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Description haha, remember the poll where i asked you guys if you'd be bothered if i posted my non-furry art?
i'm so gonna make you regret clicking the 'i don't mind' button lD

This weekend, before i became ill, i went to an uh, 'open school day', where you can take a peek at
different schools to see how they function, and if it's to your liking.
I went to an art school, and damn i was so impressed with all the games they made!
they looked so very good, 15 times better than most well-rated indiegames!
So i was like OH MY GOSH I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO DO THAT!

So i rounded up a couple of drawings i was proud of
and took my laptop with me, to see if i apply to be accepted.

welp, i totally did not :'D
The sir was impressed with my drawing skills and use of colour,
but he said he needed to see a whole lot more than just that.

So i have half a year to fix a diverse portfolio with a high variety of stuff!
And since i suck at anything that's non-dog related,, i figured i need to start asap :'D

The first two were a source of utter frustration and i'm very very displeased with them,
the third is merely a joke, and i had a lot of fun with the last one!
I'll be recording the next batch i'll make, because progress is also very important to show in a portfolio!

Which one is your favourite?
Where'd you like to take a stroll?
What could be the story behind these sceneries?
chat away lovelies, share your ideas with me and let your creativity flow!
i wanna make stories with these things with you! <3

Also, I found TumblingTiger 's art a big big inspiration for this,
he's a master when it comes to backgrounds and more!
I also used this for some fun colourcombinations!
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Comments: 29

ShakeltOut [2014-12-04 22:05:49 +0000 UTC]

I think the first and last are the best, this is because if how you used the colours to set the sence as well as mood. For example in the first one by using green it is very relaxed where as in the last one, by using grey the mood is rather mysterious and also relaxing// pshh i suck at giving ideas soz
ANYWAY BAB THESE ARE AMAZING ;w;

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TumblingTiger [2014-12-03 14:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear you got something out of my work! Really means a lot.

I'll throw my two cents in, a kind of a mini critique. Hope you won't mind
I find the bottom right painting definately the most pleasing. It has nice atmospheric perspective, clearest value separation and relaxing colours. The third also has pleasant palette, but not too much depth. Maybe a lower camera angle to get a bit more perspective out and some grass strands on the front ground. Or add a character, I imagine this would work quite well with some animal playing in there 
   The first two I think have a bit too much saturated colours in them and not enough dark values. (Maybe I'm just too dark of a person )
  Compositionally, the first one has two little things that catch my eye: 1. The tree on the left following the edge of the picture. I'd break the form a bit, maybe let the background go all the way to the edge, or have some branches or mushrooms or whatever to make it not so straight. 2. The path in the middle. It's pretty much the same colour and value from far to close. Everything else in the painting gets darker the closer they are, the path kind of just "stays in the back". And it's also pretty straight, you could hide it a bit more in the bushes to get more depth.
   For the mountains I'd say paint different forms. Like on the forest, you did different trees and branches. Not too different, but different enough to be unique and interesting. Also, the clouds are not looking too natural. The colour or thickness or something makes them feel out of place there. I'm bad with clouds, and can't quite put my finger on what's up with these, but they just don't feel like they belong. 

   Overall, I'd say use the whole value range, and separate background, middleground and the foreground from each other by value to really get depth. Just like you did in the bottom right picture, I think the back- and middlegrounds are well separated, and the main tree trunk goes quite dark up close.

   Sorry, when I start, I wont stop Some people don't like it. If I didn't say something coherently or you disagree or anything else, I'm here.
   You really have the skills, looking at your gallery I know you do. It's just a small matter of getting to know a new subject.

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GhostlyEctoplasm [2014-12-03 05:50:16 +0000 UTC]

I'd definitly want to take a walk in that green forest XD

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kwinzilla [2014-12-02 21:36:24 +0000 UTC]

aaa I love your use of colours! I like the first one and the last one most ^_^ Btw what school did you visit?

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Keesness In reply to kwinzilla [2014-12-02 21:46:05 +0000 UTC]

ahh thank you!
i'm glad you think so!
Hilversum, HKU!
oh boy oh boy i'm so excited to show off my new portfolio!!
I so hope it'll be sufficient!

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kwinzilla In reply to Keesness [2014-12-02 21:53:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Omg I might apply there too!!! goshh my dream is to become a game artist They have some really cool stuff! aaaa I should work on my portfolio too.. ._.'

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Keesness In reply to kwinzilla [2014-12-02 21:56:26 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH WE'LL GET TO MEET
will you be applying for this year?
WE MIGHT BECOME CLASSMATES OMGOMG

Good luck!
i hope it'll work out m'friend!

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kwinzilla In reply to Keesness [2014-12-02 21:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Aaa thank youu!!
And yes I will!! omg would be awesome ;w; you seem rly cool and stuff
But I'm also considering another school for game art..
btw creepy and awkward question but could i add you on skype?

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Keesness In reply to kwinzilla [2014-12-02 22:00:13 +0000 UTC]

yeeees aaah!
hell yes i'm great HAHA
ohh which one? i wanna go there too,
to see if it's more awesome uvu/

Sure you can! i'm not that often online though,,
i'll note you mine! <3

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kwinzilla In reply to Keesness [2014-12-02 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

aaa sure! I really want to get into NHTV in Breda! ;w; that school just seems so....great......-cries-

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Keesness In reply to kwinzilla [2014-12-02 22:06:12 +0000 UTC]

aaah i see,
that's way too far away for me,
i've been planning to move in with my boy next year,
and he lives in Leiden, so we'll rent a little house in Utrecht,
so that we're both close to Hilversum and Leiden!
So Breda is out of the question for me,
so i won't visit so i won't know what i miss haha!
But whatever you choose, Good luck with it! <3

Since we both live in the netherlands, we can always meet up pretty easily anyway if we'd want to! <3

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kwinzilla In reply to Keesness [2014-12-02 22:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah! Should be fun ^_^
I currently live at home with my parents and my boyfriend also wants to study game art at NHTV (we're like twins, we have the same intests, hobbies etc lol)
but they only accept like 200 or so students every year and it's SO tough getting in ugh T_T
Their stuff tho, wow just wow www.youtube.com/watch?v=EPsYUu…
Breda is so nice like I think the school just fits me most and it's also close to where I live now
HKU is kind of my plan B tho, I mean it's pretty much impossible to get into NHTV
but a girl can dream ;u;

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zeraan [2014-12-02 20:47:32 +0000 UTC]

They're all amazing.
I especially like the first and the last ones, they are very well drawn and look interesting c:
I really love the atmosphere of the third one as well, it has something mystical and dark, I love it!

I would really love to apply to an art school as well, but there isn't none where I live and I don't have money.
But I really hope you'll be able to be accepted!

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Aquiavel [2014-12-02 20:39:08 +0000 UTC]

They're all really great, but honestly THAT FOURTH ONE <3
I adore the perspective and the palette :3 

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FlameKurosei [2014-12-02 20:24:25 +0000 UTC]

I really like the greenery scene on the top left. I like the sense of depth that piece has with fore/mid/background, and the golden lighting gives it an ethereal feeling. o:

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Keesness In reply to FlameKurosei [2014-12-02 20:34:16 +0000 UTC]

ohh really??
it's one of my least favourites,
i feel like i didn't do it much justice, there's still so much room for details,
and the contrast isn't to my liking, but it took me already much longer than the other three combined
so i decided to call it a quit!
But i'm glad you see some good points in it,
i've noted them and will take the feedback with me to a next piece!
thank you! <3

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FlameKurosei In reply to Keesness [2014-12-02 21:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well I thought it was more of a focus on soft coloured backgrounds, in which it looks great!

Not a problem ma'am--glad I could help!

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RoxyPaw [2014-12-02 20:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Okay, the last one made me lose my jaw. WHOAW!

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Keesness In reply to RoxyPaw [2014-12-02 20:33:00 +0000 UTC]

SHIT WE GOTTA FIND IT
ELSE WE CAN'T FIGHT OVER SKYPE ANYMORE
I LOVE FIGHTING <3

haha, thank you m'bab ;u; <3

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Kyldrun [2014-12-02 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]

I really like the two at the bottom, they just look so magical! :'D
Do more of these, I bet they'll be awesome! I'm sure with some more practice, they'll be
begging you to come back at that art school again~
I really should practice backgrounds too, they're a pain.

OH and the pink one's story could be about a magical puddle that changes animals into humans!? :3
It just looks perfect for such thing~

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Keesness In reply to Kyldrun [2014-12-02 20:24:31 +0000 UTC]

ahh, it means so so much to me that you like 'em!!
And that you'd like to see more! ;o;
I was a bit worried people would be annoyed with me if i'd post my under-developed practise poop here aha!

oeh yes! but pff i understand that it's difficult to start practising,
it's so frustrating to come up with something imo!

OH YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY <3
that's what i thought too, i'm so glad you got that haha!

COOL
MAGICAL PINK RADIOACTIVE PUDDLE <3

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Kyldrun In reply to Keesness [2014-12-03 16:54:56 +0000 UTC]

YEah, I love them a lot!!
I always have and will look up do people who can do good 
backgrounds! c: I don't think they would, I'm pretty sure true watchers will like anything you post and if they don't,
they can either leave or not look at it~
You don't have to be a slave to the internet, just do what you like!ˇ

Original ideas kind of are hard to come up with, but I might try! x3

I'm so happy you're happy! :'3
Can I write a little story so the picture could illustrate the story?

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Keesness In reply to Kyldrun [2014-12-03 18:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Ahh happy!
Thank you again for your support <3

Ahh me too, it is somehow so much harder to make bg than characters!
And aw, thats actually really good advice, since itsa bit my insecurity todo stuff that people might dislikexd
So im truly gratefull <3
GOODLUCK! I know you can do it <3

And OMG YES PLEASE! That would beso awesome!
Now i really feel like making characters for these as well, and work it all out!
Wanna make a universe/rp thing with me about it? 

Like, you make the story and i the characters or something?

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Kyldrun In reply to Keesness [2014-12-03 19:08:38 +0000 UTC]

My backrounds are VERY simple usually.
Like, only trees or a simple colour~ Or mountains, because they're super-easy to draw.
//And I'm very happy when I can be useful somehow, hah. xD
I mean.. it's all obvious, but hard to follow usually. Good luck to you too~

AA yas please. :'D I mean, I love writing, drawing and roleplaying is like their child. xD
Soo, I can make a starting story, but I suppose the characters would be needed?
Or you mean, that I make a background story for the scenery place and then we could rp there using it?
Do you like to write too? I love it, especially when I learn fancy new words and all and get to use them and feel smart. :'D
Although I'm not as good of a writer as I am an artist, or in drawing, but I think that one can never be utterly bad in anything they like, am I right?!

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Keesness In reply to Kyldrun [2014-12-03 19:53:52 +0000 UTC]

haha,  practise!
just say to yourself 'i'm not going to stop untill this is full of details and it looks great!'
I did it with the green forest-y one too, while it was frustrating, i got a semi-satsifying result!

you cheered me up a lot with this string of messages,
so thank you tons for that ;u; <3
Thank you!

AWESOME!
i love rp, but i'm really bad at it because i get embarrassed about having to talk for a character and do the entire
*is now walking over to the grass* thing aha,
so most of the people who tried to rp with me just stopped responding because i'm so awkward :'D
//and i've never attempted sexrp because i find it gross so that's not why i'm awkward x'D

Yeah, i mend that you write a little background story,
setting the scene in a way, and then make characters for it together?
Or, we can like,
that you write a story, and that i illustrate it?
//safer for me, because i'm so awkward at actual rp aha.. :'D
YES FANCY WORDS are my favourite as well!
i'm actually really dumb,, like today,
i was talking with m'precious M0CKERY about stuff,
and he suggested i might have a shortage on vitamin B
so i replied 'oh, i'll make sure to add that into my diet then!'
And he just said 'you get that from the sun lD'
SO YEAH I LOVE TO LOOK SMART WITH FANCY WORDS TOO AHA

and i fully agree with you!
if you love doing something, you must at least be half good at it because else it would be too frustrating to love and share!
so LET YOUR CREATIVE JUICES FLOW!
i give you a 100% go! <3

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M0CKERY In reply to Keesness [2014-12-03 21:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Vitamin D. Which you get from sun
and during winter you get less of it so you take vitamin pills if it becomes a problem lD

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Kyldrun In reply to Keesness [2014-12-03 20:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I will hopefully try that,
haha! xD
But it'll probably take some time~
after all, a good artist should know how to draw a bit
of everything.

HAha, I love responding to.. messages and stuff, hah. cx
When they're about an interesting topic I give a shit about~

Um.. I don't know about you, but I'm not that kind of a roleplayer..
The ones I do usually look sometheing like :
''Fay's words take Hikaru by suprise, although in a way it's obvious. No one can live alone forever, but say such a thing to /him/ isn't very common."Really?" He half stammers:" Well that would be very cool of you, bro!" Excitement tingling in his chest, he thinks of everything he could do here - and maybe even with Fay. He could go when and where he wants or do what he wants or fly over the valley and most important: †ake the fire. All that, of course, when the mouflon-dude doesn't want to set him up for a trap and slay him in his sleep. He walks to the window and looks outside, searching for the spot where exactly Fay is looking:"So.. er... what exactly are you looking at here?"

  That was quite a random example I took from my friends' and my rp.. Meaning that we barely use the *walks* or Tina-sleeps thing. It's more in a narrative form like a story.. Would that be okay with you? C:
When the plot is interesting, I will always reply, so probably it'll mostly be up to you.
//And don't talk about sex-rp to me, I get embarrassed when I'm supposed to make my character smooch someone! XD

I wrote something.. threw something together, I'll note it to you and we can discuss where we
continue it later, m'kay!?

BAsically, I thought it could be of a Perfect, but forgotten world that now needs saving from complete desolation, because no one ever goes there.
There could be one character that is sent to save it who'd be entirely good and flawless and one who already lives in that land who is wicked and such!? Just.. an idea, you'll see in the note~
//I'm not that much of a story-writer, since I'm never able to finish them, ahaha. xD So.. I'd prefer to be awkward, who cares anyway?

AAA, yes YAS, I love using them, although it often looks like that I make a simple sentence and throw something 
fancy in the middle, so it's all weird. xD But oh well..
I found this poem some days ago and I found it really beautiful, containing a buttload of belletristic words and expressions by the way.
This one: www.poetry-archive.com/b/to_th…

//Ahah, I get that too. xD Like, when someone says something and I reply, although I'm not even sure what it means!


Woop, I'll send you the note with the story then~
Sorry for the long message. xD
 

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Keesness In reply to Kyldrun [2014-12-03 21:22:14 +0000 UTC]

ohh,, that's a very good take on an artist!
i've been focusing last year so much on developing my own style,
so i could make money off of my art,
that i kinda forgot how to draw anything else.
And working just for money, i found out, is way too stressfull to continue.
So a short break, trying to fall back in love again with drawing!

ahh i think i've got my head half-way up my ass,
sometimes i need to think too hard to reply to a message and i just-
i can't bring myself to it Dx
and then i feel bad and take even more time to do it
and then i forget about it :'D
//i'm one of those scumbag artists who gets full of themselfs when they hit the double numbers in watchers x'D

OHH MY GOSH THAT'S SO SO MUCH BETTER.
it feels 100 times less awkward that way,
since it's like typing a story!!
i'd love to try that way of roleplay out!
//oh god i'm glad you think that too xDD
Else we would've had a VERY awkward point in our story and one of us would feel like crap x'D

Yes i would love that!
Though i'm going to go to bed soon,
lately i have been so very low on energy..
i sleep preferably 20 hours a day aha
so i'll have to look at it tomorrow, if i can,
because i'll have to work for 9 hours,
so it could be that i'm totally exhausted from that too, i'm sorry!
But at least this saturday/sunday i'll have time, so i promise you to AT LEAST reply by then!

So far it sounds very interesting!!
I'm personally not that fond of black-white characters,
i love characters that are flawed, i think it makes them more lovable!
but those are details, i'll try to explain it better once i got to read your story,
maybe i'm understanding it completely wrong!
Just type what you have in mind, then later on i can throw my idea's in there as well!

I'll read the link tomorrow as well,,
i'm very curious haha! <3

//pff ahaha, i do that too xD
Shame on us!

Don't worry about it,
i love it! It's fun to talk with you <3
Thank you for spending time on me <3

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Kyldrun In reply to Keesness [2014-12-04 15:18:21 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling well, because
let's be honest, I do that too.
It can be really stressful and the worst part is
that I hoard commissions and in the end I don't need 
the money for anything even. D: xD
So, ugh..

AAA I can relate to that too much. xD
Once I was talking to a guy and he wrote me a suuper-long message
and I just waited so long, that I never did it 
and finally deleted it. xP
// I think you're very nice in general and to your watchers!! You always seemed an awesome
person, but I never bring myself to just going up and starting a random convo with someone.
Like, for example if I wanted to talk to you, I'd never send a note saying 'hi. ' because I don't like that kind of conversations 
AH, it's /really/ hard to explain, just, in my opinion starting to randomly talking to someone you don't know that well is a wee weird.

Haha, yeah, I know! c:
I gave up that Tina*sleeps* rp a long time ago. The one I showed you is so much better
and you can develop your English and vocabulary~

//Hh, you really seem to have a buttload of work.
Oh well, actually I have school almost as long every day. But it's not as exhausting, since there I
have friends and breaks and I can draw basically whenever I want! What work do you do?
Also lucky. cx I sleep like 7 hours a day, eh. :'D
//No hurry I guess, it was your idea to rp, so I won't push you! c: Reply whenever you have time~

//I'll reply the character and this part in the note reply! :3

//Shame-shame, ain't we lame. x'D Ahaha, I love rhymes so much, they're so fun!! <33

Awh, thanks! c: I'm so glad when someone says that and even more glad that 
you took off your time to chat with me, thanks a lot! x3 I try not to sound too stupid,
because for some reason I have this thing with talking to older folks than me. I mean like,
I enjoy it a lot, but I'm only 14, so ahaha. I hit it off with childish people I guess. :'D
I hope you don't feel weird because of that!

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