiyne Cove

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Kayla-san In reply to SpottyBadger [2012-05-21 13:57:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the pony/s you requested are already taken. :< Perhaps next time.

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Jahpan In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 00:25:14 +0000 UTC]

ooo the second one is really cute with the smoke heart ^^

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Kayla-san In reply to Jahpan [2012-05-19 16:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Jahpan In reply to ??? [2012-05-05 00:23:50 +0000 UTC]

niiice! so you switched to digital my little pony adopts! ^^ haha my mom would love that wine one hehe

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