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Request 2014JUL59A from Soul-of-Platinum CommentWhile on a Photo shoot, Serena is shot with a hypno camera to wear a Fennekin type outfit with the ears and tail
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I like how she has big fenniken earsΒ
Keep going
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Since your...not open atm, I'll instead critique...
The Art itself is a good piece, can't lie there.
As for script, you should really watch your grammar.
"Any shoot to any girl" should be "any shot to any girl"
I know that sound violent, but come on, only a person without common sense would take that the wrong way. And if you don't have any common sense well...apologies for rudeness, but why are you on DA without any common sense?
That said, I do like the speech bubbles with a swirl design. It adds character, and I like that.
And please, do not chew me out for dissing your grammer; I'm very grammar picky as it is.
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I thank for the grammar/spelling correction I tend to mix some obvious words mainly because is not my native language and I haven't practiced it a lot properly in the last years, whatever, I do not welcome critiques very well, and that's the reason I don't use that request widget.
Still, I doubt that's much of a critique, more like a compliment (possibly the only critique would be the one for the speech bubble)
I feel a proper critique should give a better explanation of why something was liked or not
Example: "The anatomy of the characters is a bit odd compared with traditional manga/anime style, nor looks like a proper cartoon style yet it has it's own charm, still you should try to give less... wide the arms, since it should be taken as she is a physical strong character or something of the sort/looks like Popeye."
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Sorry...not a good person of tearing apart art to find bad things. I'm more a grammar nerd.
Besides, everyone has their own drawing style, and you've kept yours around a LONG time.
You've found your own way to draw art, and really, isn't that what matters?
I can't tell you anything to do better; if your style is the most comfortable to you, why change it?
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A critique does not necessarily has to be a bad thing
There is positive, constructive and destructive critique
And critique is an art it's own way.
Is just that it's not desired by my being nor asked.
Still, grammar and spelling corrections are very welcome
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And I'm quite good at pointing them out.
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I like this pic if it wasn't for a Fanfic. Β Dont ask
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One where she was in a furry fetish with nudity and sensual themes.
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Phil the camera guy? At least it isn't the Mr. Bonding guy. He creeps me out.
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My pleasure, sorry for the late reply!~
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Don't like Serena but Β do like the idea
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I personally would prefer Hilda, but well, people request/suggest, I draw
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Hilda is amazing 
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