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Published: 2012-03-23 01:26:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Another day in a world so sad
She's lost everything that she had
The innocence of youth, now long gone
She crumbles within, for she's not strong
If only one could hear her quiet voice
Take away that single choice
Correct this one wrong that she had done
Erase the pain that now had come
She could regain all that she had lost
For she had not known the cost
The price that she would pay was too dear
Now she has cried too many tears
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fantasEteen [2012-03-23 02:29:00 +0000 UTC]
i like this especially the way the lines rhyme, almost like a song i can sing to
good job!~
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KBeth In reply to fantasEteen [2012-03-23 11:16:47 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thank you so very much! Do you write?
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fantasEteen In reply to KBeth [2012-03-23 17:00:14 +0000 UTC]
why, yes XD i try to come up with decent stuff (decent as in interesting)
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