HOME | DD

Kaylink — Whivit Contest Entry

Published: 2009-03-29 01:20:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 22494; Favourites: 663; Downloads: 148
Redirect to original
Description Edit - I won the contest, so this girl is officially property of =Whivit now!

Boop de doop, contest entry for =Whivit ! The challenge was to design an original character of any sort. Yay for creative freedom, amirite.

So meet Aster. She is a young, female, striped hyena. Because, um, everyone should have a hyena character. Soo fun. Okays.

Aster was removed from her mother at a very young age by a group of hunters belonging to a native african tribe. They brought her back, and subsequently she spent most of her adolescence growing up tied inside a shack with the tribes medicine man. Fed pieces of meat from the hunts, she never left the hut from which she was tied and communicated to none but the occasional hound that showed any amount of interest.
But very quickly, this cushioned life began to take back from her. In many parts of the world, hyenas are consider sacred and parts of their body are highly valued for medicinal purposes. It started off innocently - a chunk of fur, a fallen-out tooth. But when a bout of sickness washed over the tribesmen, the need became too urgent. They pulled her teeth out; tore off a claw, cut out an ear. She was castrated; and finally her right eye was sliced out.
Whatever feelings of loyalty or trust Aster had were bled out of her. Helpless to the assaulting, she became the unwilling medicine cabinet for the tribe until at last the sickness was too strong - they would need a greater means for sacrifice. When they bound her legs and muzzle again, she knew what was coming and fought violently until at last, exhausted, she lay still as the knife loomed over her and began to cut down to her eye.
Maybe the ropes were not properly tied, maybe it was just the adrenaline - but for whatever reason Aster gave a final lunge at freedom and found the ropes falling away from her. Terrified and utterly bewildered, she reacted as any being would - aggression. Yelping, she lashed out at the man trying to capture her, and felt herself sliced across the chest and shoulders. Miraculously, it did not sever her major vessels, and she managed to escape, bleeding heavily.
Aster's mentality is the result of her strange upbringing. She does not understand how to take care of herself, nor others. She's got enough instinct to feed herself, albeit her feeding consist mostly of insects and carrion, but thats really where it stops. She has no social skills whatsoever, and what remnants she remembers of speech are rarely used. Her mind seems to consist only of the fear reflex, and for whatever reason, she has never shown aggression since the day she made her escape.


LONG HISTORY IS LONG. I hope this is somewhat in the area you were looking for, Whivit. If by chance I do end up winning you are more than free to simplify her, I know she's a bit complex. Sorry this is so messy, and I know my handwriting is pleh. If anyone has any trouble reading it, let me know and I'll, uh, translate.

Art is (c) *Kaylink
Related content
Comments: 90

Bear-hybrid [2009-04-19 09:19:37 +0000 UTC]

This is an intensely interesting character <3 I hope you win. Great backstory too.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Necerti [2009-04-15 17:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Woah . awesome .
i looove your style ♥

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Link8522 In reply to ??? [2009-04-02 02:28:44 +0000 UTC]

wow this looks very well done. nice details!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Silverdarkkuro In reply to ??? [2009-04-01 03:27:14 +0000 UTC]

DX you posted somethiiiiiiing YAY good pic btw ;D

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

midogirules In reply to ??? [2009-03-30 21:49:20 +0000 UTC]

wow/ AMAZING. cans yu pls be eated by me so i can get your artisticnesssss? XD

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

MisterOrchestra In reply to ??? [2009-03-30 07:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww, poor creature. She needs someone to show her a little love. A gentle pat on the head and some good foods. Yes. Sad animals are sad, lol. She's cute though, regardless.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

tooneh In reply to ??? [2009-03-30 06:48:59 +0000 UTC]

< such a sad story
cute tho XD

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

BaltinaBlackS In reply to ??? [2009-03-30 05:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww! She is too beautiful !

I love the story !

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

realWolfshade In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 20:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Really nice-the char`s design as well as her story

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

uzgus [2009-03-29 19:56:59 +0000 UTC]

ooh
cool ^^


--
call me .=3 wolfy.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ArctosVulpes [2009-03-29 17:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Are you TRYING to make people cry! Goossh! What a horrid mess! T.T

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Rui-rui [2009-03-29 16:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww, the poor baby. D: Makes me want to whip up a loving male that'd make her feel right at home.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Animaleson15 [2009-03-29 13:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww poor girl She is SO cool!! A wery uniche charLove her scars,SO cool

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

poothos In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 12:38:53 +0000 UTC]

THERE IS NO WAY I'D SIMPLIFY HER, AHH she is so perfect! I love complexity and omg I love her ; ; Thankyou so much gah... the stripes on her legs are so awesome and the face, she looks incredibly innocent, poor girl. ><; I LOVE her history, it's so. Perfect. Youareawesome. <333333

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Kaylink In reply to poothos [2009-03-29 15:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Ffffff I'm so glad you like it x3 I'm eager to see how the contest plays out!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

poothos In reply to Kaylink [2009-03-30 08:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Me too xD I have a feeling I'm gonna have to make more... prizes... because I already want more than one character. *dies*

I think I'm gonna have to ask a friend to help judge. xD!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

88celine [2009-03-29 10:15:03 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!!!
You're making hyenas look like gods!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

faithandfreedom [2009-03-29 09:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh,my gosh!It's wonderful and amazing!
Hope you'll win!
BTW I love hyenas too!I guess must design a new chara..

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Chaoyll [2009-03-29 07:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Jesus, that's a long of scars and an amazing history. I'm loving this character. o.o

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

SueaNoi [2009-03-29 07:23:37 +0000 UTC]

before I read her history, I was like "WHOA! those are a lot of scars!"
after I read, I feel like she's one of the most interesting character I've seen in a big while. vey few characters are designed castrated. and that's what make her unique.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Sle3pStar In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 07:10:25 +0000 UTC]

aw she's so beat up ]:

Really interesting and developed back story and character!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Falcolf In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 05:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Oo love the mane and colours and the anatomy rules!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

So-Cashi [2009-03-29 05:21:42 +0000 UTC]

awesome character design,

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Tikiya In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 04:24:36 +0000 UTC]

HOLYFUCKDSJFKDSF
I NEED YOU TO CREATE MY CHARACTERS
if this doesnt win; im going to steal her;;;

fuufuf her design is so gourgeousss very veryyy
it better win or else i'll have to back hand someone
LOL

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ROYALTYJTWAFFLEZ In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 04:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww what a sad story she has.. I really love her though, shes a wonderful character

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

SeleneTheWerewolf [2009-03-29 03:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Nice. I love the character <3

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

blutastic [2009-03-29 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really awesome design! Very tragic but original history, wonderfully done. <3

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

SUNgoddessOKAMI [2009-03-29 03:29:49 +0000 UTC]

I really love the design, and her fur coloration/markings.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

diffrr3nt [2009-03-29 03:27:53 +0000 UTC]

awesomz

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

equinnoxious [2009-03-29 03:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww, she looks pretty beat up
Very nice design though

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Lobo-the-Wolf [2009-03-29 02:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Very good character. I love chars with scars.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Xylv [2009-03-29 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

D; you make me want to design a hyena now

That's one hell of a back-story/ref picture, it's awesome.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

thesilvermist [2009-03-29 01:45:00 +0000 UTC]

D: poor baby had one hell of a life

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Avyris In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 01:38:49 +0000 UTC]

What a deliciously designed yena. Avy approves. :3

Dammit. Now I'm gonna have to work my ass of to think of something better. >< Way to make things difficult for me slave. Curse you and your mad creative skills.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Kaylink In reply to Avyris [2009-03-29 01:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Once you work your ass off, give it to me so I can mount it above my fireplace. And I do mean mount.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

LanceyTheDog In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 01:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, cool. The design is amazing! And I love the face. : D Good luck in the contest~!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Tiraynan In reply to ??? [2009-03-29 01:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I feel bad for what happened to her in her past, but, at least she got away. xD
And I love the colors on her, too. ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

AppleRat [2009-03-29 01:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Whoa this is amazing!! ^^ xDD
lolol i love her expression and the design is very awesome <333
Wow nice history, it fits her CX
This is awesome, good luck winnin the contest!! ^^ C:

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

knightspirit46 [2009-03-29 01:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0