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Published: 2015-04-16 18:34:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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I'm trying to keep my style and faces consistent so I thought I'd practice drawing all my character's faces.Some of them were ehhhhhhh.
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And suddenly, a friendly critique!
These are wonderful faces man, I'm really digging your style. Though I do think I'll go ahead and point out a few things!
The first row fellow - None of the noses here match! They're at various roundness and at various heights on the face! (at least the 3 to the left), the far left's nose is pointy(not to mention, a little too high up), the one next to that is a little more rounded off, and the one to the right of that one is completely round! (and really low compared to the other two!) If I were you, I'd definitely experiment a little more with your style's interpretation of nose angles and try to get them a little more consistent.
The dashing fellow in the second row - Getting better! I like this guy! The only thing I feel the desperate need to point out is the forehead, though. Just for funsies, you should pull your bangs up backwards and look in the mirror and take a gander at just how big your forehead is! He definitely needs more forehead space if his hair is gonna be slicked back. Other than that, great job! Just work on tightening up the consistency between the angles as much as you can!
Bottom Row smug dude - He looks great. Awesome job.
Looking forward to seeing what this turns into man.
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Thank you Dylan!
Seeing this big block of text scared me at first, but it was real needed advice!
Yeah you're right they don't match it's something I really notice until you pointed it out.
As for the second guy yeah his head is all kinda strange I always wanted him to have slicked back hair but it was always too difficult to draw in different angkes, it's still challenging but I'm determined to make it work.
And thank you, as you probably saw this is like my third interpretation (not including unseen drafts) of this guy. It's feels good to finally have a design down.
Thanks again Dylan, I hope to hear more of your critiques in the future!
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You're welcome! And I'm glad to hear it! You will.
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I'm loving the look of this style kev! I can't wait to see what this becomes!
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Ahhhhhh!! Thank you Nathan!
I might be releasing a short comic next month could be pushed further.
I'm just working out the concepts and praciting a lot of stuff.
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none of them are ehhhhhhh. your style is original. good line work it's so clean and crisp. i love seeing your artwork
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Hey thanks man! That's really great to hear!
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