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Published: 2019-01-03 21:45:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 15358; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 28
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ANOTHER ENTRY FOR THE FIGHTING GAME 63 CONTEST. Let's go it took forever to do this. By the way, I do love MHA, and my main fighter and best girl is Ochako.GAME- My Hero One's Justice
TRANSFORMATION- Morris Hemmingway to Momo, Geoff Lando to Ururaka.
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Comments: 8
This is a pretty fun one. Unlike the other entry there's a clear method of conversion, and the dialogue is some great fun. It's not super original and the art isn't the best, but overall I think it's some nice stuff.
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Yeah this is much better than the first. Emily is a particularly fun character for something like this. The facial expressions are also good and help your style's personality a lot. This one flows much better especially with Emily's constant narration and quips. the added two sequences into the comic give you some effort points as well. There isnt much else to say besides the polish mentioned on the other. That and the change itself is a bit basic 'guys playing game turn into characters being played.'
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Thanks for the critique! I'm glad you enjoyed Emily, and I will work harder on my art style to work smooth it out.
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So in this one the writing really shined through. I loved how you wrote the announcer's annoyed dialogue(even if you forgot to capitalize or punctuate some of her bubbles) and the way you did this stood out for me at least. I already harped on your art in the previous entry, so again just keep working at it because while I like your expressions, there's a lot of improvement needed in the rest of the bodies, your backgrounds, and the dialogue bubbles themselves which are awkwardly made and make the good dialogue feel less impactful when the bubble is drawing the eye away. But I think your writing is strong here and once your art matches I think you could be a serious contender in the future. Thanks for entering.
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Wonderful sense of humor, and really well-done transitions for both characters! My biggest criticism is that you forgot about the real best girl: Jirou.
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Another nice one. Good comedy, and your art style is very interesting.
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