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Kemmasandi — Contest- Ria Delta
Published: 2010-03-09 05:35:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 9123; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 58
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Edit2: I won. OMG I freaking won.Edit: Okay, now that I have advice from people who know more spanish than me, I have two things I should probably point out. Her release command, "Desgarrar" should be "Desgarra", and her zanpaku-to should probably be "Olas Blancas". I can't just edit the picture though, because I've lost the Photoshop document...
Forget about Ren and his hive, or Makoto- this chick is insane. Read below for details. X3
Okay, so I entered ~peachery ’s Create An Arrancar contest, purely because it gave me an excuse to make up yet another OC. I didn’t really need to make a full bio… but what the hell, I did anyway. ^^ And my muse worked overtime on this. Did you know I’ve now got four gender-screwed OCs in the Bleach fandom alone? XD
Name: Ria Delta (Ria meaning river, and delta being a wide floodplain cut through by channels at the mouth of a river.)
Inspiration: Portuguese Man o’ War- [link] [link]
Comments: Do you like his/her Hollow Mask? It’s based off the Man o’ War’s float-thing… and that’s really the only reason why I made Ria a jellyfish girl/boy- because I wanted to draw an Arrancar with a mask like that. It‘s like a mob cap… with fangs! X3
Of the three personas, it’s probably Rietvald who’s got control at the moment… You can tell by the lack of either a sullen expression (Divencha) or a savage grin (Garrde)…
Actually, why does everyone like Ria so much? Apart from you people that commented, I already know why you do. ^^ I'm just kinda gobsmacked that her progress picture got so many favourites already...
Bio is now being updated~
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Comments: 93
This was awesome and the concept of using a man o' war was great
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She's so elegant, yet shifty. Her overall design is just amazing, I love it! Her release is super crazy.
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Aww, thanks! I loved coming up with her design... men-o'-war are just such interesting creatures!
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wow i like her *_* erm..do u do requests ?? n_n
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Thanks! 
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okay i have the same problem XD
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This. Is. BOSS.
Btw, what did you use? Photoshop or Sai? I needs to know because it's not fun being cheeky with MS Paint -__-;;
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Really, thanks!
Photoshop. I wish I had SAI, but Mom won't let me download it... still, Photoshop's a good painting tool.
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Ohs 
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Got it from a CD. ^^ Mom wanted it for her architecture work, but I'm the one that uses it most. It makes painting so easy!
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Congratulations for winning! I knew you would do it.
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Aww, thank you! Congrats for winning as well- I'm really not surprised, 'cause your guy was awesome. ^^
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Wow incredible character. You went all out here. Awesome art and you did a hell of a job wih the bio. You thoughtof every little thing. With the powers and everything. A little jealous.
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Wow, thank you! ^^ I have to agree, I think I did go all out... I'm just obsessed with OCs, so it's kind of a habit by now... XD
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Well your very good at it. Maybe you should become a character designer. You think of every little detail possible.
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... You know, that's a distinct possibility... I certainly get enough practice at it! XD
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Nope. Sierra will be- and that's about enough punishment I'm going to inflict on you guys. XD I've already got your opponents all figured out, and adding Ria would just mess it all up, because there's no-one left that's powerful enough to stand against her once you take Kantana, Yukiya, Yoko, Kaji, Katsuki, Shanookami, and Ouka out of the way...
^^ Any other questions, while I'm inspired? XD
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Ok ^_^
Nope...Because I can't think of any ^_^;
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Ah, I see. ^^ Well, feel free to comment if you suddenly think of any. ^^
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Oh yeah an obvious one;
When is Chp.3 out? D:
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Obvious question with an obvious answer- when I finish it.
Hopefully within the next couple of weeks, that is... I make no promises, what with school and stuff...
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I'm writing it now, so maybe sooner than I said. ^^
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The art is amazing! 
I'm reeeeally sorry I have to do this, but my Puerto Rican heritage and Spanish grammar Nazi-ism are commanding me to take over for a minute....
Her release command, "Desgarrar" is in the improper form for a command. What you have right now is "to tear," which is an infinitive verb. Infinitive Verbs in Spanish are always conjugated into the correct form, for a command or simply depending on who is doing the action. In case you want to put "Desgarrar" into a command form, try using "Desgarra", which simply means "tear."...simply dropping the "r". 
Okay now I'm back to normal.
I'm pretty sure that this contest won't be based on accuracy for Spanish translation and grammar, but seeing unconjugated verbs like that bothers me for some weird reason. 
I think I have OCD.
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No, thanks for that! I only learnt Spanish for about three months, and thsat was years ago, so what I have I got from an online translation site, and we all know how accurate those are... ^^'
I shall edit that now...
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Online translators suck. 
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Yes, they do. ^^ Unfortunate thing is that that's where I get most of my translations from.
Now I don't know what conjugate means... I probably should, but I don't...
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COnjugate just means "change the form of." When you change the form of a verb, you change it depending on who is doing the action. There's one for "I *insert very here*, you *insert verb here*, they *insert verb here*, we *insert verb here*" etc. etc. it's weird like that. xD
Seriously, if I were one of the ones in charge of this contest, I'd give out extra credit to everyone who used the right commands.
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Oh, I see.
XD everyone has their little moments where their perfectionism shows. ^^ If I were the contest holder, I woulda given extra credit to the people who worked their OC out in detail...
But no-one really did that, so it's just as well I'm not in charge...
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Ah well, we're gonna see what happens. xDDD I wonder how they're going to determine winners anyway? It's exciting!
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Yes, it is so exciting waiting! I can't wait to find out...
Oh well. Wanna pick winners based on your own criteria? XD (The things I do to fill in time...)
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Possibly. :3 I'm kinda busy....
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So was my sister- and I gathered, from the fact that she spent the next ten minutes screaming like a baby. ^^
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Was the one that got you alive? The one that got my sister was dead... still hurt though, 'cause she sat on it...
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yea it was alive lol she sat on it xD
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Owch! Sissy was lucky hers was dead. ^^
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