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GODDAMN!!!
this is truly the kind of thing that grabs my attention
honestly i havent seen many fancomics that are able to give the viewer the things that this comic gives
and i am not talking about those fancomics that are just a vague version of a japanese anime or something that tries to get more over the top
NO
this comic kicks the ass of all the people that tried and failed to do a comic....
but despite the incredible artwork,the punches,the blood and the magic of this succesful comic
the history is the only thing that fails
its pretty cliche in some parts
IN FACT i think you tried to deliver a much more bigger quantity in history than this
but you couldn't
this project belongs to the right hands and its far more outstanding than sonichu or a comic from nancher
but its starting to die
you deserve a lot of stars my friend
good luck in your future projects
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First of all, thank you so much for your awesome and sincere critique! This is the kind of feedback I was searching. In fact, I know about the cliche parts. Guess I didn't notice at the beggining I feel like... wow... makes me want to redo that or something. But you can trust the rest of the story on me. There are many things that I created myself, things that I've never seen in any other story.
But.. what do you mean by "starting to die"?
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When i said "starting to die"
i was referring to those situations
in wich you want do the comic all over again to improve its quality
but considering how many pages you did (like 39)
it will take more time and work
its a pain in the assΒ
BELIEVE ME
and most of the people dont do itΒ
killing their projects
SORRY IT WAS A PREDICTION
I SHOULD ERASE THAT PART
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Hahaha! Don't worry! My mind is open for critiques and I always take feedbacks seriously.
There are some things that I can't see myself, that's why I need the help and suggestiongs of my readers (also why I ask for critiques on my pages, I need to know if the story, the composition and everything else is ok).
It helps to improve the quality of my work. If you have anything else you want to tell me, to help me, I'd be very glad to listen.
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IN FIRST PLACE its a good idea to read bad comics
if you see their mistakes you will not repeat them
as an example
i have 2 retarded comics wich are a complete mess
here are the linksΒ cocoliso44.deviantart.com/art/β¦
cocoliso44.deviantart.com/art/β¦
IN SECOND PLACE a script is a thing you can modifyΒ
but not a draw DONT DRAW AND WRITE AT THE SAME TIME
AND IN THIRD PLACE watch movies or read books
they can be helpful sometimes
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A Winchester who hunts monsters? Sam and Dean would be proud.
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Technically 4, because W is like two V's xD
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I used to have a friend called Veronica and she was a bit clutsy hehehe
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