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darkicetheblackwolf [2010-02-11 05:35:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the symmetry of the pic with two mountain sides placed at left and right,two wolves at the center with the same expressions give the pic a good balance
About shading,u should add darker colours of their fur on their faces,chins,chest,front legs and a few part of the hindlegs which are shaded by their thighs and bodies.
*With the red one's white chest fur,u can use gray for the shade ,as long as u go to the edges of his/her chest ,gently press the colour gray until it reaches its darkest then use black to edge his/her chest.
*About his/her red part,u should recolour his/her red fur(at least i think it's red)
then use brown (it makes red becomes crimson)then black)
*Yellow one:u can use chrome yellow first, then orange,burnt ochre then brown for shading his/her fur(u can add black if u like )
Mountain side:at the feet,colour dark gray or black instead,as long as they go to the two sides of the pics,they will get darker.
Add a little moss-green on them
LIGHT:
Red one:leave his/her along-nape mane stays red,use yeloow or chrome yellow to lighten ,mix a little of vermilion or orange at the border of yellow and red.
Yellow one:same steps with the red one but lighten it with white

PS:That's all what i can give you to make your pic looks better
Sorry 4 my bad grammar!Hope u can get the ideas(stupid me! )
btw,can u show me their names?

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Green-Magyk [2010-01-03 16:56:18 +0000 UTC]

wow! you just keep on getting better and better bud! this is really nice perspective, can't wait to see more of these two chars as well ^^

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TeezGeez [2010-01-03 12:52:27 +0000 UTC]

i adore this perspective!! <3333

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Dragon-Minded [2010-01-03 08:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, this is new ^^ Okay, let's start

First of all, you said that your main focus was perspective. Well, let me be the first to say that you did a great job on it and really gives depth to the drawing. The wolves's poses are obviously epic and who doesn't like that ? Once again, you did the wolves flawlessly. Plus, I really like the fact that you gave the fur a motion suggesting wind (witch by the way adds to the epicness of this picture x3 ) so nothing more to say about that. The background is relatively simple but it's okay. The background isn't the most important in this kind of drawing. You made a very hard shading on the ground with the shadows of the wolves. This is the first thing wrong that I see. You did a very contrasted shadow and the wolves themselves are barely shaded at all. I can see that you did a very light shading but considering the one you did on the ground and the fact that it is a sunset, the contrast of shading on the wolves should be much greater. I know shading is hard with colored pencils but I can suggest you this : if it's too hard to shade on the paper, you can always shade it via GIMP of photoshop if you have the software. I can give you tips if you plan on using that method eventually ^^. Finally to conclude, just one last thing bothers me, both wolves have almost the identical expression ^^ But I guess it's not that problematic xD.

Okay, finished

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spyro-cynder-fan [2010-01-03 07:14:28 +0000 UTC]

good job on this one, i could do no better!

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