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Published: 2019-05-21 19:37:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 58349; Favourites: 375; Downloads: 183
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Third and final part to the HIM trilogy.Related content
Comments: 12
rhodry11 [2023-06-24 13:58:54 +0000 UTC]
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typewriter17 [2023-03-22 08:35:12 +0000 UTC]
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typewriter17 [2022-06-27 07:23:21 +0000 UTC]
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genderstorm [2021-02-06 12:49:52 +0000 UTC]
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lostmedic232 [2020-12-25 02:40:01 +0000 UTC]
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Misssimone [2019-06-11 20:52:27 +0000 UTC]
The idea is very good. It feels like a very good story. I agree with another comment that the colors can be a bit distracting. If you would like some help with that I wouldn't mind giving a few suggestions. But I was impressed with the dialogue of the story. Most dialogue-heavy captions like this feel so cliche but I was impressed. I honestly want to see the final result of that final "visit"
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XSlashe [2019-05-28 12:02:53 +0000 UTC]
The red text on that shade of background is messing with my eyes
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Kenneth2Willow In reply to XSlashe [2019-05-28 13:31:56 +0000 UTC]
Sorry! Didn’t mean to make it so bright!
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XSlashe In reply to Kenneth2Willow [2019-05-31 02:33:24 +0000 UTC]
No worries haha. Just wanted to give some feedback for future ones
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