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| Personal Information
B a s i c s ;Name: Rita Lin
Nickname(s): Bird brain (by Lavi), Ri
Gender: Female
Age: 17 (October 17, 18XX)
Nationality: Mexican (Her ethnicity is Hispanic)
Blood Type: O
Zodiac: Libra
Height: 163cm (5ft 4in)
Weight: 74kg (163lbs)
Body Type: Muscular
Notable Markings: Freckles on her cheeks and shoulders. Also has light coloring on her arms, upper thighs, and bottoms of her feet.
P e r s o n a l i t y ;Rita tends to be the kind of girl that sticks to what she believes strongly. It takes a lot to change her mind on certain things, thus leading to most people seeing how hard-headed she can be. Despite being hard-headed she is a rather friendly person and loves to be around others often. When around friends she is usually calm but can be loud if something exciting happens without meaning to be. Although, if something bad were to happen she gets loud as well which sometimes leads to others trying to figure out if she is just excited or if she is angry about something. She has trouble keeping her cool at times, so it is common to see her taking her frustrations out on training dummies.
Interests: She likes to read mystery books and growing different kinds of peppers.
Likes: Peppers, music she can dance to, clear days where she can fly in the sky some, (WIP)
Dislikes: Hates when people say nothing but hateful words about their family, wearing shoes, (WIP)
Quirks: This girl eats peppers like candy. She tries to put them in literally everything she eats. She loves to spice up her food that no one can share any rations with her due to all the extra spice.
| P e r s o n a l i t y B a r
[5 = max; 3 = average; 1 = min]
Education: 2
Affinity: 3
Battle: 5
Mental: 3
Flexibility: 4
Attention: 2
| Work Information
P r o f i l e ;Affiliation: Black Order
Base of Operations: European Branch (HQ) (Formally North American Branch)
Occupation: Exorcist
Mentor: Klaud Nine
Partner(s): Feng Lin
Golem: Her golem has an aerodynamic body shape with wings and tail to match. It is made like this to keep up with her when she flies. It has a large pupil as well with a cross-hair in the middle of it. (Body is WIP progress of being drawn.)
Preferred Mission Types: She is good for solo missions, extermination missions, rescue missions, and scouting. She can work in group missions as long as she knows the other people who are active in the group.
Limitations/Punishments: She has a limit to her flying, since they are her arms over all. Depending how what she is doing while using her wings, the time is always varying on when she needs to rest.
A n t i - A k u m a W e a p o n ;Innocence Name: Arpía (Harpy)
Innocence Type: Parasitic (Face, arms, legs, and feet)
Syncronization Rate: 89%
Deactivated Form: When deactivated they take the form of patches on her sink.
Activated Form: When activated she grows a beak over her nose and mouth while feathers grow from her cheeks and reach over her ears and fluff out, her arms turn into wings with two short, sharp tallons on the ends, feathers grow on her thighs and poof out some, her knees turn to bend backwards and become the same turn into bird legs, and she grows three large, sharp tallons on the front of her feet while shorter tallons grow on the back, one on each claw.
Level 1 | Eyes in the Skies
She uses this smaller version of her form for scouting missions. Her legs re normal for the most part, as well as her face, but her wings grow to full size to allow her to fly in the skies. The wings lack tallons on her wings in this form.
- Flight: Using her arms she soars above in the sky. While it is a very basic, it comes in very handy when needing to do quick scouting.
+ Like actual birds, she cannot stay in the sky forever and her arms get tired.
- Hawk Eyes: As the name states, she uses the remaining energy from her innocence to increase her eye sight. She can see up to a mile away.
+ Hawks tend to able to see 8 times better than a person, so when she focusing the remaining energy she is able to have the sight of a hawk.
Level 2 | Slash and Tear
Rita takes on her full harpy form, growing her tallons out and having them ready to tear into her enemies.
- Tallons Out: Her tallons grow out and are ready to start tearing Akumas and the like apart. Mainly using the ones on her feet, but when she is close to something while her feet are busy she uses the smaller ones as a defense.
- Feathers of Steal: The feathers on her wings harden and can act as a shield when she is not in flight.
+ Due to the feathers being formed from her innocence they are not like normal feathers of birds. They can coat themselves in a thin substance that mimics steal.
Wind Slash: Rita can use her wings to make strong, powerful gusts of wind that can slash through most materials. While it can slash through a Level 1 Akuma, it can only knock back Level 2 and above Akumas.
Falling Drill: This move is only possible while she is in the air. Rita flies up high and then allows herself to fall, going into a spin as she does so. She then uses her beak to then drill right through her target.
Her innocence is based off of the visual myths of harpys. She can do most things a harpy can, except eat people. That would be cannibalism.
The visual appearance of her innocence is based off a bird who is native to Mexico, the Bat Falcon.
| Background
H i s t o r y O u t l i n e ;Age ?: Is left at the doorstep of an orphanage.Age 6: Starts to run a muck around the town for businesses.Age 8: Drinks water out of a cactus, gaining her innocence.Age 11: General Klaud Nine comes to investigate about rumors of a child who takes the form of a bird. Rita starts training under Klaud not long after.Age 13: Her training ends and she joins the Order.Age 14: Meets Feng Lin for the first time. Adopted by Feng not long after.
H i s t o r y ;WIP
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| Extra Information
Q u o t e s ;"Si soy un cerebro de pájaro, no eres un cerebro." ("If I'm a bird brain you are a no brain." to Lavi)"Can I have some jalapenos now?"
T r i v i a ;- While she was still young she met Leng, who did everything in his power to adopt young Rita when he found out she was an orphan.- Her innocence was originally going to be spikes of some kind coming from her legs, I could not think on how to get it to work out very well. Then I remembered I once suggested to Miki something about a harpy for an idea for one of her characters. This is new, so I am open to more ideas or suggestions to help improve her.
- She wears two hair sticks that Leng gave her. They have blue jewels at the ends of them.
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Comments: 3
Alright, time for a critique as requested~!
Basics and physical description both look alright~
I would say expand on her personality a bit. She only has maybe 5 traits; people have a lot more than that, and the majority of the ones are negative which makes her a bit unbalanced. I'd say make her a little more complex; maybe she struggles with her anger and tries to restrain it, but simply can't? There's a lot you can do there~
Misc. personality and the personality stats look alright though, so there's a plus!
As for her weapon, the activated appearence does seem a bit much. I'd say keep it to one trait (maybe the eyes or wings?)if need be, otherwise it feels a little overdone. Or, if you'd rather keep the design, perhaps make it the appearence of her level 2 weapon and leave level 1 as just the single trait.
Other than that, the rest seems fine! The bio is a bit scarse right now and needs more work, but I'm certain you can do plenty with it~ I can't wait to see more of her later on!
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Thanks.:3 I am working with her personality more off screen. I just have to find ways to explain it better in writing when I do write it in her bio. lol Also gonna adjust her innocence in a few ways. Like the deactivated colors and some of it's looks when activated. Just have to figure out how to blend the level 1 and 2 together since I tried looking at other bios that used this templet. Might just all stick them under one thing and get rid of the level parts.
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I'll try to help if I can~ What I do nowadays is make a basic list of traits, like this one from my persona's bio:
Positive Traits: Kind-hearted, polite, selfless, loyal, supportive
Neutral Traits: Quiet, observant
Negative Traits: Timid, anxious, passive, stubborn, worrier
Then go more indepth with it under that. It helps to keep track, but I know it probably won't work for everyone~ XD
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