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One Page Wonder -The Dark Lord-Written By the IntenseΒ Kevin Lee McDougall ,
Illustrated By the Fabulous AaronMinier
Lettered by the Legendary Kurt Hathaway
"He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. And when you gaze long into an abyss the abyss also gazes into you." -Friedrich Nietzsche
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You can find the script here: One Page Wonder - The Dark Lord Script -
One Page Wonder
The Dark Lord
By Bradon Wolf
www.bradonwolf.deviantart.com
PANEL ONE (row one): Two bloodied and bruised warriors stand in a dark graveyard, meters apart, facing each other, ready to reengage their mighty battle. One of them has a shaved head, cold light blue eyes, and holds the demeanor of one who's put to death those who lie beneath him. This is Kazel, and his attire is reflective of an overly grand mage. The other character is Treus. He has medium length hair, puppy dog brown eyes, and is attired in bedraggled threads.
1. KAZEL: And so, our fight continues!
2. TREUS: And so it will until you are buried beneath me.
PANEL TWO (row two): Close on Kazel, simpered, pleased with himself.
3. KAZEL: Hmph...you do realise that the saint can never defeat the sinner?
PANEL THREE (row two): Close on Treus, head bowed in introspection.
4. TREUS: I'm no saint...and that is why I will defeat you.
PANEL FOUR (row two): Wide angle of the face
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Comments: 26
TimNykyri [2016-11-30 18:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Well... Here again so much staff in the ether, will back again.Β
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MasteroftheSword [2015-09-20 19:46:17 +0000 UTC]
ASTONISHING!
Awesome story and really beautiful art!
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KevinMcDougall In reply to MasteroftheSword [2015-09-20 20:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the lovely comments!Β Β
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MasteroftheSword In reply to KevinMcDougall [2015-09-20 20:27:27 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure!
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vator69 [2011-07-15 14:18:46 +0000 UTC]
I was just thinking. When you decide to add colour.Don't add dark colours. I think that's a bad idea. It's already a dark page so adding dark colours would be too much. Lighter would work better.
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 14:34:03 +0000 UTC]
Uh? It's not going to be coloured.
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 14:46:50 +0000 UTC]
In that case, with the dialogue. It looks very good. I was a bit unsure about some of the dialogue. But that also goes very well with the panels.
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 14:59:42 +0000 UTC]
You mean the appearance of the lettering, or are you talking about the actual dialogue?
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formerlyknownasviola [2011-07-15 12:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Excellent The script and the illustrations come together for a great effect.
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KevinMcDougall In reply to formerlyknownasviola [2011-07-15 12:13:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm very pleased you liked em'. Thank you for taking the time to view and comment.
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formerlyknownasviola In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:17:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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vator69 [2011-07-15 12:09:07 +0000 UTC]
Actually it looks better than i remember it doing. Last time was there dialogue?
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:17:08 +0000 UTC]
Better with the dialogue. Hope you're still appreciating my input
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 12:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Craig. Your input is always very much appreciated.
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:07:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't know whether your being sarcastic or not. If so grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr if not gggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I spose i could go into greater detail about it buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut i remember telling you about this piece before. Looking good.
Think i'm gggggggggggetting aaaaaaaaaaaaaarthiritis iiiiiiiiiiiiin mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmy rrrrrrrrrrrright hhhhhhhhhhhhhhand
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 12:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Sarcastic about the comment on the script page. You've commented on the wrong page, and now you've got me commenting on the wrong bloody page. Great! Hahah
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:15:51 +0000 UTC]
I didn't. I remember this. Just not sure it had any dialogue last time.
Now who's broken who's heart?
I'm confused, thanks a lot.
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 12:17:44 +0000 UTC]
****** hell, I'm really confused now.
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:20:23 +0000 UTC]
New topic, new topic. Downloaded skype yet?
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KevinMcDougall In reply to vator69 [2011-07-15 12:08:36 +0000 UTC]
Of course I was being sarcastic.
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vator69 In reply to KevinMcDougall [2011-07-15 12:11:02 +0000 UTC]
In that case grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
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