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Description Edit - I won the contest, so this girl is officially property of =Whivit now!

Boop de doop, contest entry for =Whivit ! The challenge was to design an original character of any sort. Yay for creative freedom, amirite.

So meet Aster. She is a young, female, striped hyena. Because, um, everyone should have a hyena character. Soo fun. Okays.

Aster was removed from her mother at a very young age by a group of hunters belonging to a native african tribe. They brought her back, and subsequently she spent most of her adolescence growing up tied inside a shack with the tribes medicine man. Fed pieces of meat from the hunts, she never left the hut from which she was tied and communicated to none but the occasional hound that showed any amount of interest.
But very quickly, this cushioned life began to take back from her. In many parts of the world, hyenas are consider sacred and parts of their body are highly valued for medicinal purposes. It started off innocently - a chunk of fur, a fallen-out tooth. But when a bout of sickness washed over the tribesmen, the need became too urgent. They pulled her teeth out; tore off a claw, cut out an ear. She was castrated; and finally her right eye was sliced out.
Whatever feelings of loyalty or trust Aster had were bled out of her. Helpless to the assaulting, she became the unwilling medicine cabinet for the tribe until at last the sickness was too strong - they would need a greater means for sacrifice. When they bound her legs and muzzle again, she knew what was coming and fought violently until at last, exhausted, she lay still as the knife loomed over her and began to cut down to her eye.
Maybe the ropes were not properly tied, maybe it was just the adrenaline - but for whatever reason Aster gave a final lunge at freedom and found the ropes falling away from her. Terrified and utterly bewildered, she reacted as any being would - aggression. Yelping, she lashed out at the man trying to capture her, and felt herself sliced across the chest and shoulders. Miraculously, it did not sever her major vessels, and she managed to escape, bleeding heavily.
Aster's mentality is the result of her strange upbringing. She does not understand how to take care of herself, nor others. She's got enough instinct to feed herself, albeit her feeding consist mostly of insects and carrion, but thats really where it stops. She has no social skills whatsoever, and what remnants she remembers of speech are rarely used. Her mind seems to consist only of the fear reflex, and for whatever reason, she has never shown aggression since the day she made her escape.


LONG HISTORY IS LONG. I hope this is somewhat in the area you were looking for, Whivit. If by chance I do end up winning you are more than free to simplify her, I know she's a bit complex. Sorry this is so messy, and I know my handwriting is pleh. If anyone has any trouble reading it, let me know and I'll, uh, translate.

Art is (c) *Kaylink
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Comments: 90

ArkIvy [2011-09-30 19:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!! *-*

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Fayth39 [2011-09-26 06:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, just have to say only one little thing...
Females aren't castrated. Only males. Females are neutered.
(Simple terminology mix-up.)
And is she actually mentally "slow" or does she just know know... well, anything, due to her upbringing?

'Tis a very sad story. >.>
But a totally sweet character concept. I've never actually tried a hyena... now I want to. XD
Glad you won!

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Skittywolf In reply to Fayth39 [2011-09-28 15:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Females are spayed, males are neutered but castrated means they cut off everything, neutering mean they just cut off the testicles.

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Fayth39 In reply to Skittywolf [2011-09-29 03:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, crud, I meant spayed!
Okay, I know I mix that one up all the time.
Sorry. But wow, I'd thought that castrate meant only males. I'd never EVER heard it used in relation to females before. Weird. Sorry!
But... everything?
Never heard that, either. I hear people, even professionals, use castration interchangeably with neutering. Meh. Maybe it's just a regional idea of how the word should be used... (not internationally different,just small region... I know people in my hometown are a little weird in more ways than one... XD ).

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Skittywolf In reply to Fayth39 [2011-09-29 13:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Sorry if I kinda trolled you there.

I also confuse spayed and neutered sometimes but isn't castration just cruel? My mom has actually been to Africa and a punishment there is castration.... I'm not gonna' talk about this anymore. xD

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Fayth39 In reply to Skittywolf [2011-09-29 23:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, yeah, that's probably for the best. About halfway into my previous response I thought... "Well... this is a REALLY weird topic to be randomly discussing on Deviant, today..." XD
All the same, that totally isn't my focus when your character's concept comes to mind, and I like it a lot.

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Skittywolf In reply to Fayth39 [2011-09-30 05:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Psst, this isn't my character, I'm just a random person... xD

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Fayth39 In reply to Skittywolf [2011-09-30 07:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, crud! I for some reason thought you were the artist. Oops.
I'm just scoring all kinds of stupid points, now... XP
I think I'ma have to blame sleep deprivation for this continuous trend of idiocy. I've never had someone who wasn't the artist actually comment on my comment before... XD
But hopefully the weekend will come soon, tomorrow will be short, and I will sleep for more than two hours tonight... and regardless of whether I get any sleep down, within the next 24 hours, hopefully I'll make up for it all sleeping in on Saturday. XD

Now... to the artist this time: who made this: sorry to have had this weird conversation here, and I wish to say that I do like your work!

To both Skittywolf and Kaylink, take care, and don't mind babbling fools like me!

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Skittywolf In reply to Fayth39 [2011-09-30 19:13:55 +0000 UTC]

It's fine, everyone acts like an idiot one time or another. I know have enough times.

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Aiko-Akita [2011-06-10 17:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done <3

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acidthehellhound [2011-04-27 05:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing and Cute

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HeyYew [2011-01-08 22:55:32 +0000 UTC]

She's cool looking- interesting history!

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AnimeWolf13 [2010-11-26 03:15:02 +0000 UTC]

so just cerious.....but...uh
on what terms would it hav 2 be for you to draw some one's fursona....just the character....no backround or shading?
it's ok if you don't want to...I'd completely understand!

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Kaylink In reply to AnimeWolf13 [2010-11-26 03:57:06 +0000 UTC]

The terms would be $12 via Paypal.

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AnimeWolf13 In reply to Kaylink [2010-11-26 15:07:54 +0000 UTC]

K just cerious.

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izzynymze101 [2010-11-11 04:42:07 +0000 UTC]

i like im a fan of the hyena family

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Dark-Hyena [2010-11-10 22:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Hey Kaylink, long time no see.

I really like this design. I like the fact that you incorporated true, primitive third world practises (using hyenas as medicine) into her bio. If you made this into a fancomic, I'd buy it!

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267SuRReal-GiRL267 [2010-10-24 14:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Oops I mean hyena

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267SuRReal-GiRL267 [2010-10-24 14:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love her!
Her history's sad but I loved it too! And yes, EVERYONE should have a heyena charecter.

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BloodScar12 [2010-10-20 22:39:50 +0000 UTC]

i have a question, if she is a girl how can she be castrated? castration is for males. or i think so anyway O.O lol. but anywho, its a sad history for this poor hyena, but very great nontheless, i love how she looks, you did a great job!!

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Kaylink In reply to BloodScar12 [2010-10-20 23:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Hyena females have external genitalia that mimics a male's in shape and appearance.

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BloodScar12 In reply to Kaylink [2010-10-21 13:51:57 +0000 UTC]

ohhh, ok. well my friend also said because i was so curiouse that in africa the females get castrated, the women do, like cut off there umm yeah, because in africa they beleive that the women shouldnt have pleasure and only men do, my moms friend at work told her because she lived in africa and it happend to her, its kinda sad if you think about it. and very cruel.

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xxTwilightShadowsxx [2010-09-30 04:08:31 +0000 UTC]

I have a OC named aster! i thought i made that name up for sure! (i havent uploaded him on da yet ] i kinda lost him in all my junk XD

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Kaylink In reply to xxTwilightShadowsxx [2010-09-30 06:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Aster is actually a type of wildflower

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xxTwilightShadowsxx In reply to Kaylink [2010-09-30 14:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow O_O thats so weird. Btw Cool Chara!

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kkid210 [2010-08-05 01:02:33 +0000 UTC]

i concur everyone should have hyena characters! XD

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TheRealTilsa [2010-08-03 00:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she must have fighted so much to go through life!
I think I'm one of the only people that likes hyenas.

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RaeSM [2010-05-01 14:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Very, very awesome, creative and interesting! Poor thing, she's been through alot...

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Transformers-Wolf13 [2010-03-21 20:03:20 +0000 UTC]

AWWW MUFFIN D:

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sparktail [2010-02-28 13:57:00 +0000 UTC]

She is so adorable <3

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KinlaotMasi [2010-01-23 17:59:16 +0000 UTC]

I love you for making hyenas. Hyenas are my favorite animals!!! I hope you draw more.

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WolfOfWind [2010-01-21 21:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, we both have Asters. Woot!

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Kuwaizair [2009-11-28 01:24:33 +0000 UTC]

this is possibly one of the only striped hyena cartoon drawings on this site

everyone else prefer to draw them looking like dogs.

because that is how they see them and its not wrong

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Kaylink In reply to Kuwaizair [2009-11-28 01:28:38 +0000 UTC]

It is very hard to find decent hyena drawings, which is a real shame. They're very interesting animals.

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Kuwaizair In reply to Kaylink [2009-11-28 01:39:48 +0000 UTC]

[link]

yeah, this is how people like to.
and well its wrong to go "a dog?"

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Kaylink In reply to Kuwaizair [2009-11-28 01:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh . . . oh wow.

I mean I understand stylizing but you're supposed to stylize the anatomy thats already there, not just disregard it. It literally has no hyena features.

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Kuwaizair In reply to Kaylink [2009-11-28 02:35:06 +0000 UTC]

but its meannnnn to tell them other ayyysss...

becase it cramps their style and makes you jealous hater

correcting makes you a loser with no life

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cinnamon-sheep [2009-11-12 18:58:10 +0000 UTC]

You know, for being so cut up and abused, she is too cute. I think your skills at making original characters is amazing

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AHDIDAH [2009-08-17 13:14:05 +0000 UTC]

I love her design! poor thing. i love the story 2

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Rott-i-kins [2009-08-14 22:57:23 +0000 UTC]

LOVE HER MARKINGS. LOVE HER COLORS. And I especially love the scars!

Great history she has too.

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night-howl [2009-07-09 07:35:44 +0000 UTC]

this is awsome, the design rocks, and i love the history ^^ Anyone would be proud to own her

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Tem-tem7 [2009-06-29 01:03:40 +0000 UTC]

VERY VERY AMAZING! i love it!

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Crash997 [2009-06-17 17:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Awsome. Gr8 art

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Zenna96 [2009-06-12 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm such a wimp: I started tearing up when looking at her and her scars and torn ear

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Kovomimi [2009-06-10 20:03:36 +0000 UTC]

wow, great anatomy on this! awesome design too!

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GothicRoseWolf [2009-05-18 21:26:10 +0000 UTC]

*glomops and huggles Kay and Aster

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GothicRoseWolf [2009-05-18 09:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Kay I knew you'd win!!!! Gratz!!

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Kaylink In reply to GothicRoseWolf [2009-05-18 12:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!

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the-pROLOGUE-2-Red [2009-05-09 03:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, that's a brilliant character history and design. o3o You made everything go so well together and blend perfectly. <3 I really like the raggedy look to her and stripes. ^^
Once again, awesome history and unusual additions--like her mental state

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heart-of-a-wolf [2009-04-28 03:14:50 +0000 UTC]

this is so cool! i love how scrappy and mangey he is... >

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